
6/3/2012 c1
12Questionable Answers
not bad. I like the sentiment, but the characterization seems a little off.

not bad. I like the sentiment, but the characterization seems a little off.
5/28/2012 c1
25werebunny131
I really liked this! I wish it wasn't a one shot, because I'd really like to see where you could take this. Very well written, and very good tone. Nice fic! -

I really liked this! I wish it wasn't a one shot, because I'd really like to see where you could take this. Very well written, and very good tone. Nice fic! -
5/28/2012 c1 writingsins
absolutely loved this. really fantastic job. more would be excellent.
absolutely loved this. really fantastic job. more would be excellent.
5/28/2012 c1
1ThoseWhoWait
This is really amazing! You captured the voice of Loki and Bruce so well I could literally hear Tom and Mark! And the emotions were portrayed very well, and very within character. I would love to see you continue this story, or at least bring us some more Avengers fic! Keep it up!

This is really amazing! You captured the voice of Loki and Bruce so well I could literally hear Tom and Mark! And the emotions were portrayed very well, and very within character. I would love to see you continue this story, or at least bring us some more Avengers fic! Keep it up!
5/28/2012 c1
6Girl-of-1000-fandoms
Are you going to add more chapters to this? I like it how it is,don't get me wrong,but I think it would be awesome with more chapters. You got a great storyline here,one I think could be continued. Whether you are or not,this is still going into my favs list :)

Are you going to add more chapters to this? I like it how it is,don't get me wrong,but I think it would be awesome with more chapters. You got a great storyline here,one I think could be continued. Whether you are or not,this is still going into my favs list :)
5/28/2012 c1 notonffeveragain
Oh my goodness! The emotion is so real it's beautiful and terrible! Even though this is a fanfiction, someone still writes it. And you put your soul into it. Wow.
Oh my goodness! The emotion is so real it's beautiful and terrible! Even though this is a fanfiction, someone still writes it. And you put your soul into it. Wow.