for The Big Apple7/11/2012 c35 WishofHearts
Aw that made me cry!
Poor Zombie It's not her fault!
Why are so you good at writing stuff like that! c':
Aw that made me cry!
Poor Zombie It's not her fault!
Why are so you good at writing stuff like that! c':
7/10/2012 c34 NinjaMadness
Great chapter. Whoa Avalon you got lucky by eating the cake, the only thing that wasn't poisoned. Thanks for letting my tribute make it to the final 8, she's lasted longer than I expected. Thank you for that. I love this chapter, can't wait for the next one. RIP everyone. It's ironic that the pyro died by fire.
Great chapter. Whoa Avalon you got lucky by eating the cake, the only thing that wasn't poisoned. Thanks for letting my tribute make it to the final 8, she's lasted longer than I expected. Thank you for that. I love this chapter, can't wait for the next one. RIP everyone. It's ironic that the pyro died by fire.
7/10/2012 c34 Guest
Aw :3
Even though Evan died, it was a nice ending :)
I love how you portrayed her through the whole thing, it was so good! *love heart*
Aw :3
Even though Evan died, it was a nice ending :)
I love how you portrayed her through the whole thing, it was so good! *love heart*
7/10/2012 c34 
5Trapped In Narnia
EHHHHHHHHHHHHHH EVAN WHY? EVAAAAAAAN! *sobbing* I'm so sorry Evan, you never deserved any of this. I liked you even before you were reaped. Thank you, for protecting my Nightingale. I'm sad knowing I'll never repay you. I'm sorry you're gone, but I'm glad at least you didn't feel the pain and you went out in flames that you love. And Dave, please don't be angry with Zombie, she'll feel guilty enough as is, knowing she killed her own district partner. I'm sorry to all of you (Except Fuscous) the Hunger Games are a violation against what is right.
5Trapped In NarniaEHHHHHHHHHHHHHH EVAN WHY? EVAAAAAAAN! *sobbing* I'm so sorry Evan, you never deserved any of this. I liked you even before you were reaped. Thank you, for protecting my Nightingale. I'm sad knowing I'll never repay you. I'm sorry you're gone, but I'm glad at least you didn't feel the pain and you went out in flames that you love. And Dave, please don't be angry with Zombie, she'll feel guilty enough as is, knowing she killed her own district partner. I'm sorry to all of you (Except Fuscous) the Hunger Games are a violation against what is right.
7/10/2012 c34 Guest
Aww, it's sad to see Silver go, even thought I kind of expected it. I really loved the change you saw in her and even the reactions of the other tributes when she died. You wrote her so well, and even her death was amazing. As for the others. Evangeline...well, her death was just perfect. It couldn't have been better. Fuscous faced the consequences after killing Silver, and his fight with Evangeline was really well written. I loved how you did it from Evan's POV though. And Dave...his death was really simple, but sad at the same time. I don't even know who to root for now, I guess I'll have to see in the next chapter who stands out for me.
Aww, it's sad to see Silver go, even thought I kind of expected it. I really loved the change you saw in her and even the reactions of the other tributes when she died. You wrote her so well, and even her death was amazing. As for the others. Evangeline...well, her death was just perfect. It couldn't have been better. Fuscous faced the consequences after killing Silver, and his fight with Evangeline was really well written. I loved how you did it from Evan's POV though. And Dave...his death was really simple, but sad at the same time. I don't even know who to root for now, I guess I'll have to see in the next chapter who stands out for me.
7/8/2012 c33 WishofHearts
Eeek! Fuscous is scary!
Why is he trying to kill Evan!
*sniffle.*
Good chapter by the way ;)
Eeek! Fuscous is scary!
Why is he trying to kill Evan!
*sniffle.*
Good chapter by the way ;)
7/8/2012 c33 NinjaMadness
ooh I wanna know what Fuscious and Evan choose. please update soon. this was a great chapter.
ooh I wanna know what Fuscious and Evan choose. please update soon. this was a great chapter.
7/8/2012 c33 5SakuraDreamerz
14 dead now...*gulps* I just hope the other tributes can attack Fuscous before he causes another death...
5SakuraDreamerz14 dead now...*gulps* I just hope the other tributes can attack Fuscous before he causes another death...
7/8/2012 c33 5Trapped In Narnia
Nooooooooooooooo why kill Evan and not like Koal or Avalon? Poor pranksters oh gosh you better write freaking fast
5Trapped In NarniaNooooooooooooooo why kill Evan and not like Koal or Avalon? Poor pranksters oh gosh you better write freaking fast
7/6/2012 c32 Shipwreckedd
Oh God, oh God. Such a perfect chapter. Cotton and Vixen, round 2! Ah that was so exciting to read, but really hard. I love that Koal tried to help. But poor Cotton, I'm really sad that Vixen took him out! But it was a great battle! And holy! Vixen is dead too! I take it Clyde avenged his other half? I'm really sad to see Vixen go as well! She was tough as nails, fiesty and fun-sized! So glad to see from Zombie, she really should have just taken the cake xD I lovelovelove your cage idea! I had been wondering what had happened with people disappearing and this is such a brilliant idea! Some alliances will definitely be tested here! I think Clyde is the most unique, wonder what Evan will do! I seriously CANNOT wait to see what happens will this. Hope your enjoying your trip! Write when you can and end this torture! Until then!
-Cheers!
Oh God, oh God. Such a perfect chapter. Cotton and Vixen, round 2! Ah that was so exciting to read, but really hard. I love that Koal tried to help. But poor Cotton, I'm really sad that Vixen took him out! But it was a great battle! And holy! Vixen is dead too! I take it Clyde avenged his other half? I'm really sad to see Vixen go as well! She was tough as nails, fiesty and fun-sized! So glad to see from Zombie, she really should have just taken the cake xD I lovelovelove your cage idea! I had been wondering what had happened with people disappearing and this is such a brilliant idea! Some alliances will definitely be tested here! I think Clyde is the most unique, wonder what Evan will do! I seriously CANNOT wait to see what happens will this. Hope your enjoying your trip! Write when you can and end this torture! Until then!
-Cheers!
7/6/2012 c31 Shipwreckedd
Wonderful chapter! Glad no one was killed, but holy what an ending!
"so maybe he gave her a grand smack down." Ahaa yes. This is so great! I think Clyde is slowly becoming one of my favorites. You write him so well, everything that comes out of his mouth makes me favor him. I love his and Silver's little arrangement, could be interesting to see it played out. Ugh! Poor Dave! His bit made me tear up, and he is right to want to take out Fuscous. But I love seeing some more from Avalon! These two could make a great team, and he could really use some comforting. :( Loved True's bit! I feel like her and Koal are like the eyes of the arena. And I so cant tell if she loves having Koal or hates it xD Some pretty awful thoughts about getting rid of him though! The end was great! So exciting, two people just dangling, ah who knows what'll happen! Wonderful!
-Cheers!
Wonderful chapter! Glad no one was killed, but holy what an ending!
"so maybe he gave her a grand smack down." Ahaa yes. This is so great! I think Clyde is slowly becoming one of my favorites. You write him so well, everything that comes out of his mouth makes me favor him. I love his and Silver's little arrangement, could be interesting to see it played out. Ugh! Poor Dave! His bit made me tear up, and he is right to want to take out Fuscous. But I love seeing some more from Avalon! These two could make a great team, and he could really use some comforting. :( Loved True's bit! I feel like her and Koal are like the eyes of the arena. And I so cant tell if she loves having Koal or hates it xD Some pretty awful thoughts about getting rid of him though! The end was great! So exciting, two people just dangling, ah who knows what'll happen! Wonderful!
-Cheers!
7/6/2012 c30 Shipwreckedd
Amazing! I am really really sad to see Olivia go. But I think you did her justice. She was brave and intelligent. I love that the apple was what saved her in the beginning, and I love that it was her own trap that killed her. I love what you wrote about the Careers, how they are needed for the environment of the games, interesting thought. Oh God, I loved Fuscous' POV. Heartless and calculating as ever. Avalon is a badass for taking him on. I love that she came, her and Olivia put up a great fight. Oh looks like the Careers are getting even more suspicious. I love Silver, but she is just getting beat on out there. Glad that bullet only hit her leg...again lol! Close one, but now she has some medicine and I cant wait to see what shes going to do. Amazing chapter and again so sad to say goodbye to Olivia ( Now Dave is all alone! :(
Amazing! I am really really sad to see Olivia go. But I think you did her justice. She was brave and intelligent. I love that the apple was what saved her in the beginning, and I love that it was her own trap that killed her. I love what you wrote about the Careers, how they are needed for the environment of the games, interesting thought. Oh God, I loved Fuscous' POV. Heartless and calculating as ever. Avalon is a badass for taking him on. I love that she came, her and Olivia put up a great fight. Oh looks like the Careers are getting even more suspicious. I love Silver, but she is just getting beat on out there. Glad that bullet only hit her leg...again lol! Close one, but now she has some medicine and I cant wait to see what shes going to do. Amazing chapter and again so sad to say goodbye to Olivia ( Now Dave is all alone! :(
7/6/2012 c32 ChocolateTear
Aw. I loved Cotton and Vixen. But only one can survive, and their deaths made that there will now be an interesting situation when Clyde is going to be saved. You have created an interesting situtation in general with this cages. I have never seen that before.
Somehow, I doubt that Fuscous will try to kill Silver off with everybody trying to kill him. Actually, Silver is his only chanse, since he can't take every tribute at the same time.
I also don't really know if Evan is going to save Clyde. If I would be her I won't. But yea, I am not her.
I am so excited about what is going to happen. Also, thanks for the update :D
Aw. I loved Cotton and Vixen. But only one can survive, and their deaths made that there will now be an interesting situation when Clyde is going to be saved. You have created an interesting situtation in general with this cages. I have never seen that before.
Somehow, I doubt that Fuscous will try to kill Silver off with everybody trying to kill him. Actually, Silver is his only chanse, since he can't take every tribute at the same time.
I also don't really know if Evan is going to save Clyde. If I would be her I won't. But yea, I am not her.
I am so excited about what is going to happen. Also, thanks for the update :D