for The Big Apple6/1/2012 c15 Shipwreckedd
Oh cool! Love the alliances! Interesting Career pack! I really liked how diverse they all are. Cotton seems a little too nice to be a Career, and his character progression seems to be going backwards, which I like. Hes starting as the nice guy, but plotting in his head. I like how they made Nikkie the leader, a bit of a challenge for Talus. Silver was great, already plotting her first kill! I'm not sure how I feel about Talus, hes smart, but he seems a little upset at things not going his way. Fuscous POV was really neat; I liked his view of all the others, and it seems like we're learning more about his weaknesses.
Really great! Love these guys, and this story!
-Cheers!
Oh cool! Love the alliances! Interesting Career pack! I really liked how diverse they all are. Cotton seems a little too nice to be a Career, and his character progression seems to be going backwards, which I like. Hes starting as the nice guy, but plotting in his head. I like how they made Nikkie the leader, a bit of a challenge for Talus. Silver was great, already plotting her first kill! I'm not sure how I feel about Talus, hes smart, but he seems a little upset at things not going his way. Fuscous POV was really neat; I liked his view of all the others, and it seems like we're learning more about his weaknesses.
Really great! Love these guys, and this story!
-Cheers!
6/1/2012 c16 Tonmber1
I haven't reviewed in a while but I like how this story is going, I find myself in the shoes of all of the tributes. Really well written.
I haven't reviewed in a while but I like how this story is going, I find myself in the shoes of all of the tributes. Really well written.
6/1/2012 c14 Shipwreckedd
Aw what a fun chapter! I loved just reading everyones little description, and I loved how you made it from a Capital POV. District 2 is quite the show boat! His flip and wink were fun. Ohhh D3 was really cool, loved the robot/love! District 5 was really unique too, "There has been a new fad over them ever since the book 'midnight' (twighlight), came out." -Ahh very clever! And I love what you did with Jude and D6! So cool! Ohh D9 being all fiesty, I feel bad for Sonya though. :( And I liked D12s fireworks! Really loved everyone! Chariots are one of my personal favs! Great job!
-Cheers!
Aw what a fun chapter! I loved just reading everyones little description, and I loved how you made it from a Capital POV. District 2 is quite the show boat! His flip and wink were fun. Ohhh D3 was really cool, loved the robot/love! District 5 was really unique too, "There has been a new fad over them ever since the book 'midnight' (twighlight), came out." -Ahh very clever! And I love what you did with Jude and D6! So cool! Ohh D9 being all fiesty, I feel bad for Sonya though. :( And I liked D12s fireworks! Really loved everyone! Chariots are one of my personal favs! Great job!
-Cheers!
6/1/2012 c13 Shipwreckedd
I really love all the ideas you have floating in this! It feels like you've put tons of thought into everything. Really liked that you did a chapter on head gamemaker thoughts. Its very interesting!
And man am I glad to see this story up again! Gotta catch up on what ive missed!
-Cheers!
I really love all the ideas you have floating in this! It feels like you've put tons of thought into everything. Really liked that you did a chapter on head gamemaker thoughts. Its very interesting!
And man am I glad to see this story up again! Gotta catch up on what ive missed!
-Cheers!
6/1/2012 c16 
5SakuraDreamerz
*laughs at Evans, Zombie's and Jude's pranks, ESPECIALLY at the itch-water!* lolol! XDDD
5SakuraDreamerz*laughs at Evans, Zombie's and Jude's pranks, ESPECIALLY at the itch-water!* lolol! XDDD
6/1/2012 c15 SakuraDreamerz
hhrrrmmmm, Clyde looks good with a sword! come to think of it, so do the others!
hhrrrmmmm, Clyde looks good with a sword! come to think of it, so do the others!
6/1/2012 c16 5Trapped In Narnia
Love how they all climbed the wall so easily and can't wait to see their talents come out in the arena! Write fast!
5Trapped In NarniaLove how they all climbed the wall so easily and can't wait to see their talents come out in the arena! Write fast!
6/1/2012 c15 ChocolateTear
Great chapter. You obvioustly updated as fast as possible. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Great chapter. You obvioustly updated as fast as possible. I can't wait for the next chapter.