for Devil among Shinobi7/15/2022 c6 Guest
What is it with you sick fuqs and incest
What is it with you sick fuqs and incest
11/26/2020 c4 
12MacMan3679
I think you went easy on Sasuke, if he wanted their weapons so much, Naruto should've let him have them... in the knees. One good kneecap, would've ended his thirst for the weapons real quick.
12MacMan3679I think you went easy on Sasuke, if he wanted their weapons so much, Naruto should've let him have them... in the knees. One good kneecap, would've ended his thirst for the weapons real quick.
3/25/2019 c3 Redrangerlegacy
If you had made a third version of this story, would Nero have gotten the Balrog devil arm from Devil May Cry 5, while everyone else got the other devil arms from that game?
If you had made a third version of this story, would Nero have gotten the Balrog devil arm from Devil May Cry 5, while everyone else got the other devil arms from that game?
11/25/2018 c4 Prototype10987
Id say instead of water for isobu itd be cool to do coral, its weapon could be a great shield that slams down n causes a mass of coral to spike out simliar to the dead bone pulse move
Id say instead of water for isobu itd be cool to do coral, its weapon could be a great shield that slams down n causes a mass of coral to spike out simliar to the dead bone pulse move
12/8/2016 c1 Manosikvabe-Mrito
Read first paragraph and become really disappointed..to make this story incestous you have changed the original naruto...let's change his name and give him your name or can't people write story about naruto neglect fic without incest..and i don't care if you do that but changing the whole naruto for that? Than what is the reason to read it anyway?
Read first paragraph and become really disappointed..to make this story incestous you have changed the original naruto...let's change his name and give him your name or can't people write story about naruto neglect fic without incest..and i don't care if you do that but changing the whole naruto for that? Than what is the reason to read it anyway?
9/15/2016 c4 Dner
I liked this story but I hate Incest so im not going to conti ie reading btw With Narutos background he should never forgive them becouse what they did was unforgiveable
and he should off hate his sister also
kthxbye
I liked this story but I hate Incest so im not going to conti ie reading btw With Narutos background he should never forgive them becouse what they did was unforgiveable
and he should off hate his sister also
kthxbye
6/17/2016 c1 Guest
It was good make more chapters I've already read all the chapters please make more
It was good make more chapters I've already read all the chapters please make more