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6/5/2012 c5 9MegaDarkly
Heh... I found the Fanfiction title in this chapter. I was wondering how long it would take until you wrote that in there.

Good chapter bro. It's getting me anxious to read what happens next.
6/5/2012 c5 Chupii
supreme Leader! awesome chapter, with epic fluffness, please continue! i was freaking out for a sec that the story was going to end. please update soon. thanks.
6/5/2012 c5 Mzr90
Ok great chapter like the feelings shared and bonds made but gotta say I really really hate you for that cliffhanger. Can't wait to see Konoha's reaction to their newest couple.
6/5/2012 c5 3Sabaku Ookami
...it's a great chapter... lots of fluffiness but without going overkill on it.

As for Tsunade showing up... somehow I think of a parent walking in when it's the worst time to do so. It gave me a few chuckles when it happened, didn't expect it though.
6/1/2012 c4 Chupii
i really really am emjoying this story, completely unique to what i normally its truly refreshing, a character that i think no one has done before in a relationship with naruto.

Its a first for me to read a story that skips most of the major events and focuses on two characters relationship, this is an awesome story and i really love your work, i look forward to many more chapters. thank you!
5/31/2012 c1 Darthme1011
it should be I flunked the Clone Jutsu every time. not I flunked the Shadow Clone Jutsu every time
5/29/2012 c4 5Tenma Sosei
Damn I officially Like this pairing. Amazing fluffy moments between the two as well as the lemon. Keep it going this story is a true work of art.
5/29/2012 c3 Tenma Sosei
Heh i'm already liking this pairing. :3
5/29/2012 c1 Tenma Sosei
...Truly amazing.
5/27/2012 c1 2Rikudou-75
This is a good story I loge this rare couple also and how there relationship is progressing! Thanks for the review on my story too. By the way!
5/26/2012 c4 2Shihouin Shunshin
The lemon didnt feel out of place at all, it rather felt like an emotional gambit. Tsubaki was overwhelmed by Naruto breaking infront of her, and 'threw all the cards onto the table' to try and atleast balance Naruto out.

Whilst yes, people may complain that having sex so quickly COULD ruin the romance aspect of the relationship, it honestly happens alot more than people care to realize, and as such, isnt a completely "why yoo rush that" thing.

Cant wait to see more, :)
5/24/2012 c4 1Gruffard
Looking forward to more. I like how this story works like a behind the scenes of the main story. At least to this chapter. With Sakura in trouble and Lemon at the end the story will most likely branch now.

I am a bit worried about how this might change the story from here. Without Shikamaru's we need to carry our sensei's dreams speech... I do not know if the pain event will still play out. But I think something similar can happen with Tsubaki.

Thanks for the great read.
5/23/2012 c4 Unkoman
Great story. I personally appreciate the meaningful lemon. You don't get a lot of those these day that don't usually turn into something out of a porno movie. I also like how you built on a thrown away minor character instead of making an original character, I blatantly have a dislike for them have so many bad experience with them. I wish just more people would follow you example with this. Keep up of the good work.
5/22/2012 c4 Ender Vilt
Thinking about it Jiraiya's final act getting Naruto laid. Something he couldnt do while alive he did it only after his death.. truely a nice piece of story telling. (and not a bad lemon as well not over the top not something that takes two pages to read. just a short bit showing a passion and comfort.)
5/22/2012 c4 davethedark
great chapter :D

update soon :D
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