for Darker Future6/9/2019 c4 Guest
1: Trunks Is Nerfed
2: Terrible Updating.. you should at least be clear if you're on Hiatus
1: Trunks Is Nerfed
2: Terrible Updating.. you should at least be clear if you're on Hiatus
5/29/2019 c4 Guest
Nope trubks is Ckearly Nerfed because He having trouble. He should what powercto use
Nope trubks is Ckearly Nerfed because He having trouble. He should what powercto use
4/26/2016 c4 
4WolfShadow96
I really like what you have so far and while I can kinda understand what some said about Trunks being nerfed they forget that Trunks hasn't shown his full power and may even be restraining himself because he doesn't want make too much of an impact in this time. I also feel that the villain maybe the current head of capsule corp. Maybe said person learned that time travel was possible from an ancestor who work under Bulma and happened to overhear her talking about what happened and that she calculated he was in the future or some.
4WolfShadow96I really like what you have so far and while I can kinda understand what some said about Trunks being nerfed they forget that Trunks hasn't shown his full power and may even be restraining himself because he doesn't want make too much of an impact in this time. I also feel that the villain maybe the current head of capsule corp. Maybe said person learned that time travel was possible from an ancestor who work under Bulma and happened to overhear her talking about what happened and that she calculated he was in the future or some.
12/13/2015 c4 Guest
Please Rewrite and just tell us if you have up writing.
Is so fucking hard to give us a Notice or Author note
Please Rewrite and just tell us if you have up writing.
Is so fucking hard to give us a Notice or Author note
12/13/2015 c4 Guest
Yes Trunks is Nerfed
You are just being a Kissass
Even Vegeta in the Saiyan Saga could destroy a Planet.
Trunks in His base form is Easily a Casual Planet Buster. So do not Bullshit us fanboy
Yes Trunks is Nerfed
You are just being a Kissass
Even Vegeta in the Saiyan Saga could destroy a Planet.
Trunks in His base form is Easily a Casual Planet Buster. So do not Bullshit us fanboy
6/11/2015 c4 Sid89
I disagree with the reviewers saying Trunks is nerfed. He's just being cautious. You don't show your entire hand when you don't know what your opponent has been dealt. And his inner thoughts represent that quite easily. Also being in a different environment would probably increase said caution. Also take into account his mental state and his stress levels. He's a very worn down individual. Either something really tampered with the time machine, or he was so out of it that he input the wrong destination.
I'm actually really enjoying this story. I would like to see something from Rosario Plus Gohan soon, but this can hold me over till then.
And the request for lemon. I thought that was prohibited on this site. ( I know I say that, but see plenty of it still on the site anyway.) Anyway my point being, if you have to have that situation in your story I say keep the actual scene behind closed doors. It really takes away from a great story when sitting through a wall of "Oh God, Oh Yes!" That being said romance is always welcome. Keep up the awesome writing!
I disagree with the reviewers saying Trunks is nerfed. He's just being cautious. You don't show your entire hand when you don't know what your opponent has been dealt. And his inner thoughts represent that quite easily. Also being in a different environment would probably increase said caution. Also take into account his mental state and his stress levels. He's a very worn down individual. Either something really tampered with the time machine, or he was so out of it that he input the wrong destination.
I'm actually really enjoying this story. I would like to see something from Rosario Plus Gohan soon, but this can hold me over till then.
And the request for lemon. I thought that was prohibited on this site. ( I know I say that, but see plenty of it still on the site anyway.) Anyway my point being, if you have to have that situation in your story I say keep the actual scene behind closed doors. It really takes away from a great story when sitting through a wall of "Oh God, Oh Yes!" That being said romance is always welcome. Keep up the awesome writing!
9/11/2014 c4 Guest
This Story is kind of bad. You need to rewrite this Story
This Story is kind of bad. You need to rewrite this Story
3/19/2014 c4 DBZisAwesome
Great story hope you continue it
Great story hope you continue it
10/15/2013 c4 Guest
Not bad. Only problem is nerfing
Not bad. Only problem is nerfing