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9/25/2023 c9 7Archangel Change24
So my biggest problem with this fanfiction is that harry’s magic is MUCH stronger than this. Throw in that those potions were supposed to be the equal to a grenade. Why they didn’t just use the explosive vials at the tips of arrows i DON’T understand but what i do know is that Harry knows explosive spells and is a powerhouse when it comes to magic he should have NO problem beating thr telmarines.
7/10/2023 c14 lord of the east
This fic is amazing!
8/20/2022 c3 2AvidReader2425
Pretty good overview
8/20/2022 c2 AvidReader2425
Thanks for the chapter
8/20/2022 c1 AvidReader2425
Enjoyable opening chapter
6/5/2022 c13 Guest
For the record, the name was Mr. Tumnus, not Taumus.
6/5/2022 c6 Guest
"If you had a chance to kill your father's killer, would you?" Harry looked at Caspian with a critical eye.

"It depends how bad your emotions over ride your senses. I had my chance but I let him live."

"Why?"

"I didn't think my father would've wanted his best friends to become killers. I didn't have to stop them. But I didn't want to sink to his low level. He took the cowards way out."

Voldemort would be the killer of his father (and mother obviously), not Pettigrew.

Pettigrew (and Snape, but obviously Harry doesn't know about his involvement in their deaths at this point) would just be a betrayer.
10/7/2019 c15 WhiteEagle1985
A great story here!
7/18/2019 c2 Oddballzebra
What the fuck is this shit?
4/20/2018 c15 6cshen.julienne
Hey this is a good read :)
11/14/2017 c15 ruth hammond
Thank you for your work...
11/14/2017 c13 ruth hammond
Evil, Evil writer..I will have top finish this and then go on to the rest of your stories...
11/14/2017 c12 ruth hammond
Wonderful! smile! Cheers!
11/14/2017 c11 ruth hammond
Been doing great. This is in response to the AN[author's note] for chapter 12...btw, loving your notes. I should have done this before, but the story is so much fun. I have read some mention of school...tests and trying to get things done on time and not mess your school work...Pay attention to the school work and then the writing. It is more important in that order until you have a break...we, the readers can wait even if we complain or mutter your way, this is your future. Writing is wonderful and we enjoy your work, we can wait...sound like a teacher?guess what...retired for years and I wish I had some of the authors that write for fanfiction for my students way back then... I will tell you this, as I have told authors here, many of you show such promise for the future writers if for nothing else than your and our enjoyment. I know of several of your fellow authors that are as good as and better than some of the famous authors today. Back to the reading, I've got to get some sleep before a long trip later today. 3:17 AM Nov. 14, 2017
11/13/2017 c2 ruth hammond
I read all the Narnia stories when in college and after, when our children were old enough, we read them to the kids and when the grand kids came along our son read them to the boys and our daughter-in-law, and so the road goes on. Enjoyed the summary, you did a good job of including and deleting...hard to do a good job of that. I look forward to the rest of the story...
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