for Expired?5/16/2012 c4 
3Supreme Bookworm
Okay, I have to first say thanks for the super-fast date. But the chapter seemed more like a filler. A little disappointing but oh well. Don't worry about updating; take as much time as you need to get other things done. Bye!
3Supreme BookwormOkay, I have to first say thanks for the super-fast date. But the chapter seemed more like a filler. A little disappointing but oh well. Don't worry about updating; take as much time as you need to get other things done. Bye!
5/16/2012 c3 SimplyHope
I can't beleive you just did that! I definitely want her to live! Don't kill her or make enter another body. Great chapter, although the beginning of it was slightly confusing. Except for that, really well done. Keep it up!
I can't beleive you just did that! I definitely want her to live! Don't kill her or make enter another body. Great chapter, although the beginning of it was slightly confusing. Except for that, really well done. Keep it up!
5/16/2012 c3 Supreme Bookworm
First of all, thank you sooooooo much for updating so quickly. And second of all... DON"T YOU EVEN THINK ABOUT KILLING MAX OFF LIKE THAT! In fact, don't kill her off at all! Or at least have her be revived! But please for the love of FanFiction, DON"T KILL OFF MAX PERMENATELY! Anyway, hope this helps you decide!
P.S. I know I spelled Permenately wrong. Oh well!
First of all, thank you sooooooo much for updating so quickly. And second of all... DON"T YOU EVEN THINK ABOUT KILLING MAX OFF LIKE THAT! In fact, don't kill her off at all! Or at least have her be revived! But please for the love of FanFiction, DON"T KILL OFF MAX PERMENATELY! Anyway, hope this helps you decide!
P.S. I know I spelled Permenately wrong. Oh well!
5/15/2012 c2 SimplyHope
Great start! I'm loving this story after only two chapters. I need to see what happens when the NCIS group sees Max's wings! UPDATE soon! This is seriously good!
Great start! I'm loving this story after only two chapters. I need to see what happens when the NCIS group sees Max's wings! UPDATE soon! This is seriously good!
5/15/2012 c2 Supreme Bookworm
OMG, this is soooooooooo good! Love the first two chapters! LOL when Max jumped off the room! Classic move! Please update soon!
BTW, whose the director in this? Is it Jenny or Leon? Personally, Jenny is my favourite. But it doesn't matter who you chose cause it's your story.
OMG, this is soooooooooo good! Love the first two chapters! LOL when Max jumped off the room! Classic move! Please update soon!
BTW, whose the director in this? Is it Jenny or Leon? Personally, Jenny is my favourite. But it doesn't matter who you chose cause it's your story.