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11/26/2020 c4 15MacMan3679
I think you went easy on Sasuke, if he wanted their weapons so much, Naruto should've let him have them... in the knees. One good kneecap, would've ended his thirst for the weapons real quick.
3/25/2019 c3 Redrangerlegacy
If you had made a third version of this story, would Nero have gotten the Balrog devil arm from Devil May Cry 5, while everyone else got the other devil arms from that game?
3/15/2019 c6 Darth revan1998
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11/25/2018 c4 Prototype10987
Id say instead of water for isobu itd be cool to do coral, its weapon could be a great shield that slams down n causes a mass of coral to spike out simliar to the dead bone pulse move
7/23/2018 c3 MacMan3679
Shizune, you could at least pair Vergil with someone powerful, like Mei.
5/22/2018 c9 4Monster King
Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it.
6/7/2017 c1 Dino aids
cheytac intervention m300...
ah I see your a man of culture as well
1/21/2017 c9 6my 2 guys
that was good keep the chapters coming
12/8/2016 c1 Manosikvabe-Mrito
Read first paragraph and become really disappointed..to make this story incestous you have changed the original naruto...let's change his name and give him your name or can't people write story about naruto neglect fic without incest..and i don't care if you do that but changing the whole naruto for that? Than what is the reason to read it anyway?
9/23/2016 c9 1NARUTO-UZUMAKI-NAMAKAZI
i liked this fanfiction it was great
9/19/2016 c3 4Michael Bourne
There must be a hell gate somewhere in the elemental nations
9/15/2016 c4 Dner
I liked this story but I hate Incest so im not going to conti ie reading btw With Narutos background he should never forgive them becouse what they did was unforgiveable
and he should off hate his sister also
kthxbye
6/17/2016 c1 Guest
It was good make more chapters I've already read all the chapters please make more
5/2/2016 c6 Aurora - Kitsune Lord Of Fire
Now I know why I stopped reading this piece of garbage, second chance my ass you Kishimoto loving son of a bitch.
2/11/2016 c1 Mr. 666
please stop writing in pov
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