for JIA Case Files : Street of Tokyo1/29/2019 c10 
9Aldraia Dragonsong
A truly lovely story, binged the whole thing (well, almost done with binging the whole thing, but details). I noticed a couple of typos in this chapter, though, and the first one is really confusing.
[Aoshi glowered. "You had that the whole time he asked?"]
I think you meant to put: "You had that the whole time?" he asked.
["It's going to be fine," Sano said, as they walked up the stiars.]
Last word is supposed to be spelled 'stairs'.
Really enjoying this, moving on to the next chapter right now!
9Aldraia DragonsongA truly lovely story, binged the whole thing (well, almost done with binging the whole thing, but details). I noticed a couple of typos in this chapter, though, and the first one is really confusing.
[Aoshi glowered. "You had that the whole time he asked?"]
I think you meant to put: "You had that the whole time?" he asked.
["It's going to be fine," Sano said, as they walked up the stiars.]
Last word is supposed to be spelled 'stairs'.
Really enjoying this, moving on to the next chapter right now!
9/10/2017 c12 cj-the-fool
This was a beautiful story...Damn i never thought I'd say this about an action packed fanfic...but it was more than the run of the mill dishoom dishoom story...I v can't get over Enishi's ending...he was able to give Kaoru his heart... Usually i am a staunch supporter of kenkao but... Enishi stole my heart in this fic... Although their interaction was bare minimum... I really wish in the next life they get to unite as lovers..
This was a beautiful story...Damn i never thought I'd say this about an action packed fanfic...but it was more than the run of the mill dishoom dishoom story...I v can't get over Enishi's ending...he was able to give Kaoru his heart... Usually i am a staunch supporter of kenkao but... Enishi stole my heart in this fic... Although their interaction was bare minimum... I really wish in the next life they get to unite as lovers..
8/6/2015 c12 My Whispers In The Dark
I am glad that everyone is okay in the end, especially where Misao got to the end what she wanted, Aoshi. Very good story, it is nice to know what will happen in the sequel.
I am glad that everyone is okay in the end, especially where Misao got to the end what she wanted, Aoshi. Very good story, it is nice to know what will happen in the sequel.
8/6/2015 c11 My Whispers In The Dark
The scene between Kaoru and Enishi was really special. I hope that Kaoru is well and that others can come out of this soon.
The scene between Kaoru and Enishi was really special. I hope that Kaoru is well and that others can come out of this soon.
8/5/2015 c10 My Whispers In The Dark
Wow, it was a shame that at the end Yumi caught both Sano and Megumi, but it was expected since Megumi never leave a wounded person just to save herself. Misao is very impressive and I like her to show Aoshi that can take care of herself.
Wow, it was a shame that at the end Yumi caught both Sano and Megumi, but it was expected since Megumi never leave a wounded person just to save herself. Misao is very impressive and I like her to show Aoshi that can take care of herself.
8/5/2015 c9 My Whispers In The Dark
Very good Kaoru can handle helicopters, it is something quite new. Good way to get Aoshi has no choice but to go to Osaka. Was good interaction between Sano and Megumi, Ohh the final part is interesting, I would not expect to see Yumi.
Very good Kaoru can handle helicopters, it is something quite new. Good way to get Aoshi has no choice but to go to Osaka. Was good interaction between Sano and Megumi, Ohh the final part is interesting, I would not expect to see Yumi.
8/5/2015 c8 My Whispers In The Dark
I liked the scene Aoshi and Misao was very good. So Kenshin wants to spend more time with Kaoru, maybe later. And what happened to Sanosuke and Megumi, I really hope that they also have some action.
I liked the scene Aoshi and Misao was very good. So Kenshin wants to spend more time with Kaoru, maybe later. And what happened to Sanosuke and Megumi, I really hope that they also have some action.
8/5/2015 c7 My Whispers In The Dark
If Enishi is Neechi, what will happen to him when he finds out that Kenshin was the murderer of his sister, a disaster is coming. It's nice to see that they formed a family without blood ties.
If Enishi is Neechi, what will happen to him when he finds out that Kenshin was the murderer of his sister, a disaster is coming. It's nice to see that they formed a family without blood ties.
8/5/2015 c6 My Whispers In The Dark
Wow that scene at the hospital was very good, I really did not expect to Misao suddenly appear and be an expert in bombs. With that Hiko finally appeared, this is getting very good.
Wow that scene at the hospital was very good, I really did not expect to Misao suddenly appear and be an expert in bombs. With that Hiko finally appeared, this is getting very good.
8/5/2015 c5 My Whispers In The Dark
That rather than Misao came on time with Aoshi, now he has more time to come up with Kaoru, I hope Kenshin can do something, and aside to help with the bomb in the hospital, it seems that everyone will have to run for their lives.
That rather than Misao came on time with Aoshi, now he has more time to come up with Kaoru, I hope Kenshin can do something, and aside to help with the bomb in the hospital, it seems that everyone will have to run for their lives.
8/5/2015 c4 My Whispers In The Dark
I liked that Kaoru was able to leave their state to face Enishi, the hospital was also funny, Sanosuke and Megumi fighting while criminals try to draw the intention of both. The last part left me in suspense.
I liked that Kaoru was able to leave their state to face Enishi, the hospital was also funny, Sanosuke and Megumi fighting while criminals try to draw the intention of both. The last part left me in suspense.
8/4/2015 c3 My Whispers In The Dark
Luckily Kenshin came close to help Kaoru, after all Greek Ouzo bottle unhurt, very typical of the situation. Sano has not woken up yet? Megumi is rightly worried about him, after all it is uncommon for a person being shot in front of her.
Luckily Kenshin came close to help Kaoru, after all Greek Ouzo bottle unhurt, very typical of the situation. Sano has not woken up yet? Megumi is rightly worried about him, after all it is uncommon for a person being shot in front of her.
8/4/2015 c2 My Whispers In The Dark
Interesting, so they misled Kenshin for him to return with Hiten, at least he will not betray Kaoru yet.
Interesting, so they misled Kenshin for him to return with Hiten, at least he will not betray Kaoru yet.
8/3/2015 c1 My Whispers In The Dark
This story really has a good start and I think this will be very interesting.
This story really has a good start and I think this will be very interesting.
7/19/2015 c12 11SunBinamra
Awesome story! I love the idea of Aoshi playing big brother - don't ask me why, it's probably OOC but it's still so cute. I love the way you write all the characters actually...
And of course, the plot was fantastic. Love this series!
11SunBinamraAwesome story! I love the idea of Aoshi playing big brother - don't ask me why, it's probably OOC but it's still so cute. I love the way you write all the characters actually...
And of course, the plot was fantastic. Love this series!