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8/13/2016 c7 sweetcxrtis
I like it. Nice story.
7/8/2016 c7 Person
OMG YOU HAFTA UPDATE! It has been THREE years and I wanna see the next chapter! The LEAST you could do is tell us if this is a discontinued/dead fic!
7/8/2016 c3 Person
"Steve? What's a whore?" XD omg I died
5/21/2015 c7 4bookwriter123456
Can't wait for you to update!
7/1/2014 c7 fanfictiondotnet
Aww it was just getting good! Please finish it; its been a year and three months!
6/30/2014 c7 4Danny-Shells
Funny story! Hmmm, I think Socs could be cool, depending on how you play it. Like the Socs are just planning on attacking the older greasers, but the greasers freak out when Denise is threatened.
8/25/2013 c7 Secret Storywriter
I am really, really enjoying this story! I actually think it's somewhat realistic and I love the way you're having Denise go from one person in the gang to the next because it's fun to see how they each act. I'm especially looking forward to Darry. Also looking forward to Soda's reaction when he finds out that Denise even went to Dally and sassed him!

Anyway, the thing about the socs - I think you can add them in the story as long as you think you'll be able to find a way out of it. It probably wouldn't be a good idea to just pick one and then go with it without considering the ending.

I know it's been a few months since you have updated this story, but I really hope you do finish it.

To be honest, I read "Uncovering the Truth" first and since I really enjoyed your writing, I decided to check out some of your other stories.

Good luck writing!
7/12/2013 c7 SaySomethingNiceDarling
aw cute look how she took to johnny so quickly about as quick as soda if not more so. oh boy the two are gonna flip when they see her gone
7/12/2013 c6 SaySomethingNiceDarling
god love this this I like how she talks to dally and didn't start crying when he snapped at her I like how he is oddly protective of her ad that they have similar looks for some reason also
7/12/2013 c4 SaySomethingNiceDarling
I kind of picture her doing that thing Julian did in that big daddy movie the adam sandler when he played card or I picture her being really good for a kid
7/12/2013 c3 SaySomethingNiceDarling
haha I knew she would ask something like that! god this kid is awesome. oh jesus dallas is next I think he will be most interesting beside johnny actually who knows what the kid will pick up on hanging with dallas I almost feel bad for her
7/12/2013 c2 SaySomethingNiceDarling
oh god she is adorable
7/12/2013 c1 SaySomethingNiceDarling
oh jeez they are going to have no idea what to do with a little girl
5/26/2013 c7 22Lady of the Spirit
Personally, I cannot wait for the next chapter. Its going to be so fun!
5/12/2013 c7 Guest
:) update soon please. It would be interesting if there was socs
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