3/27/2014 c3 Summer Flame
I AM REALLY MAD! IT SAYS YOU HAVE NOT UPDATED SINCE JUNE 26 2013! IT IS MARCH 28 2014!
I AM REALLY MAD! IT SAYS YOU HAVE NOT UPDATED SINCE JUNE 26 2013! IT IS MARCH 28 2014!
8/13/2013 c3 Guest
then they should be brought to the aao and fight the alice academy and then mikan and her friends find out their moms dads grand parents and so on ...at alice academy that I can think of sowwy if it isn't useful :P
then they should be brought to the aao and fight the alice academy and then mikan and her friends find out their moms dads grand parents and so on ...at alice academy that I can think of sowwy if it isn't useful :P
6/27/2013 c3 Infinity Smiles
Really good story! lol, I also read stories to get ideas c: right now, i am working on my first fanfic. well,... Have a wonderful day _
Really good story! lol, I also read stories to get ideas c: right now, i am working on my first fanfic. well,... Have a wonderful day _
6/25/2013 c3 mooshy3712
Umm they could wake up in a dorm at alice acadamy of magic. then meet boys. then dark secret of i loved ur story.
Umm they could wake up in a dorm at alice acadamy of magic. then meet boys. then dark secret of i loved ur story.
8/6/2012 c2 Guest
UPDATE ASAP NOW PLZ! W
UPDATE ASAP NOW PLZ! W
7/30/2012 c2 kkenner
I think its great so far put chapter 3 already
I think its great so far put chapter 3 already
7/30/2012 c1 3kkenner
I want to see chapter 3 because I also want to wright a story like this the begining of it thhe middle and the end will be totally diffrent anyway way cool story so far
I want to see chapter 3 because I also want to wright a story like this the begining of it thhe middle and the end will be totally diffrent anyway way cool story so far
7/10/2012 c2 Guest
UPDATE SOON ITS BEEN SOOO LONG SINCE YOU UPDATED
UPDATE SOON ITS BEEN SOOO LONG SINCE YOU UPDATED
7/4/2012 c2 2NiaTheAnimeFreak
Cool good job umm you have like a few grammer mistakes but their barely noticable no flame im only trying to help umm keep updating uz that would make me happy anyway good
Cool good job umm you have like a few grammer mistakes but their barely noticable no flame im only trying to help umm keep updating uz that would make me happy anyway good
7/3/2012 c2 Kaida Li
please update soon! i cant wait i wonder when theyre going to meet the guys? haha i cant wait!
please update soon! i cant wait i wonder when theyre going to meet the guys? haha i cant wait!
7/3/2012 c2 6DisconsolateTai
I suggest if you write spells in a different language don't forget to translate it at the bottom.I love it!
I suggest if you write spells in a different language don't forget to translate it at the bottom.I love it!
7/3/2012 c1 7aFandomEncounter
This is really good. There are some grammar errors that you could fix, but besides that the plot is wonderful.
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This is really good. There are some grammar errors that you could fix, but besides that the plot is wonderful.
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