for The Heart of a Soldier2/20/2014 c6 
6ivegotpurple
So I stopped reading this when she spits at Perco. I understand artistic licence and wanting to make your character not all loved, but I feel like you're being disrespectful to the memory of the guy. And that's a really extreme reaction for anyone to have. I think that you write well but you need to work on developing your relationships better. You kind of just say "and they met and they were really close" but you don't show how they got close. You need to show us through the actions of the characters how things got that way. Especially with Sink (you make a sentence where he just magically loves her). I think your story could be really good if you made these improvements.
6ivegotpurpleSo I stopped reading this when she spits at Perco. I understand artistic licence and wanting to make your character not all loved, but I feel like you're being disrespectful to the memory of the guy. And that's a really extreme reaction for anyone to have. I think that you write well but you need to work on developing your relationships better. You kind of just say "and they met and they were really close" but you don't show how they got close. You need to show us through the actions of the characters how things got that way. Especially with Sink (you make a sentence where he just magically loves her). I think your story could be really good if you made these improvements.
11/2/2013 c27 dorothy123
This chapter made me cry. This is the best so far..:')
This chapter made me cry. This is the best so far..:')
10/11/2013 c19 5Sammyboy94
Good chapter... The end of the letter should have gone, '101st Airborne division, 506th Regiment, Second Battalion, Easy Company, _ Platoon'
(Insert platoon # in blank)
5Sammyboy94Good chapter... The end of the letter should have gone, '101st Airborne division, 506th Regiment, Second Battalion, Easy Company, _ Platoon'
(Insert platoon # in blank)
6/9/2013 c4 charlie
what i noticed is that you shifted from army, to navy, to air force. sort of confusing there
what i noticed is that you shifted from army, to navy, to air force. sort of confusing there
8/13/2012 c40 Ames
I'm so happy with what you did with the story! And I'm so sad it's over :( I hope you'll write some more! I love your style of writing. Oh my god I'm going to miss this story 3
I'm so happy with what you did with the story! And I'm so sad it's over :( I hope you'll write some more! I love your style of writing. Oh my god I'm going to miss this story 3
8/13/2012 c40 46wandertogondor
...Dammit I'm crying! Such a happy ending! I absolutly LOVED Luz "Nobody say a fu*king thing! I have waited too damn long!" LOL! I am so sad that it's over...I'm not ready to let go :(
46wandertogondor...Dammit I'm crying! Such a happy ending! I absolutly LOVED Luz "Nobody say a fu*king thing! I have waited too damn long!" LOL! I am so sad that it's over...I'm not ready to let go :(
8/13/2012 c40 7LovingBOBThePacific
How come you're always making me cry?! :') Beautiful chapter and epilogue - I love you and this fantastic story!
Also, I cried, thinking of those brave men and women and their heroic doings who went into a war they originally wasn't a part or the cause of. I think of these people every day.
I love this line from a Danish WW2 movie, based on a true story like BoB, though it's sad and tragic and unessecary, but it's true unfortunately; "Some people have to die, so others can live." :'(
Currahee!
R.I.P the fallen men and women who never got to experience a world without war...
7LovingBOBThePacificHow come you're always making me cry?! :') Beautiful chapter and epilogue - I love you and this fantastic story!
Also, I cried, thinking of those brave men and women and their heroic doings who went into a war they originally wasn't a part or the cause of. I think of these people every day.
I love this line from a Danish WW2 movie, based on a true story like BoB, though it's sad and tragic and unessecary, but it's true unfortunately; "Some people have to die, so others can live." :'(
Currahee!
R.I.P the fallen men and women who never got to experience a world without war...
8/12/2012 c39 46wandertogondor
CHEERS *upends bottle of vat 69*...yup I'm done. I am in tears! This was such a journey!
46wandertogondorCHEERS *upends bottle of vat 69*...yup I'm done. I am in tears! This was such a journey!
8/11/2012 c39 7LovingBOBThePacific
WHY?! Why do you always have to make ME cry?!
It was beautiful, Becs, the whole thing - I love YOU and this STORY.
These brave men are the both of us' heroes and many others too. These men and their story have opened my eyes, as well as many others I'm sure. People think I'm crazy because I'm so much into it, but I don't really care. I'm from a whole other country, yet I have the utmost respect and humbleness towards the still few living men of Easy Company and their comrades who unfortunately isn't among us anymore :'(
Hell, yeah, bring out the Vat69!
Hi-yo Silver! Currahee!
Much love headed your way,
Camz
XOXO
Let me end this to show my respects and regards to these brave men, by writing that beautiful ending marked; "To this day , to the ending of the world we in it shall be remembered. We lucky few, we band of brothers. For he in today who sheds his blood with me, shall be my brother."
7LovingBOBThePacificWHY?! Why do you always have to make ME cry?!
It was beautiful, Becs, the whole thing - I love YOU and this STORY.
These brave men are the both of us' heroes and many others too. These men and their story have opened my eyes, as well as many others I'm sure. People think I'm crazy because I'm so much into it, but I don't really care. I'm from a whole other country, yet I have the utmost respect and humbleness towards the still few living men of Easy Company and their comrades who unfortunately isn't among us anymore :'(
Hell, yeah, bring out the Vat69!
Hi-yo Silver! Currahee!
Much love headed your way,
Camz
XOXO
Let me end this to show my respects and regards to these brave men, by writing that beautiful ending marked; "To this day , to the ending of the world we in it shall be remembered. We lucky few, we band of brothers. For he in today who sheds his blood with me, shall be my brother."
8/11/2012 c38 Rose2621
An amazing chapter. I hope the next few aren't as rushed. Maybe include an epilogue.
An amazing chapter. I hope the next few aren't as rushed. Maybe include an epilogue.
8/11/2012 c38 7LovingBOBThePacific
How could you leave me with a DAMNED cliffhanger!? Oh, I know, just because I won't update before tomorrow, is it? :O Smart, Becs, real smart, wiseass ;)
No, I loved this, please update soon!
Much love headed your way,
Camz
XOXO
7LovingBOBThePacificHow could you leave me with a DAMNED cliffhanger!? Oh, I know, just because I won't update before tomorrow, is it? :O Smart, Becs, real smart, wiseass ;)
No, I loved this, please update soon!
Much love headed your way,
Camz
XOXO
8/11/2012 c37 LovingBOBThePacific
I am in tears for the hundred time during this story, Becs - so beautifully written!
D'aawwwww Shifty and Essie :D
Rest in peace, Darrell 'Shifty' Powers :') Currahee
Love you!
-Camz
I am in tears for the hundred time during this story, Becs - so beautifully written!
D'aawwwww Shifty and Essie :D
Rest in peace, Darrell 'Shifty' Powers :') Currahee
Love you!
-Camz