
6/20/2012 c1
9Kasumi Izukawa
This is so beautiful. From the exploration of thoughts and reasonings to the lack of cliches on how everything was smoothed out. Really great story.

This is so beautiful. From the exploration of thoughts and reasonings to the lack of cliches on how everything was smoothed out. Really great story.
6/2/2012 c1
5Orthographer
I'm still stuck on the Rae writes St. Berry bit of this, but once I get over it, and a certain girl in my head stops scowiling, I'm sure I'll really like it.

I'm still stuck on the Rae writes St. Berry bit of this, but once I get over it, and a certain girl in my head stops scowiling, I'm sure I'll really like it.
6/1/2012 c1 Guest
They're so sweet together, I can't wait for more!
They're so sweet together, I can't wait for more!
6/1/2012 c1 nessyschu
I don't really care for St. Berry either, but since it's you... ;) Anyway, the first chapter was great! Can't wait for more!
I don't really care for St. Berry either, but since it's you... ;) Anyway, the first chapter was great! Can't wait for more!
5/31/2012 c1
3navigatethismaze
I AM SO EXCITED, OH MY DEAR LORD. HAVE I MENTIONED I'M EXCITED ON SKYPE? BECAUSE I AM EXCITED. JUST SO YOU KNOW. BABIES. HELP. INCOHERENCY. THIS IS UNHELPFUL. /WAILING

I AM SO EXCITED, OH MY DEAR LORD. HAVE I MENTIONED I'M EXCITED ON SKYPE? BECAUSE I AM EXCITED. JUST SO YOU KNOW. BABIES. HELP. INCOHERENCY. THIS IS UNHELPFUL. /WAILING