for Jail Time8/16/2012 c3 Ashling Ivy
Ooh, this is quite good. I'm enjoying your writing style so far, and I hope you update ASAP.
Ooh, this is quite good. I'm enjoying your writing style so far, and I hope you update ASAP.
5/29/2012 c3 xXNotInUseXx
I loved the title of this chapter! And I think you kept Larten in character very well, I loved it!
And as a Debbie hater, I love that idea! To figure out who the Lord of the Vampaneze is, perhaps Steve can track down Darren at the Cirque when he's alone and tell him just to torment him (and Steve would know he was safer if Larten wasn't there). I dunno XD
I would be interested in reading a HP crossover of yours! I've written one...sorry if that's one you thought was OOC XD It's sort of humor/adventure. And I agree (you're talking about Hermione and Darren, right?) I think it's a bit weird!
I loved this fic, and hope you do that crossover!
I loved the title of this chapter! And I think you kept Larten in character very well, I loved it!
And as a Debbie hater, I love that idea! To figure out who the Lord of the Vampaneze is, perhaps Steve can track down Darren at the Cirque when he's alone and tell him just to torment him (and Steve would know he was safer if Larten wasn't there). I dunno XD
I would be interested in reading a HP crossover of yours! I've written one...sorry if that's one you thought was OOC XD It's sort of humor/adventure. And I agree (you're talking about Hermione and Darren, right?) I think it's a bit weird!
I loved this fic, and hope you do that crossover!
5/24/2012 c2 
12The Vampire Avatar
Well, it was kinda short, but at least you updated! :D and for the mystery, Vancha would only have Alice, and Darren was the only one who could crack the code...so...technially there would be no fight ;) sorry, my fan side won over. but I would think he'd either get really injured or die. :L
can't WAIT for mr. Crepsley's POV of this! Can't wait more!
12The Vampire AvatarWell, it was kinda short, but at least you updated! :D and for the mystery, Vancha would only have Alice, and Darren was the only one who could crack the code...so...technially there would be no fight ;) sorry, my fan side won over. but I would think he'd either get really injured or die. :L
can't WAIT for mr. Crepsley's POV of this! Can't wait more!
5/24/2012 c2 xXNotInUseXx
Ha, lol XD
Mr Crepsley! I can just imagine his interview!
Ah...so simple! He hit his head on the rafter! And no one meddles better than Desmond Tiny.
I reallly really hope you update soon!
Ha, lol XD
Mr Crepsley! I can just imagine his interview!
Ah...so simple! He hit his head on the rafter! And no one meddles better than Desmond Tiny.
I reallly really hope you update soon!
5/24/2012 c1 xXNotInUseXx
I request! This was awesome!
Um...I guess the blood was taken by Vancha, as for the ceiling...there was something really heavy above him? Like a desk? Or a really fat person? I don't know X
Really cool, please do a sequel!
I request! This was awesome!
Um...I guess the blood was taken by Vancha, as for the ceiling...there was something really heavy above him? Like a desk? Or a really fat person? I don't know X
Really cool, please do a sequel!
5/23/2012 c1 masterKEY95
I REQUEST! you are the first one that ever did an fic based on the 9th book!
I REQUEST! you are the first one that ever did an fic based on the 9th book!
5/23/2012 c1 The Vampire Avatar
wow! I request that you do a sequel :)) please! and um...i don't know what happened to the blood samples but i guess that Vancha stole them? or Steve? anyway, i have NO idea for Darren. But i do want a sequel and more! :D
wow! I request that you do a sequel :)) please! and um...i don't know what happened to the blood samples but i guess that Vancha stole them? or Steve? anyway, i have NO idea for Darren. But i do want a sequel and more! :D