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2/22/2017 c14 1Bearmauls
That was really rather excellent. Some of the middle chapters were a bit difficult to track, but I understand that was part of the intent. I really like the overall direction of the story, and that you didn't make it feel too easy or not have long-term consequences. Well done :)
10/13/2015 c14 13creativesm75
very good
9/9/2014 c14 Guest
This was an excellent read. I enjoyed every bit of it.
9/9/2014 c3 Guest
Is this some actual serious "Shepard controls the Reapers" and not more lolindoctrination bullshit? If so, I am very, very pleased.

Time to read on and see if my hope is right.
9/1/2013 c14 Xelyr
Wow. This is the first story I've ever read that's brought me to tears, fanfiction or otherwise. Simply amazing.
8/24/2013 c14 Transreal Clouden
This is a unique and fascinating story. It's the first time I've ever seen someone address the control ending as something other than an instant win card or a trick. It also properly addresses just how much harm the destroy option would cause. Overall this fanfic is well written and in all ways a more satisfying ending than the conclusion to the game as laid out in cannon.
4/28/2013 c14 2Aithusa
Amazing story! LOVED it! :D See at the bit where Shepard and EDI were coming onto the ship, I couldn't BREATHE! O.O AMAZING! XD My only complaint would be that all the bits with the 'black veins' and all the brainwashing kind of things were really confusing. But the rest was AMAZING!
4/27/2013 c14 17general-joseph-dickson
Very nice story, interesting twist.
4/26/2013 c14 4Dur'id the Druid
Very very good! You took an idea and ran with it, simply going about logical but creative effects from that.

Allow me to feed your plot bunnies here, and ask you this. What would happen if while prusing one of those Reapers, they find the Colonial remntant fleeing the Cylons? That the Reaper tried to get the cylons to re-start it's race? :)

About the only way to improve this story, or it's sequal is to make it a crossover. But I'm biased that way, I love crossovers! Heck, what if the Geth find a way to contact 'The Great Machine' from Babylon 5?
4/26/2013 c14 Lord of Bays
Shit was good, yo. I might go back and read the parts inside the Old Machine collective, but for now I'm gonna go shoot up more stuff in the multiplayer. Looking forward to what else you write.
4/26/2013 c14 Tomon
Well, if I ever have happy control ending in mind. It was very similar to this one. So it's really close to my hearth even with just the settings.

Still you was able to take it to another level with a high quality writing and storytelling.
If I wanted to pinpoint the good things in your story, I would probably just copy the whole thing into my review :-D So I won't go there and just mention how glad I'm they're still on the Normandy since "We gave our lives to Normandy" (I'm also a great fan of Miracle of Sound) :) There are a lot of story where Shepard retire and my wouldn't do that ;)

And since you asked so nicely about your weaknesses and I think "none" wouldn't satisfy you :-D I will just point at the decision I disagree with, I wouldn't let Shepard remain officialy dead. But at least he got his anonymity which it seems he wanted. So that just my opinion :-D

Overall I really thank your for this story because it's definitely one of the best endings I read which are working on canon based decision ;) You definitely deserver more review
3/26/2013 c13 Tomon
Very thorough explanation. There are still some question about Shepard body like if he needs to eat and similar problems but from the galactic point of view it's pretty minor :)

I'm really enjoying your story and I'm really glad that Shepard's family and yeah, the Normandy crew is a family, is together.

Amazing job
3/25/2013 c13 Dur'id the Druid
That, was an ending I wish was in the orginal game. Well done!

And yeah, sometimes info-dumps are unavoidable.
3/25/2013 c13 17general-joseph-dickson
Yea, but who will inspect the body?
3/8/2013 c12 Tomon
Excellent. Realistic reaction. It will be interesting to see their explanation and reaction after the first shock wear out

Amazing chapter :) I really love this story
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