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9The Awesome Novice Writer
To think that I forgot to review the final chapter. Lol, I was looking to see what others had said about it when I discovered that I didn't review. I'm glad that Alby won instead of Jolie, wonder how that would have turned out. When he came home, I kept on thinking "Ritneli can't be dead." Thank god she wasn't, I don't know what Alby would have done to those kids if she was. A happy ending, everything will go on like normal, but better. Well, I hope your happy with this story, seven months it took. Wish you well with future works.
9The Awesome Novice WriterTo think that I forgot to review the final chapter. Lol, I was looking to see what others had said about it when I discovered that I didn't review. I'm glad that Alby won instead of Jolie, wonder how that would have turned out. When he came home, I kept on thinking "Ritneli can't be dead." Thank god she wasn't, I don't know what Alby would have done to those kids if she was. A happy ending, everything will go on like normal, but better. Well, I hope your happy with this story, seven months it took. Wish you well with future works.
12/26/2012 c28 Shipwreckedd
Oh gosh! I cannot believe this!
Okay whoa! Chapter 26 with Ryder; that made me cry like a little girl. So so sad. I think it had to be one of my favorite chapters. I love that you showed us a bit from Ryder's lover from back home, that just broke my heart. I loved the way you wrote him, very cocky and fun. And a very tragic ending.
Oh no! Katia cant be sick! Shes made it so close to the end to just die from illness, I hope she fights it out!
Oh my gosh! That was gruesome even for evil Jolie, poor Katia, lava and decapitated. That was all kinds of messed up.
And I cannot believe that Alby killed Jolie! Finally snapped and he won!
This is really really awesome!
Thank you so much, its really one of the coolest things when a tribute wins the games!
I cannot wait to read the return home chapter! Its been amazing to be apart of this story!
And until next time...
Cheers!
Oh gosh! I cannot believe this!
Okay whoa! Chapter 26 with Ryder; that made me cry like a little girl. So so sad. I think it had to be one of my favorite chapters. I love that you showed us a bit from Ryder's lover from back home, that just broke my heart. I loved the way you wrote him, very cocky and fun. And a very tragic ending.
Oh no! Katia cant be sick! Shes made it so close to the end to just die from illness, I hope she fights it out!
Oh my gosh! That was gruesome even for evil Jolie, poor Katia, lava and decapitated. That was all kinds of messed up.
And I cannot believe that Alby killed Jolie! Finally snapped and he won!
This is really really awesome!
Thank you so much, its really one of the coolest things when a tribute wins the games!
I cannot wait to read the return home chapter! Its been amazing to be apart of this story!
And until next time...
Cheers!
12/26/2012 c25 Shipwreckedd
Oh wow! I cannot believe how much of this I've missed, been so far behind, and super busy, but I'm so glad you messaged me to get my butt back here!
I cannot believe Katia killed Tansy, her and Thunnus were so sweet; but after hearing a bit of her back story I guess it makes sense, so sad. I really like Katia, shes really complex, a good balance of sympathetic and willing to survive.
And I'm glad they became allies!
I always liked Aurora, definitely sad to see her go!
Haha; and I've been lovin' Ryder in these few chapters- loved that her stood up to Jolie, and messing with Alby! They've got a nice team going the three of them, very exciting!
Can't wait to get caught up and see what the final four are up to!
Cheers!
Oh wow! I cannot believe how much of this I've missed, been so far behind, and super busy, but I'm so glad you messaged me to get my butt back here!
I cannot believe Katia killed Tansy, her and Thunnus were so sweet; but after hearing a bit of her back story I guess it makes sense, so sad. I really like Katia, shes really complex, a good balance of sympathetic and willing to survive.
And I'm glad they became allies!
I always liked Aurora, definitely sad to see her go!
Haha; and I've been lovin' Ryder in these few chapters- loved that her stood up to Jolie, and messing with Alby! They've got a nice team going the three of them, very exciting!
Can't wait to get caught up and see what the final four are up to!
Cheers!
12/16/2012 c26 Guest
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12/15/2012 c28 The Awesome Novice Writer
Well, I just have to say, it's about god dang time Jolie died. But for Katia to die like that. Oh man that was harsh. Stupid Jolie, you were so into tormenting District 6 that you let your guard down.
Well, I'm happy that Alby won, and I'm really glad that he decided that Jolie wasn't an Angel and she's really a demon.
I thought that Jolie would have put up more of a fight, but, whatever.
I can't wait to see how District 9 reacts with Alby's return. I bet interesting things will happen.
One thing I noticed though, when you said peacemakers, did you really mean peacekeepers or gamemakers?
Anyway, whoo, awesome chapter!
Well, I just have to say, it's about god dang time Jolie died. But for Katia to die like that. Oh man that was harsh. Stupid Jolie, you were so into tormenting District 6 that you let your guard down.
Well, I'm happy that Alby won, and I'm really glad that he decided that Jolie wasn't an Angel and she's really a demon.
I thought that Jolie would have put up more of a fight, but, whatever.
I can't wait to see how District 9 reacts with Alby's return. I bet interesting things will happen.
One thing I noticed though, when you said peacemakers, did you really mean peacekeepers or gamemakers?
Anyway, whoo, awesome chapter!
11/4/2012 c27 The Awesome Novice Writer
Wow, Jolie seems very confident, maybe a little too confident. Oh god, you just have to be that way Jolie, take her meds why don't you. Poor Katia, she's not going to feel well soon, unless Jolie falls from the tree and breaks her head open. LOL. Two chapters left!? Wow, wonder what will happen then. As for a new SYOT, do you want to? My opinion, wait for your life to calm down a little bit, you seem to be doing a lot of things at the moment.
Wow, Jolie seems very confident, maybe a little too confident. Oh god, you just have to be that way Jolie, take her meds why don't you. Poor Katia, she's not going to feel well soon, unless Jolie falls from the tree and breaks her head open. LOL. Two chapters left!? Wow, wonder what will happen then. As for a new SYOT, do you want to? My opinion, wait for your life to calm down a little bit, you seem to be doing a lot of things at the moment.
11/3/2012 c27 16goldie031
I would certainly advise a new SYOT. I'd submit! Otherwise, great chapter, and I can't wait to read more!
16goldie031I would certainly advise a new SYOT. I'd submit! Otherwise, great chapter, and I can't wait to read more!
11/3/2012 c27 7Cashmere67
Oh, this chapter made me like Jolie much more!
She really is merciless and does not care about anyone else but herself.
I can see Katia gaining the strength to do something to Jolie, but I want Jolie to win.
Jolie really is arrogant xD. But she can definitely back it up.
Yes :D! You should make another SYOT, if you have the time, of course.
7Cashmere67Oh, this chapter made me like Jolie much more!
She really is merciless and does not care about anyone else but herself.
I can see Katia gaining the strength to do something to Jolie, but I want Jolie to win.
Jolie really is arrogant xD. But she can definitely back it up.
Yes :D! You should make another SYOT, if you have the time, of course.
11/1/2012 c26 Cashmere67
This chapter was very interesting. Very emotional too. I would have never expected him to be a father - I wonder how Lilia will be able to do it since Ryder is now dead.
But, I am still rooting for Jolie! Most SYOTs never have a Career become the victor, so I really hope she does! I like Katia and Alby, but I can't see them actually winning.
Besides, Jolie is definitely the strongest and has the highest kill count.
This chapter was very interesting. Very emotional too. I would have never expected him to be a father - I wonder how Lilia will be able to do it since Ryder is now dead.
But, I am still rooting for Jolie! Most SYOTs never have a Career become the victor, so I really hope she does! I like Katia and Alby, but I can't see them actually winning.
Besides, Jolie is definitely the strongest and has the highest kill count.
10/9/2012 c26 9The Awesome Novice Writer
Nooooohohohooooooo! Noooo! Oh god why!? This was not what I expected. Oh god, Ryder was a father!? Wow, that really sucks. And he never knew.
Well, have fun with your Broadway show and have fun looking at the college.
9The Awesome Novice WriterNooooohohohooooooo! Noooo! Oh god why!? This was not what I expected. Oh god, Ryder was a father!? Wow, that really sucks. And he never knew.
Well, have fun with your Broadway show and have fun looking at the college.
10/7/2012 c26 16goldie031
I hope Katia wins, because I really like her, but I think that Jolie has a better chance.
16goldie031I hope Katia wins, because I really like her, but I think that Jolie has a better chance.
10/1/2012 c25 9The Awesome Novice Writer
Still no deaths huh, ah well. You know, I can't wait till the next chapter because I think I know who's going to die next. I also bet everyone's going to be like "at goddang last." But Alby, what if it's up to you to kill her?
9The Awesome Novice WriterStill no deaths huh, ah well. You know, I can't wait till the next chapter because I think I know who's going to die next. I also bet everyone's going to be like "at goddang last." But Alby, what if it's up to you to kill her?
9/30/2012 c25 Guest
I'm so glad to see he's still alive! 3 I missed a few chapters lol. :D
I'm so glad to see he's still alive! 3 I missed a few chapters lol. :D
9/8/2012 c24 9The Awesome Novice Writer
Lol, the lighting has perfect timing if you thing about it. Sorry about the game. Why didn't you kill him Jolie? Oh no, a blizzard, this isn't good. You know, that would be a horrible way to die, freaking frost bite.
9The Awesome Novice WriterLol, the lighting has perfect timing if you thing about it. Sorry about the game. Why didn't you kill him Jolie? Oh no, a blizzard, this isn't good. You know, that would be a horrible way to die, freaking frost bite.