for Bringer of Death5/31/2012 c3 Mogrim27
Great story so far i like the switch up with vegeta i can't wait to see where u go with this story
Great story so far i like the switch up with vegeta i can't wait to see where u go with this story
5/31/2012 c3 
3npberryhill
I am overjoyed that everyone has enjoyed the story so far! It has been a ton of fun to write. The good news is, the more I write the more I want to continue the story. Be assured, this story will continue beyond the events of Frieza.
I am about to release Chapter 4. In the future I will only do one chapter at a time, but since it is relatively short and I currently have a lot more done I am feeling generous enough to publish it today.
In the meantime, I will plan to release a chapter each Tuesday and Thursday, providing I am able to keep up.
Thanks for reading!
3npberryhillI am overjoyed that everyone has enjoyed the story so far! It has been a ton of fun to write. The good news is, the more I write the more I want to continue the story. Be assured, this story will continue beyond the events of Frieza.
I am about to release Chapter 4. In the future I will only do one chapter at a time, but since it is relatively short and I currently have a lot more done I am feeling generous enough to publish it today.
In the meantime, I will plan to release a chapter each Tuesday and Thursday, providing I am able to keep up.
Thanks for reading!
5/29/2012 c1 davidstarlingm
An excellent beginning. The premise is clear, concise, and easy to follow. I love the way it draws you into the psyche of Vegeta.
Excited to read more.
An excellent beginning. The premise is clear, concise, and easy to follow. I love the way it draws you into the psyche of Vegeta.
Excited to read more.
5/29/2012 c1 3npberryhill
I definitely will continue the story. I plan to release parts 3 and 4 later this week, probably Thursday. So check back in!
3npberryhillI definitely will continue the story. I plan to release parts 3 and 4 later this week, probably Thursday. So check back in!
5/29/2012 c2 29daughterofrisingsun
Excellent job writing the action scenes! I imagine this is exactly how Frieza would have reacted to a "Super Saiyan Vegeta.
29daughterofrisingsunExcellent job writing the action scenes! I imagine this is exactly how Frieza would have reacted to a "Super Saiyan Vegeta.
5/29/2012 c1 daughterofrisingsun
Great story concept if it's been done before I've never seen it. Very nice job on Vegeta's viewpoint as he was feeling defeat.Keep going please!
Great story concept if it's been done before I've never seen it. Very nice job on Vegeta's viewpoint as he was feeling defeat.Keep going please!