for Of Time Lords and White Lantern Rings12/2/2012 c1 richardrobinsonjr
Practically Perfect in every way.
I really enjoyed this
Richard Robinson
Practically Perfect in every way.
I really enjoyed this
Richard Robinson
8/15/2012 c1 
14LalaithElerrina
I don't know much about Dr. Who, but I liked it! I found it kind of funny.
I assume you meant "Even you /can't/ stop this; it is like pushing against fate!"
Then I smiled when the Dr. said, "Really. I do that about ten times before breakfast." :)
A couple of tips I am going to give you, would be not to bold things. If someone is yelling, you can italicize, and/or put an exclamation mark after what is said, but don't bold. (Also [of course you didn't do this] don't put more than one exclamation mark.
Over all, good job. Short and funny. I liked it.
14LalaithElerrinaI don't know much about Dr. Who, but I liked it! I found it kind of funny.
I assume you meant "Even you /can't/ stop this; it is like pushing against fate!"
Then I smiled when the Dr. said, "Really. I do that about ten times before breakfast." :)
A couple of tips I am going to give you, would be not to bold things. If someone is yelling, you can italicize, and/or put an exclamation mark after what is said, but don't bold. (Also [of course you didn't do this] don't put more than one exclamation mark.
Over all, good job. Short and funny. I liked it.
7/9/2012 c1 2Keeper of Storms
... Very well done. You've gone and gotten me thinking of all the different 'guardian-esque' entities who possess plans/methods/goals that the Doctor would love to screw with!
A series of oneshots perhaps?
Nice little snapshot though... *grin*
2Keeper of Storms... Very well done. You've gone and gotten me thinking of all the different 'guardian-esque' entities who possess plans/methods/goals that the Doctor would love to screw with!
A series of oneshots perhaps?
Nice little snapshot though... *grin*