8/28/2013 c1 2countingthestars12
Aww this was so cute! I loved the Lupin/Tonks part (the lead-up to their relationship/UST between them was great, and his little speech was so romantic!) and the Teddy/Tonks part was just adorable. Keep up the great work!
Aww this was so cute! I loved the Lupin/Tonks part (the lead-up to their relationship/UST between them was great, and his little speech was so romantic!) and the Teddy/Tonks part was just adorable. Keep up the great work!
4/12/2013 c1 Birds on the Sunset
I actually cannot express how good that was. Argh. I just can't find the words. It was just so perfect. The whole storyline. And all the perfect emotions. For such a short story I actually felt all of Tonks' emotions. That was just perfect.
I actually cannot express how good that was. Argh. I just can't find the words. It was just so perfect. The whole storyline. And all the perfect emotions. For such a short story I actually felt all of Tonks' emotions. That was just perfect.
7/13/2012 c1 2jkdsfoisjd9fje
This was so cute, I hated her best friend but Remus was amazing, as usual.
This was so cute, I hated her best friend but Remus was amazing, as usual.
7/3/2012 c1 Guest
I loved this. I think you may be one of the best fanfiction writers I've come across. Your style is just... amazing. When I think of it from a writer's point of view, I'm impressed by it's complexity. But then when I let myself just read and appreciate it's flow; that's when I'm captivated by it's simplicity.
Apart from your writing, I loved this storyline, how you chose these select moments from Tonk's life and was able to convey how she grows. And Remus was beautiful. Also, your own intelligence just drips off the page! It really adds to the characters, because they come across as so much more genuine.
Anyway, I think I've flattered you enough haha. Thanks for writing this,
- the punchline.
I loved this. I think you may be one of the best fanfiction writers I've come across. Your style is just... amazing. When I think of it from a writer's point of view, I'm impressed by it's complexity. But then when I let myself just read and appreciate it's flow; that's when I'm captivated by it's simplicity.
Apart from your writing, I loved this storyline, how you chose these select moments from Tonk's life and was able to convey how she grows. And Remus was beautiful. Also, your own intelligence just drips off the page! It really adds to the characters, because they come across as so much more genuine.
Anyway, I think I've flattered you enough haha. Thanks for writing this,
- the punchline.
6/8/2012 c1 36unique.normality
I can just see Tonks having such awful relationship before Remus stumbles in...
I'd love to see Tonks (alive, possibly after the war) running into some of her exes and just FLOORING them with the fact that she's married and that kid in her stroller is hers. You should try that... cough...
I can just see Tonks having such awful relationship before Remus stumbles in...
I'd love to see Tonks (alive, possibly after the war) running into some of her exes and just FLOORING them with the fact that she's married and that kid in her stroller is hers. You should try that... cough...
6/6/2012 c1 12MoonIce20408
This has to be one of my favourite one-shots about Tonks and Lupin. And I love the whole idea of this, really well done! )
This has to be one of my favourite one-shots about Tonks and Lupin. And I love the whole idea of this, really well done! )
6/5/2012 c1 spawater
I can identify so well with Tonks's awkwardness with Charlie. '"Charles, when you look at me, do you feel like you're in the throws of passion?' AH, so recognizable.
Everything about Tonks is so familiar in this chapter; it's like you've captured exactly what I've been thinking/worrying about lately.
And just this: '"Your laugh, the light you get in your eyes when you're absolutely furious, the way you hiss my name with the emphasis on the wrong syllable when you're angry with me, the fact that you don't care what people say about you, your legs in your purple skirt, the expression on your face when you're at a loss for words, your smile, the way you sing off key in the shower deliberately, the smell of your coconut shampoo. I could go on."'
REMUS I LOVE YOU!
I love this story 3
I can identify so well with Tonks's awkwardness with Charlie. '"Charles, when you look at me, do you feel like you're in the throws of passion?' AH, so recognizable.
Everything about Tonks is so familiar in this chapter; it's like you've captured exactly what I've been thinking/worrying about lately.
And just this: '"Your laugh, the light you get in your eyes when you're absolutely furious, the way you hiss my name with the emphasis on the wrong syllable when you're angry with me, the fact that you don't care what people say about you, your legs in your purple skirt, the expression on your face when you're at a loss for words, your smile, the way you sing off key in the shower deliberately, the smell of your coconut shampoo. I could go on."'
REMUS I LOVE YOU!
I love this story 3
5/27/2012 c1 32Louey06
I lovd this, especially the part with Remus. when Orestes asked her to morph I was ready to hit him over the head. I would have left straight away. and then Remus was so sweet about, fabulous story.
I lovd this, especially the part with Remus. when Orestes asked her to morph I was ready to hit him over the head. I would have left straight away. and then Remus was so sweet about, fabulous story.
5/26/2012 c1 11Padfoot24601
All together now:
N'awwww! I really do like this, especially the whole portrayal of Tonks and an insight to how she thinks.
Also it was great to properly meet Thalia! Nice to know she has a fair bit of her father in her.
Oh! Must blame/thank you for making me a fully fledged Lupinite as well, my friends have been forced to listen to me wax lyrical on him. Well done!
Once again - loved this!
Laura x
All together now:
N'awwww! I really do like this, especially the whole portrayal of Tonks and an insight to how she thinks.
Also it was great to properly meet Thalia! Nice to know she has a fair bit of her father in her.
Oh! Must blame/thank you for making me a fully fledged Lupinite as well, my friends have been forced to listen to me wax lyrical on him. Well done!
Once again - loved this!
Laura x
5/26/2012 c1 17Snarky64
Another wonderful story from your pen.
I was a little disturbed that Tonks had so little self esteem to offer to make herself into a sex object (without being confident or playful about it, which would be a different matter). I think I always thought she'd have more self respect than that. It's always interesting to see a different interpretation of a character. I did love the response you gave to Remus of all those little character traits he'd noticed. That was lovely.
Good work - always.
Another wonderful story from your pen.
I was a little disturbed that Tonks had so little self esteem to offer to make herself into a sex object (without being confident or playful about it, which would be a different matter). I think I always thought she'd have more self respect than that. It's always interesting to see a different interpretation of a character. I did love the response you gave to Remus of all those little character traits he'd noticed. That was lovely.
Good work - always.