for ALL I WANTED WAS SOME MILK!4/27/2016 c14 
2CoffeeTime987
Oh wow big time skip, I want to know the hell happened to Gaara lol I was like what? lol anywho thanks for the update
2CoffeeTime987Oh wow big time skip, I want to know the hell happened to Gaara lol I was like what? lol anywho thanks for the update
4/27/2016 c13 CoffeeTime987
I like how everything unraveled but I felt it was really unnecessary for her to bring up an affair and miscarriage just because Rasa had pictures of her dancing... jeez, I get he's a shitty dad but god damn it made me really not like Terra at all. also I think Gaaras more cruel to Terra in this chapter, pushing her then laughing when she's hurt her self not even trying to help. Maybe it's just how it came across to me as them being bratty just cause the worlds not fair, you know?
I like how everything unraveled but I felt it was really unnecessary for her to bring up an affair and miscarriage just because Rasa had pictures of her dancing... jeez, I get he's a shitty dad but god damn it made me really not like Terra at all. also I think Gaaras more cruel to Terra in this chapter, pushing her then laughing when she's hurt her self not even trying to help. Maybe it's just how it came across to me as them being bratty just cause the worlds not fair, you know?
11/16/2015 c13 36Lady The Warrior
Wow indeed a lot tension! phew! I kinda had to hold my breath while reading that scene with Rasa and Terra! Damn! that was... really good. While I think Rasa is a total as shole here! He seemed like an as s in the canon! He actually did try to hate Gaara because he wanted to keep his village safe, so for the better reason ( he assumed) he hurt Gaara to protect his village so I felt sympathy for him in canon somehow when he said he did love Gaara and he was sorry but here ... I kinda loathe him, cheating his wife and all these drama... aww poor Gaara
I think the end is kinda obvious as you said it might be one more chapter, Gaara will go after Terra and everything will end like happily ever after, unless Terra leaves Japan and then after a few years she sees Gaara in states and tells him how she truly felt! Ah anyway, it was a nice story and an exciting journey I want to know what will happen in the end though
I think that sneaky Ashley provided some of the info for Rasa! She's so jealous! I hate her!
I liked the part Gaara was laughing, I don't know, did that ever happen in canon? I want to see him laughing somehow, it could be gorgeous! he smiles, yes but he never laughs :( that's just too sad glad it happened in this story and Kabuto now flirting with Katy! Damn right I ship it lol
Just can't wait for the last chapter
It was good read, thank you
36Lady The WarriorWow indeed a lot tension! phew! I kinda had to hold my breath while reading that scene with Rasa and Terra! Damn! that was... really good. While I think Rasa is a total as shole here! He seemed like an as s in the canon! He actually did try to hate Gaara because he wanted to keep his village safe, so for the better reason ( he assumed) he hurt Gaara to protect his village so I felt sympathy for him in canon somehow when he said he did love Gaara and he was sorry but here ... I kinda loathe him, cheating his wife and all these drama... aww poor Gaara
I think the end is kinda obvious as you said it might be one more chapter, Gaara will go after Terra and everything will end like happily ever after, unless Terra leaves Japan and then after a few years she sees Gaara in states and tells him how she truly felt! Ah anyway, it was a nice story and an exciting journey I want to know what will happen in the end though
I think that sneaky Ashley provided some of the info for Rasa! She's so jealous! I hate her!
I liked the part Gaara was laughing, I don't know, did that ever happen in canon? I want to see him laughing somehow, it could be gorgeous! he smiles, yes but he never laughs :( that's just too sad glad it happened in this story and Kabuto now flirting with Katy! Damn right I ship it lol
Just can't wait for the last chapter
It was good read, thank you
11/16/2015 c12 Lady The Warrior
Deidara the love expert haha
I knew somehow that Deidara wasn't another love interest, it's a good thing to see that he's kinda a older brother!
Gosh I'm still waiting for Terra and Gaara's kiss! Damn why they get interrupted everytime and ...
Tobi...? gosh I love Tobiiiiiiiiiiii! I wish there would be more Tobi in this
On to the last chapter!
Deidara the love expert haha
I knew somehow that Deidara wasn't another love interest, it's a good thing to see that he's kinda a older brother!
Gosh I'm still waiting for Terra and Gaara's kiss! Damn why they get interrupted everytime and ...
Tobi...? gosh I love Tobiiiiiiiiiiii! I wish there would be more Tobi in this
On to the last chapter!
11/16/2015 c11 Lady The Warrior
Okay... this is weird... just what happened to Rasa? Didn't he talk to Terra? I thought we will have more of his thoughts over the his son's bride! lol
Itachi's gang! YAY I'm loving the fact that you brought up Akatsuki too and I just LOVE Hidan haha
Gaara gets jealous over his WIFE because she seems too close to deidara? Hmm that's suspicious and interesting, I think Deidara is gay though lol I don't know I always thought Deidara was gay so I think he's no threat to Gaara's relationship haha
Ah that Kabuto dude is here too?! Damn! I hope Gaara kicks his ass! gosh I'm starting to dislike him as well in this story! How dare he steals Gaara's girl!
I liked their Terra and Gaara's story and the way Gaara had proposed her lol it totally fit him haha can't wait for Gaara to actually propose her for real, that would be... extremely exciting lol
On to the next chapter ;) I try to read slowly so by the time I reach Ch13, you'd update this or else I can't wait to find out what will happen next
Thanks for writing and sharing my friend ;)
Okay... this is weird... just what happened to Rasa? Didn't he talk to Terra? I thought we will have more of his thoughts over the his son's bride! lol
Itachi's gang! YAY I'm loving the fact that you brought up Akatsuki too and I just LOVE Hidan haha
Gaara gets jealous over his WIFE because she seems too close to deidara? Hmm that's suspicious and interesting, I think Deidara is gay though lol I don't know I always thought Deidara was gay so I think he's no threat to Gaara's relationship haha
Ah that Kabuto dude is here too?! Damn! I hope Gaara kicks his ass! gosh I'm starting to dislike him as well in this story! How dare he steals Gaara's girl!
I liked their Terra and Gaara's story and the way Gaara had proposed her lol it totally fit him haha can't wait for Gaara to actually propose her for real, that would be... extremely exciting lol
On to the next chapter ;) I try to read slowly so by the time I reach Ch13, you'd update this or else I can't wait to find out what will happen next
Thanks for writing and sharing my friend ;)
11/16/2015 c8 Lady The Warrior
Kabuto is a sneaky bastard just like in canon, so I definitely think he feels lust about Terra but I think what Gaara has here is something real. And no I don't think Terra is emotional, I like her as she is. She's not a crybaby, she's just normal and acts like every other teenage girl in these kind of relationships
Although I thought maybe Shawn is here to claim Terra back, that might add a little twist to this story and I hope Gaara shows Terra his kind side too.
Another thing I wanted to add, I told you Gaara was OOC, now I think I should take it back, Gaara's actually just like what he was early in canon, wanting his father's attention and hating his father and all. I think if we drag Gaara from anime and shove him into a drama teenage movie, he'd be exactly as you pictured and I'm kinda too sad to see he's insomniac in this story too :( poor little Gaara. although I thought it would've been better if you describe Gaara as not that tall and muscular cause well not only in anime, Gaara was short and fragile among other boys but also insomniac people usually are thin and light, they don't put on muscle that much cause they can't eat much then again they can exercise or work out, so that's kinda unreal to say that Gaara is tall and muscular and in shape and all cause he really isn't and can't be. Well he can be and IS handsome and good looking and cute but muscular with abs and huge bicep? I doubt it .
All in all, so far so good
Let's see what happens next
Kabuto is a sneaky bastard just like in canon, so I definitely think he feels lust about Terra but I think what Gaara has here is something real. And no I don't think Terra is emotional, I like her as she is. She's not a crybaby, she's just normal and acts like every other teenage girl in these kind of relationships
Although I thought maybe Shawn is here to claim Terra back, that might add a little twist to this story and I hope Gaara shows Terra his kind side too.
Another thing I wanted to add, I told you Gaara was OOC, now I think I should take it back, Gaara's actually just like what he was early in canon, wanting his father's attention and hating his father and all. I think if we drag Gaara from anime and shove him into a drama teenage movie, he'd be exactly as you pictured and I'm kinda too sad to see he's insomniac in this story too :( poor little Gaara. although I thought it would've been better if you describe Gaara as not that tall and muscular cause well not only in anime, Gaara was short and fragile among other boys but also insomniac people usually are thin and light, they don't put on muscle that much cause they can't eat much then again they can exercise or work out, so that's kinda unreal to say that Gaara is tall and muscular and in shape and all cause he really isn't and can't be. Well he can be and IS handsome and good looking and cute but muscular with abs and huge bicep? I doubt it .
All in all, so far so good
Let's see what happens next
11/16/2015 c7 Lady The Warrior
Okay I'm still halfway of this chapter but I had so much in my mind about this story that I thought if I don't tell you now, I'd probably forget them by the end of this chapter
First of all, I find Gaara a tad bit...err... more than a tad bit really, OOC but I don't know why I like this version of him, gosh like he is so bad but still desiring! Damn I like him in this story anyway, maybe because this is AU so I don't care that much if Gaara swears a lot ( might be a kind of metaphor as in canon he used to kill people a lot) and he hates his family well duh, obviously and he has piercings( Can totally imagine him with piercings lol) and he's a heartless bastard (Well he was a heartless bastard before Naruto goes talk-no-jutsu on him) Any way I like him! And I so adore your OC, Terra, she's just really cool and way too good for Gaara. I actually never read GaaraxOC or Gaaraxany-other-character in general cause I think Gaara is never a man to get laid like in canon but this one is really an exception all because: firstly this is an AU and secondly Terra is not just one those of too nice, goodie-two-shoes girls who stutter around Gaara and blush! Ew..I hate those OCs. But Terra's fine, in some ways she kinda reminds me of Temari or Tenten lol.
We move on to Kabuto! Gosh I hated him in the canon but the funny thing is I actually like him in this story, he's a pervert that's pretty obvious but he's actually a cool dude. I don't like him around Terra though, like Terra and Gaara should be together! see I already ship them! haha
This love triangle thing that you brought up in your story, as cheesy as it may sound but it works totally fine in this story! I'm loving the fact that Terra had found herself somewhere between Gaara and Kabuto and I'm telling you she totally should choose Gaara, if it goes like in the canon then Gaara could turn from a total dick into a kind and loving person haha
Okay I think that's it for now, I'm still reading this chapter, so far so good let's see what happens next now ;)
Okay I'm still halfway of this chapter but I had so much in my mind about this story that I thought if I don't tell you now, I'd probably forget them by the end of this chapter
First of all, I find Gaara a tad bit...err... more than a tad bit really, OOC but I don't know why I like this version of him, gosh like he is so bad but still desiring! Damn I like him in this story anyway, maybe because this is AU so I don't care that much if Gaara swears a lot ( might be a kind of metaphor as in canon he used to kill people a lot) and he hates his family well duh, obviously and he has piercings( Can totally imagine him with piercings lol) and he's a heartless bastard (Well he was a heartless bastard before Naruto goes talk-no-jutsu on him) Any way I like him! And I so adore your OC, Terra, she's just really cool and way too good for Gaara. I actually never read GaaraxOC or Gaaraxany-other-character in general cause I think Gaara is never a man to get laid like in canon but this one is really an exception all because: firstly this is an AU and secondly Terra is not just one those of too nice, goodie-two-shoes girls who stutter around Gaara and blush! Ew..I hate those OCs. But Terra's fine, in some ways she kinda reminds me of Temari or Tenten lol.
We move on to Kabuto! Gosh I hated him in the canon but the funny thing is I actually like him in this story, he's a pervert that's pretty obvious but he's actually a cool dude. I don't like him around Terra though, like Terra and Gaara should be together! see I already ship them! haha
This love triangle thing that you brought up in your story, as cheesy as it may sound but it works totally fine in this story! I'm loving the fact that Terra had found herself somewhere between Gaara and Kabuto and I'm telling you she totally should choose Gaara, if it goes like in the canon then Gaara could turn from a total dick into a kind and loving person haha
Okay I think that's it for now, I'm still reading this chapter, so far so good let's see what happens next now ;)
10/1/2015 c12 1Paranoid4ndroid
Thanks for the update ;) I really liked your Deidara - I don't think he's out of charakter at all, as we just don't see this side of him in the mangas/anime :)
And I really hope he's opened her eyes to the fact that there ARE feelings for Gaara and she'll start to act on them...
1Paranoid4ndroidThanks for the update ;) I really liked your Deidara - I don't think he's out of charakter at all, as we just don't see this side of him in the mangas/anime :)
And I really hope he's opened her eyes to the fact that there ARE feelings for Gaara and she'll start to act on them...
8/10/2015 c11 Paranoid4ndroid
Yeah – didn't think you'd update so soon, but I'm glad you did :)
I loved how Terry described the beginning of their relationship :D It showed how well they know each other and when Gaara took over and told about his proposal – it was just such a nice idea, and so very fitting to his charakter :D I don't think he was OOC at all in this chapter :)
and that she has a history with Deidara is certainly making things even more interesting – though I dearly hope that the triangle won't become a square... the triangle is complicated enough as it is - and I'm very much in favor of Gaara...
Thanks for the update – and I hope the next will follow soon ;)
Yeah – didn't think you'd update so soon, but I'm glad you did :)
I loved how Terry described the beginning of their relationship :D It showed how well they know each other and when Gaara took over and told about his proposal – it was just such a nice idea, and so very fitting to his charakter :D I don't think he was OOC at all in this chapter :)
and that she has a history with Deidara is certainly making things even more interesting – though I dearly hope that the triangle won't become a square... the triangle is complicated enough as it is - and I'm very much in favor of Gaara...
Thanks for the update – and I hope the next will follow soon ;)
8/10/2015 c11 5Leahcar-Soutaichou
It's been so long... *pulls out a cane* sooo long. Since you updated.. but it was awesome! Hope to see more soon!
5Leahcar-SoutaichouIt's been so long... *pulls out a cane* sooo long. Since you updated.. but it was awesome! Hope to see more soon!
8/4/2015 c10 1Paranoid4ndroid
I just found your story and had to read it in one sitting ' I love how you built the tension between Terra and Gaara and I'm already aching to read more - I hope you'll update soon ;) I'm curious to know how Raasa will react to Terra XD
Thanks for this great story!
1Paranoid4ndroidI just found your story and had to read it in one sitting ' I love how you built the tension between Terra and Gaara and I'm already aching to read more - I hope you'll update soon ;) I'm curious to know how Raasa will react to Terra XD
Thanks for this great story!
4/7/2015 c10 Dance Seduction
I really like your story it follows a common storyline, but it's original in its own way. You're very creative in the way you portray the characters. I always look forward to your updates!
I really like your story it follows a common storyline, but it's original in its own way. You're very creative in the way you portray the characters. I always look forward to your updates!
1/29/2014 c7 6Solace in the Chaos
I very, oh so rarely, like OC stories.
But, I'm suprised to say that I actually like your side characters? I don't even know what that happened!
Meh, I'll be looking forward to when you update! :)
6Solace in the ChaosI very, oh so rarely, like OC stories.
But, I'm suprised to say that I actually like your side characters? I don't even know what that happened!
Meh, I'll be looking forward to when you update! :)