for Harry Crow3h c106 
1Dream of the Night
Your story was a very good read. I really liked the culture you created with the goblins and how Harry, and later the rest, found their place so easily there and among the other two cultures. I appreciate the length of your story too. Thank you.
1Dream of the NightYour story was a very good read. I really liked the culture you created with the goblins and how Harry, and later the rest, found their place so easily there and among the other two cultures. I appreciate the length of your story too. Thank you.
5/9 c68 yrlastin
Harry barely reacted to killing the Uninvolved innocent Champion of Dragonbreath and his father the first time he fought in the Pit!
His reaction to killing actually guilty parties seems way over the top in comparison!
Harry barely reacted to killing the Uninvolved innocent Champion of Dragonbreath and his father the first time he fought in the Pit!
His reaction to killing actually guilty parties seems way over the top in comparison!
5/5 c31 Tracey Young
Grumpy Gordon reminds me more of Sam the Eagle. Then again, he also reminds me of Gordon the Engine, from Thomas and Friends...
Grumpy Gordon reminds me more of Sam the Eagle. Then again, he also reminds me of Gordon the Engine, from Thomas and Friends...
4/30 c42 24Wise Lion 17
I honesly think James and Lily would be mightly proud of their son for the family he has formed for himself. And I would like to add, that if they were to have any unfinished business in this world they would haunt Dumbledore for playing them for fools in his game of chess.
24Wise Lion 17I honesly think James and Lily would be mightly proud of their son for the family he has formed for himself. And I would like to add, that if they were to have any unfinished business in this world they would haunt Dumbledore for playing them for fools in his game of chess.
4/28 c67 6starlite22
Poor Hermione another sad birthday, glad her mum is ok, thought they’d of collected Luna and brought her to the hospital
6starlite22Poor Hermione another sad birthday, glad her mum is ok, thought they’d of collected Luna and brought her to the hospital
4/25 c45 starlite22
Great battle, but confused at thought they were both petrified:
Helena couldn't miss the worry on Neville's face and offered up some reassurance.
Tonks voice then rang around the chamber. "Parvati's beginning to wake up, I think she's going to be okay."
Great battle, but confused at thought they were both petrified:
Helena couldn't miss the worry on Neville's face and offered up some reassurance.
Tonks voice then rang around the chamber. "Parvati's beginning to wake up, I think she's going to be okay."
4/23 c32 6starlite22
I really hope, Bill gets to go to the ball instead of Ginny.
Hopping Padma and Neville get it together
6starlite22I really hope, Bill gets to go to the ball instead of Ginny.
Hopping Padma and Neville get it together
4/22 c28 starlite22
I really hope the free ride doesn’t go to Ginny, that would reinforce her bad behaviour
I really hope the free ride doesn’t go to Ginny, that would reinforce her bad behaviour