for Naruto: Heir of the Juppongatana9/19/2024 c8 
2naruto2020
i dont even know whats happening, the only good story u have written is regret but im beginning to douab u even wrote it.
2naruto2020i dont even know whats happening, the only good story u have written is regret but im beginning to douab u even wrote it.
2/10/2024 c28 15Leaf Ranger
Glad to see the traitors got put down hard, but this other group is annoying. HOpefully they too will share the fate of the tratiors. Arrogant bastards like them don't deserve to escape.
Guess we'll see, won't we?
Good work, here, keep it up!
15Leaf RangerGlad to see the traitors got put down hard, but this other group is annoying. HOpefully they too will share the fate of the tratiors. Arrogant bastards like them don't deserve to escape.
Guess we'll see, won't we?
Good work, here, keep it up!
1/31/2024 c28 10Rictor Yagami
I just read the newest chapter again and this was awesome! Natsuhi kicked some ass this chapter and showed what it means to be a real leader to the village unlike those traitors like that piece of shit Yotaka. I feel bad for both Natushi and Sumaru as they both lost someone very dear to them, which was Hotarubi. But then one of Sumaru's friends died and it pissed me off that Hokuto was killed by that bastard Yotaka. At least Natsuhi blew the pricks arm off and then he died after being stabbed in the back, literally, by Shura and then died as Shura took that stupid meteorite from him.
As for Kakashi I hope he can join with Team 7 to help out after he finishes off those pricks from the Watari clan. Also that one part with where Natsuhi said Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura looked ridiculous fighting in their pajama's was funny.
At least they got some new gear on to wear but let's hope they didn't lose all of their clothes. Plus it's like these guys can't have one normal mission without crazy shit happening which is kind of funny.
Anyway it looks like Naruto and his team are in for a serious fight and I hope Sumaru can help out against that asshole Shura. Hopefully they get that stupid meteorite back and honestly it should be destroyed as it's more trouble then it's worth.
This is getting good and I hope to see more.
Good Luck Rider Of Armageddon.
10Rictor YagamiI just read the newest chapter again and this was awesome! Natsuhi kicked some ass this chapter and showed what it means to be a real leader to the village unlike those traitors like that piece of shit Yotaka. I feel bad for both Natushi and Sumaru as they both lost someone very dear to them, which was Hotarubi. But then one of Sumaru's friends died and it pissed me off that Hokuto was killed by that bastard Yotaka. At least Natsuhi blew the pricks arm off and then he died after being stabbed in the back, literally, by Shura and then died as Shura took that stupid meteorite from him.
As for Kakashi I hope he can join with Team 7 to help out after he finishes off those pricks from the Watari clan. Also that one part with where Natsuhi said Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura looked ridiculous fighting in their pajama's was funny.
At least they got some new gear on to wear but let's hope they didn't lose all of their clothes. Plus it's like these guys can't have one normal mission without crazy shit happening which is kind of funny.
Anyway it looks like Naruto and his team are in for a serious fight and I hope Sumaru can help out against that asshole Shura. Hopefully they get that stupid meteorite back and honestly it should be destroyed as it's more trouble then it's worth.
This is getting good and I hope to see more.
Good Luck Rider Of Armageddon.
1/26/2024 c28 Unnatural Reader
Always glad to see this story updated even if the chapter was a bit shorter than usual. Keep up the awesome work
Always glad to see this story updated even if the chapter was a bit shorter than usual. Keep up the awesome work
1/26/2024 c28 volcasiron30
great job on the new chapter can't wait to see the next one hope it comes out soon
great job on the new chapter can't wait to see the next one hope it comes out soon
1/25/2024 c28 101VFSNAKE
YAY! You updated. Glad you did. Don't worry you'll get back into the swing of things. Looking forward to seeing more of this play out. Star is going but the light remains. They should never have used that meteorite if it's not healthy. What is the point of ruling over a village if your lifespan is short and everyone around you is essentially a dead person walking?
101VFSNAKEYAY! You updated. Glad you did. Don't worry you'll get back into the swing of things. Looking forward to seeing more of this play out. Star is going but the light remains. They should never have used that meteorite if it's not healthy. What is the point of ruling over a village if your lifespan is short and everyone around you is essentially a dead person walking?
1/11/2024 c27 mothefcking oak
Man, this story is great! Was kinda sad after the first half of it that Zabuza and the Bozo brothers barely had screen time but their Water arc made up for it! Still waiting to see Naruto fulfill his promise and get to know them! Love them being comedic relief.
Can't wait for more!
Man, this story is great! Was kinda sad after the first half of it that Zabuza and the Bozo brothers barely had screen time but their Water arc made up for it! Still waiting to see Naruto fulfill his promise and get to know them! Love them being comedic relief.
Can't wait for more!
10/1/2023 c27 15Leaf Ranger
I am sorry to hear about your father. That is...really rough. Really terrible. Sorry.
And...well aside from the bad guys taking the village (at least for now), good chapter over all Well done. Hopefully though the bastards pay for this. I'd hate to see them be able to claim any kind of victory from this, and am hoping your plan is they all die painfully and soon.
Guess we'll see, won't we? Keep up the good work.
15Leaf RangerI am sorry to hear about your father. That is...really rough. Really terrible. Sorry.
And...well aside from the bad guys taking the village (at least for now), good chapter over all Well done. Hopefully though the bastards pay for this. I'd hate to see them be able to claim any kind of victory from this, and am hoping your plan is they all die painfully and soon.
Guess we'll see, won't we? Keep up the good work.
7/22/2023 c27 xX kelrim Xx
Ótimo história, até que fim alguém está fazendo algo diferente! Muito boa o capítulo e por favor faça a tayuya fazer parte do harém do sasuke. Karin no entanto... não precisa estar viva kkkk
Ótimo história, até que fim alguém está fazendo algo diferente! Muito boa o capítulo e por favor faça a tayuya fazer parte do harém do sasuke. Karin no entanto... não precisa estar viva kkkk
7/14/2023 c27 1Blaze501st
Welcome back. i am very happy to see ur return and I look forward to more updates. i am sorry to hear about ur father, and am Praying for you and your family to heal. Don't feel pressured to update. take all the time u need to process and heal.
1Blaze501stWelcome back. i am very happy to see ur return and I look forward to more updates. i am sorry to hear about ur father, and am Praying for you and your family to heal. Don't feel pressured to update. take all the time u need to process and heal.
7/11/2023 c27 10Rictor Yagami
The first thing I want to say before I review is I'm sorry to hear that you lost your father and you along with your family and friends have my condolences Armageddon. I know what it's like to lose a family member as I lost my sister a couple of years ago. I hope you can get through this and take all the time you need to get through this. I really hope things will be all right for you.
As for this chapter all I have to say is it was awesome. The scene between Haku and Hinata was just funny as I was expecting them to take it outside plus I honestly felt bad for both Tora and Oakmi as those two had to run for cover. Hopefully these two ladies can work things out as they both love Naruto and it seems that Hinata may discover she is bisexual. Naruto you lucky bastard.
The next scene I enjoyed was how you gave more character background for the Senju Clan as their background was barely covered by Kishimoto's dumbass as he was too busy making the Uchiha Clan look like the perfect ninja's. Hell all the other shinobi clans deseverd to have a better background development.
I was confused about Moegi as I thought she was an original character but when I googled her name I found out it was one of Konohamaru's friends. I just checked about her again once more to read her file on the Naruto wiki and I was just like holy shit she has the wood release?! I thought it was something you gave her for an idea but I was wrong.
Then there is the battle going on in Hoshigakure and I seriously hope that prick Shura and his band of assholes get what's coming to them soon. Innocent lives are getting taken because of those two cunts Shiso and Yotaka with their fanatic bullshit. Just glad Naruto killed Yotaka in a painful manner.
I will admit it sucks that Sumaru's father Hotarubi died in this but after reading your authors notes I understand why you did what you did. I really hope that Sumaru can get through this and I hope Kakashi and Team 7 can win this.
This has been a great chapter and I'm looking forward to more.
Good Luck Fifth Rider of Armageddon.
10Rictor YagamiThe first thing I want to say before I review is I'm sorry to hear that you lost your father and you along with your family and friends have my condolences Armageddon. I know what it's like to lose a family member as I lost my sister a couple of years ago. I hope you can get through this and take all the time you need to get through this. I really hope things will be all right for you.
As for this chapter all I have to say is it was awesome. The scene between Haku and Hinata was just funny as I was expecting them to take it outside plus I honestly felt bad for both Tora and Oakmi as those two had to run for cover. Hopefully these two ladies can work things out as they both love Naruto and it seems that Hinata may discover she is bisexual. Naruto you lucky bastard.
The next scene I enjoyed was how you gave more character background for the Senju Clan as their background was barely covered by Kishimoto's dumbass as he was too busy making the Uchiha Clan look like the perfect ninja's. Hell all the other shinobi clans deseverd to have a better background development.
I was confused about Moegi as I thought she was an original character but when I googled her name I found out it was one of Konohamaru's friends. I just checked about her again once more to read her file on the Naruto wiki and I was just like holy shit she has the wood release?! I thought it was something you gave her for an idea but I was wrong.
Then there is the battle going on in Hoshigakure and I seriously hope that prick Shura and his band of assholes get what's coming to them soon. Innocent lives are getting taken because of those two cunts Shiso and Yotaka with their fanatic bullshit. Just glad Naruto killed Yotaka in a painful manner.
I will admit it sucks that Sumaru's father Hotarubi died in this but after reading your authors notes I understand why you did what you did. I really hope that Sumaru can get through this and I hope Kakashi and Team 7 can win this.
This has been a great chapter and I'm looking forward to more.
Good Luck Fifth Rider of Armageddon.
7/11/2023 c27 8Shisarakage
Losing family is never to be taken lightly. Take all the time you need, my friend.
8ShisarakageLosing family is never to be taken lightly. Take all the time you need, my friend.