for To Be A Malfoy12/4/2016 c1 MeAFanficAddict
hey! I just read your reviews and wanna say something.
firstly I totally loved this fanfic. I have read many fics but this is the first I feel so close to my emotions.
some people say that the characters are soo OOC. well at some point they are but if you remember potter books, Hermione is sometimes irritating (don't take offence). nobody is always so goody goody shoes and our mind often work different when we are in extremely tense situations.
secondly it IS totally writers choice how to make and shape their own characters in their own story.
some say isobella is annoying because she often gets angry. I personally took a huge offence when I read that. this character was the reason I found this fic so close to my heart. perhaps readers don't understand her like I do because isobella is a teenager (just like me) and these mood swings r really common in us. maybe you forgot that we all were like this , only we don't show those emotions that are in our mind -physically.
and then isobella was not always bad. you can see her innocence when she drank the potions. she is clearly insecure like any teenager.
then to the story I say it was very emotional- not cry like emotional but that which flames anger in us along with the character, make us embarrassed when the character feels so or hurt when the character is hurt.
overall wonderful writing.
hey! I just read your reviews and wanna say something.
firstly I totally loved this fanfic. I have read many fics but this is the first I feel so close to my emotions.
some people say that the characters are soo OOC. well at some point they are but if you remember potter books, Hermione is sometimes irritating (don't take offence). nobody is always so goody goody shoes and our mind often work different when we are in extremely tense situations.
secondly it IS totally writers choice how to make and shape their own characters in their own story.
some say isobella is annoying because she often gets angry. I personally took a huge offence when I read that. this character was the reason I found this fic so close to my heart. perhaps readers don't understand her like I do because isobella is a teenager (just like me) and these mood swings r really common in us. maybe you forgot that we all were like this , only we don't show those emotions that are in our mind -physically.
and then isobella was not always bad. you can see her innocence when she drank the potions. she is clearly insecure like any teenager.
then to the story I say it was very emotional- not cry like emotional but that which flames anger in us along with the character, make us embarrassed when the character feels so or hurt when the character is hurt.
overall wonderful writing.
8/11/2016 c3 Anne
Your characters are so OOC. Don't hate me, but it's the truth. I hate how you make Hermione so selfish and Isobelle so you really think Hermione would abandon someone? Remember about the Tri-wizard tournament or in the run for Horcruxes? I am really sorry but these are not JKR's characters. These are something you made up entirely.
Your characters are so OOC. Don't hate me, but it's the truth. I hate how you make Hermione so selfish and Isobelle so you really think Hermione would abandon someone? Remember about the Tri-wizard tournament or in the run for Horcruxes? I am really sorry but these are not JKR's characters. These are something you made up entirely.
3/3/2016 c1 vi
very good!
very good!
12/5/2015 c39 silver1995
I honestly understand why belle acted like a little shit most of the time.. It's not that she's ungrateful or disrespectful. Sometimes kids that are "in between" two families find it hard to know where they really belong.. all in all I love this story although there are very minimal magic involved but that way it kinda gives us what their family life looks like.. Hugo, Rose and Scorpious are so adorable.. and Astoria is a crazy bitch. Kudos to this and I hope you continue to write.. xo
I honestly understand why belle acted like a little shit most of the time.. It's not that she's ungrateful or disrespectful. Sometimes kids that are "in between" two families find it hard to know where they really belong.. all in all I love this story although there are very minimal magic involved but that way it kinda gives us what their family life looks like.. Hugo, Rose and Scorpious are so adorable.. and Astoria is a crazy bitch. Kudos to this and I hope you continue to write.. xo
9/30/2015 c21 Guest
Isobelle is starting to annoy me :(
Isobelle is starting to annoy me :(
5/4/2015 c7 CynRella47
hi i just got done with the court room scene and i want to say for someone whose never been to one you did really well :) i love the story so far
hi i just got done with the court room scene and i want to say for someone whose never been to one you did really well :) i love the story so far
9/9/2014 c32 Sabrina
Sorry, I don't intend this to be a flame or anything. But this is a critical review of how I thought of this story as is. This a really good fanfic and really good writing, but I just couldn't enjoy it as much as I thought I would. I honestly I feel like every single character - save for Harry - is really OOC. I should hope I never meet any of these OOC people with these types of personalities in real life. The romance between Draco and Hermione was really unnatural. One moment they were barely acting civil to each other, and the next, they were on a date and kissing. Hermione is way too OOC. Knowing Hermione, I just can't see her abandoning Isobelle like that and doing irrational things like having a kid and just forgetting about her for so long. And she won't have had another child on top of everything she's going through right now. In the book, she is really methodological and rational, and your Hermione is quite the opposite of that. Also, knowing Hermione and Draco, they wouldn't take any of the shit that Isobelle keeps putting onto them.
Isobelle is a really unlikable character, literally all she does is yell and act moody. It kind of got tiring after a while to read another chapter and go "Oh, there goes Isobelle, mad about something or the other". I just wanted to smack her and wish she would stop going into a tantrum every other time she speaks. She's really exasperating and too demanding, especially to her parents, when she honestly has no right to be. There's one thing to write a character as is, but it's another to write a main character in 1st person this unlikable. I had hoped she would redeem herself further on into the story, but I just ended up disliking her more and more. I'm sorry, after all these chapters, I still ended up hating Isobelle.
Probably the only likable characters are Rose, Hugo, and Scorpius.
Sorry, I don't intend this to be a flame or anything. But this is a critical review of how I thought of this story as is. This a really good fanfic and really good writing, but I just couldn't enjoy it as much as I thought I would. I honestly I feel like every single character - save for Harry - is really OOC. I should hope I never meet any of these OOC people with these types of personalities in real life. The romance between Draco and Hermione was really unnatural. One moment they were barely acting civil to each other, and the next, they were on a date and kissing. Hermione is way too OOC. Knowing Hermione, I just can't see her abandoning Isobelle like that and doing irrational things like having a kid and just forgetting about her for so long. And she won't have had another child on top of everything she's going through right now. In the book, she is really methodological and rational, and your Hermione is quite the opposite of that. Also, knowing Hermione and Draco, they wouldn't take any of the shit that Isobelle keeps putting onto them.
Isobelle is a really unlikable character, literally all she does is yell and act moody. It kind of got tiring after a while to read another chapter and go "Oh, there goes Isobelle, mad about something or the other". I just wanted to smack her and wish she would stop going into a tantrum every other time she speaks. She's really exasperating and too demanding, especially to her parents, when she honestly has no right to be. There's one thing to write a character as is, but it's another to write a main character in 1st person this unlikable. I had hoped she would redeem herself further on into the story, but I just ended up disliking her more and more. I'm sorry, after all these chapters, I still ended up hating Isobelle.
Probably the only likable characters are Rose, Hugo, and Scorpius.
7/18/2014 c38 Guest
I can't even describe how amazing this story is! It had me crying at one point and then within 10 minuets more of reading I was laughing. I am a writer too and you inspired me with this masterpiece so much! So great job and I will definaty be reading more from you
I can't even describe how amazing this story is! It had me crying at one point and then within 10 minuets more of reading I was laughing. I am a writer too and you inspired me with this masterpiece so much! So great job and I will definaty be reading more from you
7/14/2014 c6 Guest
I absolutely love this I am obsessed with it you have made me like Draco a lot more with this story. I think this is so creative and cute and I jut love it I have spent the last 3 hours reading it!
I absolutely love this I am obsessed with it you have made me like Draco a lot more with this story. I think this is so creative and cute and I jut love it I have spent the last 3 hours reading it!
7/3/2014 c1 Guest
I think the character I hate the most in this story is Hermione. She's so self righteous and she calls out Draco all the time on his parenting. Yeah, I get the fact that he does fuck up, but he's been there for her the whole time while Hermione is just trying to swoop in and bond with the child that she did in fact abandon and the only reason she met her was because she didn't want to die and Isobelle not know who her mother was, which is pathetic reason anyways.
I think the character I hate the most in this story is Hermione. She's so self righteous and she calls out Draco all the time on his parenting. Yeah, I get the fact that he does fuck up, but he's been there for her the whole time while Hermione is just trying to swoop in and bond with the child that she did in fact abandon and the only reason she met her was because she didn't want to die and Isobelle not know who her mother was, which is pathetic reason anyways.
7/1/2014 c32 ShaaaCSMMaa
Im a bad person and I don't write reviews as often as I should but I need to here. This chapter had me in tears all the way through because it took me back to then time when I was going through what Isobel was going through... Idk I just thought back to those times and the feelings I felt then and I just cried. I felt the need to share this
Im a bad person and I don't write reviews as often as I should but I need to here. This chapter had me in tears all the way through because it took me back to then time when I was going through what Isobel was going through... Idk I just thought back to those times and the feelings I felt then and I just cried. I felt the need to share this
4/18/2014 c27 incoherentlove
This fic is just amazing. I love it.
And this may be the weirdest sentence I've put in a review but the poo conversations have actually made me cry with laughter. They remind me of my brother.
This fic is just amazing. I love it.
And this may be the weirdest sentence I've put in a review but the poo conversations have actually made me cry with laughter. They remind me of my brother.
4/13/2014 c1 MissyAllyy
Hi, I'm Alex, and I just need to say something about this story: It's made me think. My life is very much like Isobelle's. I have a little brother who I can't live without. A big brother who cares about me the way Teddy does for Isobelle, and as for Isobelle, I have feelings like she does. Anger like she does. Self-harming thoughts like she did. And to read it through her eyes made me think. I always thought if something happened to me people would move on. They couldn't. I know some people in my life who at least couldn't. So thank you for this story. It was amazing. And in spirational.
Hi, I'm Alex, and I just need to say something about this story: It's made me think. My life is very much like Isobelle's. I have a little brother who I can't live without. A big brother who cares about me the way Teddy does for Isobelle, and as for Isobelle, I have feelings like she does. Anger like she does. Self-harming thoughts like she did. And to read it through her eyes made me think. I always thought if something happened to me people would move on. They couldn't. I know some people in my life who at least couldn't. So thank you for this story. It was amazing. And in spirational.
10/18/2013 c32 lilian
Curse you addictive story! I'm just trying to read this on one of the library's computers, and everybody looks at me like I'm crazy because all this chapter I can't stop crying. And I can't stop reading! :)
Curse you addictive story! I'm just trying to read this on one of the library's computers, and everybody looks at me like I'm crazy because all this chapter I can't stop crying. And I can't stop reading! :)
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