
12/2/2014 c5 9 fan
THIS STORY IS SMASHING! Keep up the good work my friend! And god be with you. :)
THIS STORY IS SMASHING! Keep up the good work my friend! And god be with you. :)
9/17/2012 c4 Guest
2 is soooooo CUTE & SWEET! :D
2 is soooooo CUTE & SWEET! :D
9/8/2012 c5
63Freida Right
So factual; yet so gosh darned adorable! 8D
I've done several things from the twin's pov's, though usually as part of bigger things. The first scene of /The Other Eyes Saga/ is their point of view; /Faith Journey/ and /Suddenly, A Star/ are mostly from their point of view; parts of /Prodigal/ are from 3's point of view, though they are mostly in the middle, towards the end, and 4 isn't with him.
If it helps... I don't know if it does, exactly... :/

So factual; yet so gosh darned adorable! 8D
I've done several things from the twin's pov's, though usually as part of bigger things. The first scene of /The Other Eyes Saga/ is their point of view; /Faith Journey/ and /Suddenly, A Star/ are mostly from their point of view; parts of /Prodigal/ are from 3's point of view, though they are mostly in the middle, towards the end, and 4 isn't with him.
If it helps... I don't know if it does, exactly... :/
9/8/2012 c5
7CreativeSkull
Well the twins are certainly happy. I think you did pretty good writing in their P.O.V.

Well the twins are certainly happy. I think you did pretty good writing in their P.O.V.
9/8/2012 c5
13PoppyECM.6-13
:P :P :P You updated! XD ! AND YES YOU GOT THE VOICE (Even though the twins don't have voices . ) RIGHT! STOP WORRYING! WKCUCBYOUYOHSUHFKCGTUTUHNKDX FHGKBRCEYKHGA! EPIC update! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AND if you're doing another chapter with the twins and their books, i want you to put a few perticular books in there for me. PM ME! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH !

:P :P :P You updated! XD ! AND YES YOU GOT THE VOICE (Even though the twins don't have voices . ) RIGHT! STOP WORRYING! WKCUCBYOUYOHSUHFKCGTUTUHNKDX FHGKBRCEYKHGA! EPIC update! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AND if you're doing another chapter with the twins and their books, i want you to put a few perticular books in there for me. PM ME! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH !
9/1/2012 c4
16lady of the wilds
i was just about to finally go to sleep when i saw this in my alert box. Damn you! (in a good way XD) now i will never get to sleep!
wonderful charater by the way glad to see you back

i was just about to finally go to sleep when i saw this in my alert box. Damn you! (in a good way XD) now i will never get to sleep!
wonderful charater by the way glad to see you back
9/1/2012 c4
7CreativeSkull
I was kinda worried you'd forgotten about this story. Yay for 2, finding the hardware store! I have a feeling they're all going to in that place for a while.

I was kinda worried you'd forgotten about this story. Yay for 2, finding the hardware store! I have a feeling they're all going to in that place for a while.
7/23/2012 c3
16lady of the wilds
oh what kind of trouble will they all get into?
keep it up, i can't wait for more!

oh what kind of trouble will they all get into?
keep it up, i can't wait for more!
7/23/2012 c2
13PoppyECM.6-13
awwww 5's such a fraidy cat! and LOVE 6 collapsing even though it was only random and tiny XD !
One think though, you might want to put "The eight of us..." instead of "The 8 of us..."
XD XD XD

awwww 5's such a fraidy cat! and LOVE 6 collapsing even though it was only random and tiny XD !
One think though, you might want to put "The eight of us..." instead of "The 8 of us..."
XD XD XD
5/17/2012 c1
63Freida Right
This is going to be interesting and fun. I can feel it! I can't wait for more! ;)

This is going to be interesting and fun. I can feel it! I can't wait for more! ;)
5/17/2012 c1
415 Lucca Hunter
What's good:
the way 1 is rambly and sulky, it suits his character
What's not so good:
It's too hard to criticize. I can't find anything wrong with it
:(
So basically it needs to be more rubbish so I can pretend to be Simon Cowell. :)
Favourite quote:
They respect me like cats respect dogs: they don't.
I'm trying to put my reviews like this now so it's more helpful to the author!

What's good:
the way 1 is rambly and sulky, it suits his character
What's not so good:
It's too hard to criticize. I can't find anything wrong with it
:(
So basically it needs to be more rubbish so I can pretend to be Simon Cowell. :)
Favourite quote:
They respect me like cats respect dogs: they don't.
I'm trying to put my reviews like this now so it's more helpful to the author!