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7/18/2012 c1 1silver.rain.854
The poem is really good :D

I like the third stanza especially, it's really descriptive and the sounds are pretty to say.

I'm no expert in poetry, so I'm not sure if my constructive feedback is anything to pay attention to, but I think the simple statements at the beginning and the end might have been emphasised more if there had been a few more stanzas in between them.

But you really did do a good job! Keep writing!
7/4/2012 c1 Guest
WOAH! this is pretty intense gurlie... good job! :D The second stanza is the best one. the words have a really good flow.

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6/30/2012 c1 5artist quest
This is really good!
6/23/2012 c1 lovelizgillies
i think this described what it would feel like perfectly, well done:-)x
5/18/2012 c1 I Quit I'm gone now Bye
This is really good, I think it really captures the...essence of the Avoxes. And thanks for reviewing my poem...thing. It's not really that great in my eyes, but I'm glad you liked it!

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