for Within My World5/10/2016 c1 Kitty
Man, that was intense, but really good! I ship Maria and Loki so much~
Man, that was intense, but really good! I ship Maria and Loki so much~
10/11/2014 c1 
89babyvfan
Oh dear friggering God.
I'm honestly at loss for words. You pretty much stole my words
89babyvfanOh dear friggering God.
I'm honestly at loss for words. You pretty much stole my words
5/1/2013 c1 4DragonScaleXV
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Well, shit. O.O
That... was awesome. Gruesome, angsty, and very, VERY cruel, but awesome. This was an awesome piece of work, my friend.
4DragonScaleXV...
Well, shit. O.O
That... was awesome. Gruesome, angsty, and very, VERY cruel, but awesome. This was an awesome piece of work, my friend.
12/22/2012 c1 15Maddie Rose
I absolutely love your portrayal of Loki, he's just so in-character, and everything he says I can completely imagine. Also I had never really thought of the idea of Maria/Loki until now, but it fits so beautifully. I love how much Loki has to be in control of every situation, control people. It was also clever how you had him in Maria's dreams, it was something a little Inception-like but with your own original touch on it, of course! Overall, if you couldn't already tell, I loved this :)
15Maddie RoseI absolutely love your portrayal of Loki, he's just so in-character, and everything he says I can completely imagine. Also I had never really thought of the idea of Maria/Loki until now, but it fits so beautifully. I love how much Loki has to be in control of every situation, control people. It was also clever how you had him in Maria's dreams, it was something a little Inception-like but with your own original touch on it, of course! Overall, if you couldn't already tell, I loved this :)
11/18/2012 c1 the-lovely-madness
Wow...so dark and disturbing. Fantastic writing. I felt her fear at giving up her control while I was reading. Truly haunting - great work.
Wow...so dark and disturbing. Fantastic writing. I felt her fear at giving up her control while I was reading. Truly haunting - great work.
11/18/2012 c1 52duwangs
This was wonderfully written. I've never really thought about Maria/Loki until now, but now you've certainly caught my interest. Now to read other Loki/Maria!
52duwangsThis was wonderfully written. I've never really thought about Maria/Loki until now, but now you've certainly caught my interest. Now to read other Loki/Maria!
8/23/2012 c1 6Ri696q
Oh. Wow. I am almost at a loss for words here. So dark, so amazing. I really whish I could give you a long review, but as it is now, I really don't know what to say beside that this is fucking brilliant.
6Ri696qOh. Wow. I am almost at a loss for words here. So dark, so amazing. I really whish I could give you a long review, but as it is now, I really don't know what to say beside that this is fucking brilliant.
7/15/2012 c1 12noukinav018
Yap. That was dark all right. Wish there were other fics of this pair, but not dark at all XD
Geez and she just resigned herself with a finality that made gasp in disbelief!
So he gets his pet, but if it were a multi chapter story I guess he'll entangled in his own game, even if he insists to lie to himself. XD
12noukinav018Yap. That was dark all right. Wish there were other fics of this pair, but not dark at all XD
Geez and she just resigned herself with a finality that made gasp in disbelief!
So he gets his pet, but if it were a multi chapter story I guess he'll entangled in his own game, even if he insists to lie to himself. XD
7/3/2012 c1 269Hawkflight7
So sweet and passionate at the same time. Loved this! You should continue it.
269Hawkflight7So sweet and passionate at the same time. Loved this! You should continue it.