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for The Third Time

6/6/2012 c1 9Boots1980
Nicely-done imagery of the sun setting over the ocean and the gleam of the moonlight on Louisa's body. The dialogue is very realistic for the two parents, partners and lovers. Martin's marriage proposal nicely harkens back to his previous proposal in a very sentimental way.
6/6/2012 c41 Biffpup
I love this story, but you know that already. The mixture of drama with sentiment, the resolution of emotional issues, the growth of the characters - it's all so well-written, just perfect. Add into that the excitement and fear of the danger at sea, and it just doesn't get get any better. Thanks so much for the story!
6/6/2012 c41 2fanficfan71
A fantastic story, it was great to be able to read it all in one go (of course my housework didn't get done, but you can't have everything!). Thanks for sharing.
6/6/2012 c25 fanficfan71
A nice finish to the day.
6/6/2012 c13 fanficfan71
I'm glad to see Martin's learning. Great chapter.
6/6/2012 c3 fanficfan71
Martin certainly needs to work on some of his 'lines'. Very funny chapter in places.
6/6/2012 c2 fanficfan71
Dr. Despicable is a very appropriate name for Edith. A great start, I'm looking forward to reading through the rest of your story.
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