for The Heart of a Soldier7/27/2012 c32 Ames
Aww Essie! That girl never gets a break. Oh my god you're starting to make me like Nix now too! I'm getting a bit angry at Tab! But for some weird reason my gut tells me Essie should be with Tab. I don't know when you temporary stopped writing the story, one of the main reasons I was sad about it was because I saw so much hope and potential in Tab and Essie's relationship. They started out young and fresh and went through so much together and I see Nix more of like a protector for her when she's broken and damaged. I think she keeps running back to him because she's hurt and betrayed, but I think deep down she truly loves Tab. So yeah...Tab!
Wow that was long! Hahaha I have no idea if this is how you see their relationship at all so I might be getting this all wrong but that's just my perspective.
Aww Essie! That girl never gets a break. Oh my god you're starting to make me like Nix now too! I'm getting a bit angry at Tab! But for some weird reason my gut tells me Essie should be with Tab. I don't know when you temporary stopped writing the story, one of the main reasons I was sad about it was because I saw so much hope and potential in Tab and Essie's relationship. They started out young and fresh and went through so much together and I see Nix more of like a protector for her when she's broken and damaged. I think she keeps running back to him because she's hurt and betrayed, but I think deep down she truly loves Tab. So yeah...Tab!
Wow that was long! Hahaha I have no idea if this is how you see their relationship at all so I might be getting this all wrong but that's just my perspective.
7/27/2012 c32 
46wandertogondor
Woo, you break Tab's little heart Essie! After everything he did to her he deserves it...but, then again Winters does have a point. She is still a kid...why is this so hard? *tears* Honestly, I think she should stick with Nix! He treats her right
46wandertogondorWoo, you break Tab's little heart Essie! After everything he did to her he deserves it...but, then again Winters does have a point. She is still a kid...why is this so hard? *tears* Honestly, I think she should stick with Nix! He treats her right
7/27/2012 c31 7LovingBOBThePacific
Wow...I have absolutely no words, hun..This was beautiful...and incredibly heartbreaking! :-*
Please update soon, ya hear me? Wiseass:-* (see what I did? xD)
Love you,
Camz
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7LovingBOBThePacificWow...I have absolutely no words, hun..This was beautiful...and incredibly heartbreaking! :-*
Please update soon, ya hear me? Wiseass:-* (see what I did? xD)
Love you,
Camz
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7/26/2012 c31 maya
a great read, as always:-)
i kinda want her to end up with Lew at this point, to be honest - i have always liked him and Talb just messed up too much to forgive... but i will happily read this story till the end, no matter who, if anyone, she chooses.
a great read, as always:-)
i kinda want her to end up with Lew at this point, to be honest - i have always liked him and Talb just messed up too much to forgive... but i will happily read this story till the end, no matter who, if anyone, she chooses.
7/26/2012 c31 Ames
Okay before I forget, may I just say that this line "As the truck rolled and rattled down the muddy dirt road, the leafless trees seemed to bend down to snatch her weak body up. Their long, skinny and black fingers reaching down to capture her shriveled soul." is absolutely perfection! So great. Oh my god and Essie :( Poor girl! You're breaking my heart! And then Hoob showing up in her dreams. My emotions are like going haywire right now. So great! So many stories get tedious and boring after 20 chapters but yours continues to amaze me every time. There's always some plot twists, something unpredictable. I love it so so so so much! Definitely ranks as my few favorite BoB fics.
Okay before I forget, may I just say that this line "As the truck rolled and rattled down the muddy dirt road, the leafless trees seemed to bend down to snatch her weak body up. Their long, skinny and black fingers reaching down to capture her shriveled soul." is absolutely perfection! So great. Oh my god and Essie :( Poor girl! You're breaking my heart! And then Hoob showing up in her dreams. My emotions are like going haywire right now. So great! So many stories get tedious and boring after 20 chapters but yours continues to amaze me every time. There's always some plot twists, something unpredictable. I love it so so so so much! Definitely ranks as my few favorite BoB fics.
7/26/2012 c31 Guest
I am obsessed! Personally I'm a fan of Nix, just because Tab makes me angry with all of his no-good ways. BUT THIS STORY. I really can't get enough. Keep up the good work!
I am obsessed! Personally I'm a fan of Nix, just because Tab makes me angry with all of his no-good ways. BUT THIS STORY. I really can't get enough. Keep up the good work!
7/26/2012 c31 46wandertogondor
Oh no! You did a great job on this but it's just too sad for me to possibly comprehend! I just want to comfort Essie right now!
46wandertogondorOh no! You did a great job on this but it's just too sad for me to possibly comprehend! I just want to comfort Essie right now!
7/26/2012 c30 Ames
Ahh I feel so bad for Essie :( But I love Papa Winters getting angry. But Essie :( Poor girl. Save her!
Ahh I feel so bad for Essie :( But I love Papa Winters getting angry. But Essie :( Poor girl. Save her!
7/25/2012 c30 Guest
Thumbs up! Keep it going!
Thumbs up! Keep it going!
7/25/2012 c30 wandertogondor
Oh, that was so sad! I feel so bad for Essie :( It seems like everyone's been letting that poor girl down!
Oh, that was so sad! I feel so bad for Essie :( It seems like everyone's been letting that poor girl down!
7/25/2012 c30 7LovingBOBThePacific
Christ...thanks for the warning, I REALLY needed those Kleenex :'(
Hun, this chapter was so amazing, fantastic, moving and heartbreaking! Great job - you're a great writer!
My heart probably dies when they find her...that leaves Tab to think about what he have done - well-deserved if I may that... The moment between Essie and Winters was so sweet and the comment about wanting him to walk up her aisle to her wedding? Stunning!
And I loved Dick's speech, especially the last comment - so powerful!
And when Malark, Babe and Lieb finally stood up to the poor bastard? - Made my night
Please update soon!
-Camz
XXX
7LovingBOBThePacificChrist...thanks for the warning, I REALLY needed those Kleenex :'(
Hun, this chapter was so amazing, fantastic, moving and heartbreaking! Great job - you're a great writer!
My heart probably dies when they find her...that leaves Tab to think about what he have done - well-deserved if I may that... The moment between Essie and Winters was so sweet and the comment about wanting him to walk up her aisle to her wedding? Stunning!
And I loved Dick's speech, especially the last comment - so powerful!
And when Malark, Babe and Lieb finally stood up to the poor bastard? - Made my night
Please update soon!
-Camz
XXX
7/25/2012 c29 Ames
NO :( Poor Essie! She's gone through so much and now there's all this misunderstanding :( Someone needs to slap some sense into Tab! But as always, your writing is impeccable. I feel like I'm repeating my praises...gotta find some new vocabulary hahaha.
NO :( Poor Essie! She's gone through so much and now there's all this misunderstanding :( Someone needs to slap some sense into Tab! But as always, your writing is impeccable. I feel like I'm repeating my praises...gotta find some new vocabulary hahaha.
7/24/2012 c29 LovingBOBThePacific
O-M-G I am freaking in tears! :'(
Aww,no,no, NO this can't be happening! D:
Please update VERY soon, hun! :D
-Camz
XXX
O-M-G I am freaking in tears! :'(
Aww,no,no, NO this can't be happening! D:
Please update VERY soon, hun! :D
-Camz
XXX
7/23/2012 c28 Ames
Whoa I get to read three chapters at once! All amazing by the way :) Ugh all the parts from "Breaking Point" was so sad though :( And she's gonna go on patrol! Uh oh! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Whoa I get to read three chapters at once! All amazing by the way :) Ugh all the parts from "Breaking Point" was so sad though :( And she's gonna go on patrol! Uh oh! Can't wait to see what happens next!
7/21/2012 c28 LovingBOBThePacific
Haha! Great chap, hun! :D. OMG, Essie stood up to Speirs! OMG, he's an ass...
Please update soon! :)
-Camz
XXX
Haha! Great chap, hun! :D. OMG, Essie stood up to Speirs! OMG, he's an ass...
Please update soon! :)
-Camz
XXX