for Professor Layton and the mystery of stone2/5/2021 c13 Abi
I mean... birdbox plot twist? I’ve never seen birdbox? blindfolds?
I mean... birdbox plot twist? I’ve never seen birdbox? blindfolds?
2/4/2021 c12 Abi
i mean,,,, god forbid I think it all ends well, 13 chapters early,,,,
i mean,,,, god forbid I think it all ends well, 13 chapters early,,,,
12/24/2019 c4 
13Antonio Ferrari
Not gonna lie. At first I was almost overwhelmed by the wall of text and believed this was one of those effortless fanfiction with barely any commas.
A few phrases later and I’m glad to be wrong.
Only critique I can really think about at the moment was how Emmy/Clive reunited with Luke.
If I’m correct, the events of Professor Layton and the Unwound Future are far later than the Azran legacy. Shouldn’t Clive be the one who Luke is more tibutant than Emmy? Especially considering Emmy spent far more time with Luke then Clive.
Anyway, I might be wrong.
By the way, would you like to check my fanfictions?
13Antonio FerrariNot gonna lie. At first I was almost overwhelmed by the wall of text and believed this was one of those effortless fanfiction with barely any commas.
A few phrases later and I’m glad to be wrong.
Only critique I can really think about at the moment was how Emmy/Clive reunited with Luke.
If I’m correct, the events of Professor Layton and the Unwound Future are far later than the Azran legacy. Shouldn’t Clive be the one who Luke is more tibutant than Emmy? Especially considering Emmy spent far more time with Luke then Clive.
Anyway, I might be wrong.
By the way, would you like to check my fanfictions?
11/22/2019 c4 Asaliz
I really liked the dynamic between Emmy and Clive!, never imagined them together!
I really liked the dynamic between Emmy and Clive!, never imagined them together!
11/22/2019 c3 Asaliz
I loved this chapter! I love to see Flora happy, and Emmy still being around.
And Rosa's prank, I can imagine Layton's expression.
I loved this chapter! I love to see Flora happy, and Emmy still being around.
And Rosa's prank, I can imagine Layton's expression.
10/29/2019 c2 Asaliz
I'm glad someone recomended me this story!
This is a really nice begining, and I love how everybody wrote something for Luke (Specially Don Paolo XD)
I'm glad someone recomended me this story!
This is a really nice begining, and I love how everybody wrote something for Luke (Specially Don Paolo XD)
8/19/2016 c25 Aria and Clive
Aria: I NEED TO DUMP!
Clive: WHEN WILL YOU STOP ANNOYING PEOPLE WITH YOUR REDICULOUS IDEAS!
Aria: To start off, I'll explain dumping.
Clive: Oh boy, here we go again. Warning, this is pointless, and has nothing to do with your fanfiction
Aria: Dumping is when I throw a boatload of fanfiction ideas on a random person to vent. None of this is to be taken seriously.
Clive: Unless you actually want to make these. Aria might actually explode if she doesn't put this somewhere so DING, DING, DING, you're the (Un)lucky receiver of Aria's explosives (err, plots)
Aria: First up, Everyone gets gender flipped. And, um... Descole's fondest wish suddenly comes true.
Clive: Fine, I'll join in. Luke suddenly gets the ability to, Um... Fly, Grant Wishes, Telekinesis, Stuff like that. Choose one! Also, Um... Nope, thats it.
Aria: Of course, because you have no imagination.
Clive: I came up with that!
Aria: Everyone gets teleported into an alternate dimension, and... Everyone swaps bodies. That's 5.
Clive: If your still reading, you can stop now, all that's left is an outro.
~Aria Cantari~
~Clive Dove~
Aria: I NEED TO DUMP!
Clive: WHEN WILL YOU STOP ANNOYING PEOPLE WITH YOUR REDICULOUS IDEAS!
Aria: To start off, I'll explain dumping.
Clive: Oh boy, here we go again. Warning, this is pointless, and has nothing to do with your fanfiction
Aria: Dumping is when I throw a boatload of fanfiction ideas on a random person to vent. None of this is to be taken seriously.
Clive: Unless you actually want to make these. Aria might actually explode if she doesn't put this somewhere so DING, DING, DING, you're the (Un)lucky receiver of Aria's explosives (err, plots)
Aria: First up, Everyone gets gender flipped. And, um... Descole's fondest wish suddenly comes true.
Clive: Fine, I'll join in. Luke suddenly gets the ability to, Um... Fly, Grant Wishes, Telekinesis, Stuff like that. Choose one! Also, Um... Nope, thats it.
Aria: Of course, because you have no imagination.
Clive: I came up with that!
Aria: Everyone gets teleported into an alternate dimension, and... Everyone swaps bodies. That's 5.
Clive: If your still reading, you can stop now, all that's left is an outro.
~Aria Cantari~
~Clive Dove~
5/7/2016 c15 Eliza
I love it! Congrats!
I love it! Congrats!
5/6/2016 c12 Eliza
Ah, so they've noticed the snake's tongue thing... It is a little OOC for Layton not to notice that though. He would have noted the inscription in his head as valuable information, I would have thought. I love the rest of the story!
Ah, so they've noticed the snake's tongue thing... It is a little OOC for Layton not to notice that though. He would have noted the inscription in his head as valuable information, I would have thought. I love the rest of the story!
5/6/2016 c10 Eliza
(I hate to spam you with reviews, but one thing is bugging me... Poisinous gas was in the First World War, not the second.)
(I hate to spam you with reviews, but one thing is bugging me... Poisinous gas was in the First World War, not the second.)
5/6/2016 c10 Eliza
YESSSSSS, I knew it! I'm suprised at how oblivious everyone was actually, especially in the science lab.
YESSSSSS, I knew it! I'm suprised at how oblivious everyone was actually, especially in the science lab.
5/5/2016 c5 Eliza
Amazing story! I'm suspicious, VERY suspicious of Lisa. I'm also surprised that nobody commented on the "one with the snake's tongue" line.
Amazing story! I'm suspicious, VERY suspicious of Lisa. I'm also surprised that nobody commented on the "one with the snake's tongue" line.
8/15/2015 c25 165chloemcg
Oh, I ADORE this fanfic so very much! When you reviewed my story it was an honour because I think you are one of the best writers on fanfiction.
I was smiling from ear-to-ear when I got your review, so thank you very much for that!
I have other stories PL you could read if you want to, one of them being "Down goes the apprentice". You don't have to read it but if you do want to then I hope you enjoy it.
Speaking of enjoying, I feel so bad for Luke in this! I love the Professor and Luke's bond generally and I love how you convey all the emotions in this and I love this story so much!
You are awesome!
165chloemcgOh, I ADORE this fanfic so very much! When you reviewed my story it was an honour because I think you are one of the best writers on fanfiction.
I was smiling from ear-to-ear when I got your review, so thank you very much for that!
I have other stories PL you could read if you want to, one of them being "Down goes the apprentice". You don't have to read it but if you do want to then I hope you enjoy it.
Speaking of enjoying, I feel so bad for Luke in this! I love the Professor and Luke's bond generally and I love how you convey all the emotions in this and I love this story so much!
You are awesome!