for The Time Traveler and the Queen2/25 c1 arianamax177
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Your story "The Time Traveler and the Queen" has the power to captivate, let’s bring it to life!
As a commissioned artist with 4 years of experience, I specialize in turning stories into dynamic visuals, whether it’s a graphic novel, action-packed manga, or a beautifully illustrated webcomic.
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2/15 c3 Kyle
I think I know why fanfiction has died. Because authors never use their full potentials and actually have changes to a story (where warranted) instead they all just have a 1:1 ratio of the script we all know.
I think I know why fanfiction has died. Because authors never use their full potentials and actually have changes to a story (where warranted) instead they all just have a 1:1 ratio of the script we all know.
9/25/2023 c9 
9Archangel Change24
So my biggest problem with this fanfiction is that harry’s magic is MUCH stronger than this. Throw in that those potions were supposed to be the equal to a grenade. Why they didn’t just use the explosive vials at the tips of arrows i DON’T understand but what i do know is that Harry knows explosive spells and is a powerhouse when it comes to magic he should have NO problem beating thr telmarines.
9Archangel Change24So my biggest problem with this fanfiction is that harry’s magic is MUCH stronger than this. Throw in that those potions were supposed to be the equal to a grenade. Why they didn’t just use the explosive vials at the tips of arrows i DON’T understand but what i do know is that Harry knows explosive spells and is a powerhouse when it comes to magic he should have NO problem beating thr telmarines.
6/5/2022 c13 Guest
For the record, the name was Mr. Tumnus, not Taumus.
For the record, the name was Mr. Tumnus, not Taumus.
6/5/2022 c6 Guest
"If you had a chance to kill your father's killer, would you?" Harry looked at Caspian with a critical eye.
"It depends how bad your emotions over ride your senses. I had my chance but I let him live."
"Why?"
"I didn't think my father would've wanted his best friends to become killers. I didn't have to stop them. But I didn't want to sink to his low level. He took the cowards way out."
Voldemort would be the killer of his father (and mother obviously), not Pettigrew.
Pettigrew (and Snape, but obviously Harry doesn't know about his involvement in their deaths at this point) would just be a betrayer.
"If you had a chance to kill your father's killer, would you?" Harry looked at Caspian with a critical eye.
"It depends how bad your emotions over ride your senses. I had my chance but I let him live."
"Why?"
"I didn't think my father would've wanted his best friends to become killers. I didn't have to stop them. But I didn't want to sink to his low level. He took the cowards way out."
Voldemort would be the killer of his father (and mother obviously), not Pettigrew.
Pettigrew (and Snape, but obviously Harry doesn't know about his involvement in their deaths at this point) would just be a betrayer.
11/14/2017 c13 ruth hammond
Evil, Evil writer..I will have top finish this and then go on to the rest of your stories...
Evil, Evil writer..I will have top finish this and then go on to the rest of your stories...