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4/24 c21 Tomahawk5763
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4/4 c11 Kyuubz
yep fate is death and it applies to all of us
3/27 c18 2Yourstruely098
I'm the 1000th review yaaaaaa great story by the way love it
3/25 c21 WOLF-GOST
I can't find your aff account can you help in giving instructions please and update soon bro
3/24 c21 unknown
next one please this series is really good
2/12 c21 KAP-Simuran-18-06
That was FUNKING PERFECT! Ten ten smashing Kankuros face in floor is a true delight! Greetings from Russia and hope for an ongoing chapter, author, you're the best! By the way, to what size are you going to spread Naruto's harem? Minor begging for Karin to eventually get involved
1/9 c21 frankiebayer2002
Plz update soon
1/8 c21 Guest
cant wait for the next episode
1/3 c2 Guest
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow
10/23/2021 c1 20Lerris
The harem thing is usually a minus, and I see no sign that is not the case, at least through chapter 2. The Naruto has every Chakra nature at seven, well that pretty much put the story on the tip of skipping right there. Very few stories that start like that turn out well. You adding in he could have the sharingan too, in an off the cuff comment from the kyubi made me cringe. Then in chapter 2 you use the civilian council as an excuse for him to marry Anko, and well its time to stop.

In general I tend to go with any plausible change that makes things interesting, but typically only one. When you start stacking unbelievable and questionable stuff, well, I usually don't read further.
10/17/2021 c6 Roberto9090
pedophile anko
9/25/2021 c12 CountOrlok777
... l seriously want to read that left for dead fanfic now.
8/21/2021 c3 xyzer
Ah yes Danzo always loves his pocky
8/1/2021 c21 Makaze125
You should really think about continuing this story
7/24/2021 c2 7Write Your Wrongs
The fact that you somehow made all these circumstances seamlessly flow together is amazing, truly the mark of a good writer.
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