for Star in Your Sky7/23/2022 c7 
4JoVersify
Yep. Impressed.
That scene with James was so satisfyingly terrifying. And your Edward is so super smooth. Manipulative in the cleverest ways.
On to the next!
~Jo
4JoVersifyYep. Impressed.
That scene with James was so satisfyingly terrifying. And your Edward is so super smooth. Manipulative in the cleverest ways.
On to the next!
~Jo
7/23/2022 c6 JoVersify
Seriously, where did you come from?
This story is so lovely... and refreshing! I'm thoroughly enjoying myself on this ride! It is so wonderful to discover new writers that I can feel a kindred spark with, and new stories that impress me enough to allow me to relax (and not critique) as I read.
Also, just read your bio. Impressive resume! Sounds like you will have much success in life ; )
Okay, on to the next!
~Jo
Seriously, where did you come from?
This story is so lovely... and refreshing! I'm thoroughly enjoying myself on this ride! It is so wonderful to discover new writers that I can feel a kindred spark with, and new stories that impress me enough to allow me to relax (and not critique) as I read.
Also, just read your bio. Impressive resume! Sounds like you will have much success in life ; )
Okay, on to the next!
~Jo
7/23/2022 c5 JoVersify
You wrote this in high school? Incredibile... un talento naturale.
I was skeptical to begin this... it is different enough that it could have been way out of left field with horrible pacing, but I have yet to be disappointed! Do you know how difficult it is to find an AU story with originality AND good writing? I'm really loving the pacing of this, the originality, and your Edward. He is just scrumptious so far!
Thank you for this!
~Jo
You wrote this in high school? Incredibile... un talento naturale.
I was skeptical to begin this... it is different enough that it could have been way out of left field with horrible pacing, but I have yet to be disappointed! Do you know how difficult it is to find an AU story with originality AND good writing? I'm really loving the pacing of this, the originality, and your Edward. He is just scrumptious so far!
Thank you for this!
~Jo
7/20/2022 c81 Guest
Already can’t wait for the next chapter! Definitely on the edge after each chapter
Already can’t wait for the next chapter! Definitely on the edge after each chapter
7/19/2022 c81 helenemc
I hope Edward will find Bella soon; he needs her blood. I am a little confused. How did Edward find himself in the same time period as Bella? Is Renee there as well?
I hope Edward will find Bella soon; he needs her blood. I am a little confused. How did Edward find himself in the same time period as Bella? Is Renee there as well?
7/19/2022 c81 Guest
Lol my favorite line was … everything is long lost
Lol my favorite line was … everything is long lost
7/19/2022 c81 IsabellaSwan6
Yes this story is one of a kind. Always eager to see what happens next. But just had to read the previous chapter first then the updated one always to understand the intricacies going on. Otherwise loving it. Can't wait for next update when Edward will hopefully meet Bella.
Yes this story is one of a kind. Always eager to see what happens next. But just had to read the previous chapter first then the updated one always to understand the intricacies going on. Otherwise loving it. Can't wait for next update when Edward will hopefully meet Bella.
7/11/2022 c80 Guest
I love this story! Please keep going!
I love this story! Please keep going!
7/8/2022 c80 helenemc
So many twists and turns in this story. I wonder how Bella changing Helen would change things.
So many twists and turns in this story. I wonder how Bella changing Helen would change things.
7/7/2022 c80 chocolate teapots
can't wait for the next update. will Bella turn her if so how does that change the current world
can't wait for the next update. will Bella turn her if so how does that change the current world