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8/10/2012 c1 6Kunari801
Ah, that's so sweet!
7/1/2012 c1 39karebear
Excellent. Just... that is my reaction to the whole thing. The sex, the bit of humor at the end, the "master of compromise" line. I love the way you capture this sense of natural ease between the two of them. Really nicely done.
6/8/2012 c1 24Apathyisdeath
Oh wow, amazing stuff (HOT)! And that ending was hilarious...poor Hackett.
5/30/2012 c1 13MsFemaleGamerUK
really goood thanks for this
5/29/2012 c1 12PestoMonkey
Very sweet story! I enjoyed it immensely, especially because I hail from NC and used to spend family vacations at the Outer Banks. It's positively beautiful there so it was very easy to visualize the entire scene.

But there are a few technical details near the end that I would change, not the least of which is the switch of perspective. Send me a PM if you want me to give you more details.

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