for Move Along4/14/2013 c1 
10VioletFieldofFlowers
I loved this. So well written, and so true to the characters. You have such an amazing voice that's always worth the read!
10VioletFieldofFlowersI loved this. So well written, and so true to the characters. You have such an amazing voice that's always worth the read!
1/17/2013 c1 13ShoeGoil
Great story, old friend. The characterizations were spot-on, as usual. And I love the risks you take in your writing. Satisfying read :)
13ShoeGoilGreat story, old friend. The characterizations were spot-on, as usual. And I love the risks you take in your writing. Satisfying read :)
6/2/2012 c1 21Kirsten Erin
Wow. Very interesting and well-written. I like the way you wrote each of them, especially Racetrack. But Jack's taking the hit for David was also wonderful and completely in-character. Altogether, this was a very well done oneshot. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!
21Kirsten ErinWow. Very interesting and well-written. I like the way you wrote each of them, especially Racetrack. But Jack's taking the hit for David was also wonderful and completely in-character. Altogether, this was a very well done oneshot. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!
5/29/2012 c1 illegiblescrawl
Whoah! Woah, woah, WOAH! What just happened? Crutchy...and Jack...but Monahan...and Race...WHAT?
That all happened so fast, so exciting, that I couldn't stop reading, even though half of the time I had no clue WHAT I was reading! GREAT writing, can't wait for the update! I'm keeping an eye on THIS fic, that's for sure!
Whoah! Woah, woah, WOAH! What just happened? Crutchy...and Jack...but Monahan...and Race...WHAT?
That all happened so fast, so exciting, that I couldn't stop reading, even though half of the time I had no clue WHAT I was reading! GREAT writing, can't wait for the update! I'm keeping an eye on THIS fic, that's for sure!
5/28/2012 c1 newsiesluva
I like that you explored Mohan's piont of view. When I read Jack was sentenced to Sing Sing I cried and I never cry for book characters! Brava!
I like that you explored Mohan's piont of view. When I read Jack was sentenced to Sing Sing I cried and I never cry for book characters! Brava!