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6/5/2012 c2 Nicffwhisperer
He seems totally at ease!
6/5/2012 c1 Nicffwhisperer
I love how you are letting them get to know each other. Maybe she will put him at ease.
6/5/2012 c4 1LVQueen1
Still laughing as I type this, the stuff they pass as coffee cleaning Humvee parts, that is hilarious! Loving this story already. Can't wait to see what goes into the next care package. Hmmm maybe an adult connect the dots book :*)
6/5/2012 c4 jennayg123
I love how Edward is a little flirty in his emails! I can see it starting already! And he's just adorable with his wants :). Bella is a sweetheart too!
6/5/2012 c4 Edmazing
I'd happily pay him in coffee and pillowcase for more of his words. :)
6/5/2012 c4 we live for love
Love the banter thru emails!
6/5/2012 c4 WiltshireGlo
He's cute! I'd send him coffee, cookies and anything else he wanted ;)
6/5/2012 c4 madgerama
Loved it. I'm very happy the chapters will eventually be longer. Thanks
6/5/2012 c3 madgerama
Love it
6/5/2012 c4 Cullens Darlin
Can't wait to heat about Tanyas reaction to his letter
6/5/2012 c3 WiltshireGlo
So cute...so is it just me, or is Bella's fondness of the Wizard of Oz and watching it with Charlie a little homage to Blood & Glory? Even if it wasn't, it made me smile ;)
6/5/2012 c4 texasangel75
oh im sooooo lovin this!
6/5/2012 c3 texasangel75
love it!
6/5/2012 c2 WiltshireGlo
Loved the bit about striped socks and the house on top of her! Great start ;)
6/5/2012 c1 WiltshireGlo
Amazing start...and yeah, Edward already sounds like a character , I loved his response to Tanya's request!
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