for The Big Apple7/15/2012 c37 
5Trapped In Narnia
OH GOD WHY NIGHTINGALE! PLEASE TELL ME THIS IS A ZOMBIE TRICK PLEASE WAKE UP NIGHTINGALE I LOVE YOU! NO NO NO NO NO YOU CANT BE GONE YOU AND JUDE WERE SUPPOSED TO WIIIIIIIN! YOU HAD IT PLANNED TOO YOU WERE DOING SO WELL HOW COULD YOU BE SO STUPID RUNNING OUT LIKE THAT YOU SHOULD HAVE JUST HID IN THE BUILDING! STUPID JUDE CLEARLY SHE WAS ACTING LIKE SHE WAS DEAD YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO SAY FOUR! I HOPE YOUR HAPPY YOU'RE IN THE TOP THREE LIKE NIGHTINGALE NEVER WILL. YOU BETTER WIN YOU STUPID ONE. YOU BETTER WIN FOR HER. KOAL CAN GP BURN (haha) IN THE FIERY PITS OF SULFUR! NIGHTINGALE, YOU WON'T BE FORGOTTEN *three finger salute*
5Trapped In NarniaOH GOD WHY NIGHTINGALE! PLEASE TELL ME THIS IS A ZOMBIE TRICK PLEASE WAKE UP NIGHTINGALE I LOVE YOU! NO NO NO NO NO YOU CANT BE GONE YOU AND JUDE WERE SUPPOSED TO WIIIIIIIN! YOU HAD IT PLANNED TOO YOU WERE DOING SO WELL HOW COULD YOU BE SO STUPID RUNNING OUT LIKE THAT YOU SHOULD HAVE JUST HID IN THE BUILDING! STUPID JUDE CLEARLY SHE WAS ACTING LIKE SHE WAS DEAD YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO SAY FOUR! I HOPE YOUR HAPPY YOU'RE IN THE TOP THREE LIKE NIGHTINGALE NEVER WILL. YOU BETTER WIN YOU STUPID ONE. YOU BETTER WIN FOR HER. KOAL CAN GP BURN (haha) IN THE FIERY PITS OF SULFUR! NIGHTINGALE, YOU WON'T BE FORGOTTEN *three finger salute*
7/14/2012 c36 30District11-Olive
awww well i think i had better stop rooting for my favorites, whenever i do they seem to die xD oh well sorry avalon and rip!
30District11-Oliveawww well i think i had better stop rooting for my favorites, whenever i do they seem to die xD oh well sorry avalon and rip!
7/14/2012 c34 District11-Olive
awwww DAVE! i liked him a lot and he was the only one that kept my faith in OLivia that she had done the right thing and died protecting him, i guess now he will join her in wherever tributes go once they are dead :'( i am so sorry i keep bringing up my tribute but i can't seem to get away from the fat that she's dead
anyway out of who's left i think i want avalon to win :)
awwww DAVE! i liked him a lot and he was the only one that kept my faith in OLivia that she had done the right thing and died protecting him, i guess now he will join her in wherever tributes go once they are dead :'( i am so sorry i keep bringing up my tribute but i can't seem to get away from the fat that she's dead
anyway out of who's left i think i want avalon to win :)
7/13/2012 c36 5Trapped In Narnia
Zombie! NO! Dang it you know better than that Nightingale! Um um um Zombie powers activate...?
5Trapped In NarniaZombie! NO! Dang it you know better than that Nightingale! Um um um Zombie powers activate...?
7/13/2012 c36 NinjaMadness
Thanks for taking Avalon to the final 6. I'm sad to see her go but I had a feeling she was going to die soon. RIP I really liked this chapter. :)
Thanks for taking Avalon to the final 6. I'm sad to see her go but I had a feeling she was going to die soon. RIP I really liked this chapter. :)
7/13/2012 c36 Shipwreckedd
Such a great chapter! Avalon! Nooo! She was full of so much fight and went down swinging. I love that she still managed to flip him the bird. She will be missed! Its so easy to forget sometimes that Clyde IS a Career, but he definitely showed his strength. And I had almost forgotten about that tricky little pill, it should be very interesting to see what happens with it, now that we know what it does. The computer and map was very cool. But again I was almost brought to tears, when Zombie ran out...I hope Jude gets to her! I'm glad True and Koal split upside they wouldn't have to fit, but it looks like they could both get into some trouble. Especially Koal at the moment! Gah Koal and Nightingale, so intense! Zombie was really quick there though, and Koal lost Sparkles :( No chance that was the end of their fight is there? I cant wait to see what happens and you just keep on surprising me! Again, farewell to Avalon! Update again soon!
-Cheers!
Such a great chapter! Avalon! Nooo! She was full of so much fight and went down swinging. I love that she still managed to flip him the bird. She will be missed! Its so easy to forget sometimes that Clyde IS a Career, but he definitely showed his strength. And I had almost forgotten about that tricky little pill, it should be very interesting to see what happens with it, now that we know what it does. The computer and map was very cool. But again I was almost brought to tears, when Zombie ran out...I hope Jude gets to her! I'm glad True and Koal split upside they wouldn't have to fit, but it looks like they could both get into some trouble. Especially Koal at the moment! Gah Koal and Nightingale, so intense! Zombie was really quick there though, and Koal lost Sparkles :( No chance that was the end of their fight is there? I cant wait to see what happens and you just keep on surprising me! Again, farewell to Avalon! Update again soon!
-Cheers!
7/13/2012 c2 5SakuraDreamerz
I almost forgot something...to Evangeline (and the author)...thank you for saving everyone from Fuscous' killings. You are a true hero to sacrifice yourself for others, and to stand up and fight against the strongest. I was really sad that she died in the process though...i thought she would win...but Clyde has keeping your promise that you gave him, and vows to keep it until the very end.
5SakuraDreamerzI almost forgot something...to Evangeline (and the author)...thank you for saving everyone from Fuscous' killings. You are a true hero to sacrifice yourself for others, and to stand up and fight against the strongest. I was really sad that she died in the process though...i thought she would win...but Clyde has keeping your promise that you gave him, and vows to keep it until the very end.
7/12/2012 c35 NinjaMadness
ooh what's going to happen? I've got to know. I wonder what will happen with Avalon and Clyde, and what does the pill that she got do? Can't wait for the next update and thanks for advertising my SYOT. :) It probably won't be as good as yours but I hope I can bring justice to everyone's tributes.
ooh what's going to happen? I've got to know. I wonder what will happen with Avalon and Clyde, and what does the pill that she got do? Can't wait for the next update and thanks for advertising my SYOT. :) It probably won't be as good as yours but I hope I can bring justice to everyone's tributes.
7/12/2012 c35 Shipwreckedd
Wonderful chapter! Excuse me while I just wipe my tears all over.
I still completely love Koal and True. And I love Koal's big development throughout the games, I'm glad hes kind of opening up more. I so hope they don't turn on eachother. But for now I'm glad they are happy. ( Sparkles is still sexy ;p )
Reading through Zombie's just made me bawl. Its almost painful to see them without Evan. I hate that shes gone even more now, because this was so awful to read. "I need it, I need her." I could not stop crying, and I hate that Zombie blames herself. So beautiful. I hope these two can keep it together!
Poor Avalon. Its upsetting she lost Dave. But its interesting that she is upset with Zombie, could make her target Zombie? If she makes it out of the battle with Clyde? Unless this is another alliance being made! Which would be really smart for both her and Clyde. Gah I cant wait to see what happens! Id hate to see either of them die, really I'm gunna hate to see anyone who is left die!
And I cannot believe that True and Jude have both made it so far! For that I am completely grateful! Its been amazing to read and be apart of your story! Whatever happens next does not change the fact that this is such a creative, well written story. I love the bonds that everyone has, I love that its a story of friendship, but still has the amount of death and violence I except from the hunger games! There isn't a tribute that you've written that I cant help but love! So until next time!
-Cheers!
Wonderful chapter! Excuse me while I just wipe my tears all over.
I still completely love Koal and True. And I love Koal's big development throughout the games, I'm glad hes kind of opening up more. I so hope they don't turn on eachother. But for now I'm glad they are happy. ( Sparkles is still sexy ;p )
Reading through Zombie's just made me bawl. Its almost painful to see them without Evan. I hate that shes gone even more now, because this was so awful to read. "I need it, I need her." I could not stop crying, and I hate that Zombie blames herself. So beautiful. I hope these two can keep it together!
Poor Avalon. Its upsetting she lost Dave. But its interesting that she is upset with Zombie, could make her target Zombie? If she makes it out of the battle with Clyde? Unless this is another alliance being made! Which would be really smart for both her and Clyde. Gah I cant wait to see what happens! Id hate to see either of them die, really I'm gunna hate to see anyone who is left die!
And I cannot believe that True and Jude have both made it so far! For that I am completely grateful! Its been amazing to read and be apart of your story! Whatever happens next does not change the fact that this is such a creative, well written story. I love the bonds that everyone has, I love that its a story of friendship, but still has the amount of death and violence I except from the hunger games! There isn't a tribute that you've written that I cant help but love! So until next time!
-Cheers!
7/12/2012 c34 Shipwreckedd
Amazing! Simply amazing! My mouth literally fell open when Fuscous killed Silver! I was like what! I'm upset that shes gone! She was a wonderful Career! Fuscous and Evan made me cry. I know Fuscous was the bad guy, but he was awesome. I hate that Evan had to die! But the way she went was absolutely perfect. "being fire was worth it." This is just the perfect line for her. I love that their long conflict finally did came down to the two of them battling eachother. Fuscous had it out for her since the beginning, if they had died by anyone else it wouldn't have been as amazing. And omg poor Dave D: He made it through all that to be poisoned! At least he didn't have to suffer...much.
I'm really sad that so many died, but I'm totally satisfied that this was such a wonderful feast. Exciting and surprising; Silver's sudden death, Koal's swift rescue, and Clyde omg! "You got it babe." I cracked up, Clyde why you so cheeky? And EvanXStalker( new OTP? I think so ;D) I loved seeing the magnifying glasses come into play. Amazing. This whole chapter! And congrats to everyone who made it out!
-Cheers!
Amazing! Simply amazing! My mouth literally fell open when Fuscous killed Silver! I was like what! I'm upset that shes gone! She was a wonderful Career! Fuscous and Evan made me cry. I know Fuscous was the bad guy, but he was awesome. I hate that Evan had to die! But the way she went was absolutely perfect. "being fire was worth it." This is just the perfect line for her. I love that their long conflict finally did came down to the two of them battling eachother. Fuscous had it out for her since the beginning, if they had died by anyone else it wouldn't have been as amazing. And omg poor Dave D: He made it through all that to be poisoned! At least he didn't have to suffer...much.
I'm really sad that so many died, but I'm totally satisfied that this was such a wonderful feast. Exciting and surprising; Silver's sudden death, Koal's swift rescue, and Clyde omg! "You got it babe." I cracked up, Clyde why you so cheeky? And EvanXStalker( new OTP? I think so ;D) I loved seeing the magnifying glasses come into play. Amazing. This whole chapter! And congrats to everyone who made it out!
-Cheers!
7/12/2012 c33 Shipwreckedd
Great chapter! I actually don't ever feel like you have filler chapters. I like that you didn't just rush into saving everyone, you just give the suspense a moment to set in. Whew, first off, Im glad that dang gun is gone again! And Jude and Evan finding the bike was cool, but Koal and his new friend, that was just awesome! So clever too! Looks like they will be getting there faster. Oh Fuscous' chances keep getting better and better! I love him contemplating about Silver, but I highly doubt she'll just go down without a fight! I hate that his target is Evan though, I hope she'll be okay! And I love him wondering what he would do after he won. That's a very interesting point. Really nice chapter!
-Cheers!
Great chapter! I actually don't ever feel like you have filler chapters. I like that you didn't just rush into saving everyone, you just give the suspense a moment to set in. Whew, first off, Im glad that dang gun is gone again! And Jude and Evan finding the bike was cool, but Koal and his new friend, that was just awesome! So clever too! Looks like they will be getting there faster. Oh Fuscous' chances keep getting better and better! I love him contemplating about Silver, but I highly doubt she'll just go down without a fight! I hate that his target is Evan though, I hope she'll be okay! And I love him wondering what he would do after he won. That's a very interesting point. Really nice chapter!
-Cheers!
7/11/2012 c35 5Trapped In Narnia
So we're down to the final 6, and I'm guessing since Clyde and Avalon are fighting that somebody's going to die soon, unless they decide to team up in a very distrustful alliance and have an all out battle of the alliances when everybody's matched 2 against 2 against 2. It's true Jude is strong but Nightingale isn't, so I'm really hoping this isn't the case. She's an escape artist so she couldn't really help Jude at all. When it comes to combat he's on his own. Ahhhhh I'm so anxious! Write fast!
5Trapped In NarniaSo we're down to the final 6, and I'm guessing since Clyde and Avalon are fighting that somebody's going to die soon, unless they decide to team up in a very distrustful alliance and have an all out battle of the alliances when everybody's matched 2 against 2 against 2. It's true Jude is strong but Nightingale isn't, so I'm really hoping this isn't the case. She's an escape artist so she couldn't really help Jude at all. When it comes to combat he's on his own. Ahhhhh I'm so anxious! Write fast!