for In Death5/15/2016 c1 DaisySullivan
Now I'm wondering if there will somehow be a time paradox where yes, J died in the past, but since present K isn't in any danger anymore thanks to him, there won't be any reason for J to go back in the past, thus both of them surviving. Hopefully a black hole won't shallow the universe because of my theory...
Anyway, this one-shot was very interesting, and very well-written! Good job!
Now I'm wondering if there will somehow be a time paradox where yes, J died in the past, but since present K isn't in any danger anymore thanks to him, there won't be any reason for J to go back in the past, thus both of them surviving. Hopefully a black hole won't shallow the universe because of my theory...
Anyway, this one-shot was very interesting, and very well-written! Good job!
12/11/2012 c1 
7Rebeldynasty
This is an interesting alternate ending. There on nothing simple about time-travel, an it took me a minute to understand how J is still alive. Lol, older one died, younger one was still there. Anyway, this was nicely done. :)
7RebeldynastyThis is an interesting alternate ending. There on nothing simple about time-travel, an it took me a minute to understand how J is still alive. Lol, older one died, younger one was still there. Anyway, this was nicely done. :)
12/7/2012 c1 153SiriusFan13
Very nice. I actually thought that was what was going to happen when I was about halfway through the movie, and I have to admit that if it had happened like this... I think I'd have been ok with it. Nice work.
Sirius
153SiriusFan13Very nice. I actually thought that was what was going to happen when I was about halfway through the movie, and I have to admit that if it had happened like this... I think I'd have been ok with it. Nice work.
Sirius
6/20/2012 c1 58Blackwolf-20
lol. Everybody thought the same thing about the ending. Before I went to see MIB3, I feared I had accidentally spoiled myself. Someone asked how can k be j's dad, which scared me. It was just a weird thing. But dads and fatherly figures were a case here. Besides that, I was starting to think it would go in that direction, considering how etermined J was becoming. Anyways. Really glad to see an alternate ending fic. You've inspired me to continue my MIB stories and possibly write some relating to MIB3. Hope you do more. We need more MIB fics on here!
58Blackwolf-20lol. Everybody thought the same thing about the ending. Before I went to see MIB3, I feared I had accidentally spoiled myself. Someone asked how can k be j's dad, which scared me. It was just a weird thing. But dads and fatherly figures were a case here. Besides that, I was starting to think it would go in that direction, considering how etermined J was becoming. Anyways. Really glad to see an alternate ending fic. You've inspired me to continue my MIB stories and possibly write some relating to MIB3. Hope you do more. We need more MIB fics on here!
6/17/2012 c1 9Kalika
Great story. I agree with the other reviewers this needs a sequel, or a second chapter with the viewpoints swapped. Good work.
9KalikaGreat story. I agree with the other reviewers this needs a sequel, or a second chapter with the viewpoints swapped. Good work.
6/17/2012 c1 12PeppyPower
I totally agree with all my former reviewers: this wasn't only excellent work but a fantastic plot or rather storyline as well...and, oh, please, do write a sequel, there's so much material to be had now, indeed. Seriously, as I watched the movie I SO thought this was gonna happen, after what Griff said, and then we get the ending with J's daddy. And I, too, adored the way K was interacting with baby J. This fic so totally goes to my favorites, well done. And, again: sequel, maybe? If I ask nicely, I mean? Seriously, this story here practically screams "sequel-alert, sequel-alert", it's way too good to stay a oneshot!
12PeppyPowerI totally agree with all my former reviewers: this wasn't only excellent work but a fantastic plot or rather storyline as well...and, oh, please, do write a sequel, there's so much material to be had now, indeed. Seriously, as I watched the movie I SO thought this was gonna happen, after what Griff said, and then we get the ending with J's daddy. And I, too, adored the way K was interacting with baby J. This fic so totally goes to my favorites, well done. And, again: sequel, maybe? If I ask nicely, I mean? Seriously, this story here practically screams "sequel-alert, sequel-alert", it's way too good to stay a oneshot!
6/15/2012 c1 4queen of magicians
I just finished watching the movie in theatres...and was so sure that this was how it was going to end...so positive...then I cried when it was his Daddy...:(
4queen of magiciansI just finished watching the movie in theatres...and was so sure that this was how it was going to end...so positive...then I cried when it was his Daddy...:(
6/14/2012 c1 21TheTacticianAlchemist
I just saw the movie today and I was so afraid that that this was going to happen. Oh, feels. ;A; Good job.
21TheTacticianAlchemistI just saw the movie today and I was so afraid that that this was going to happen. Oh, feels. ;A; Good job.
6/11/2012 c1 8RaeLaser1
This is exactly how I thought the movie was going to end. Should have ended. Good job.
8RaeLaser1This is exactly how I thought the movie was going to end. Should have ended. Good job.
6/11/2012 c1 ArmbandsAndFedoras
I so thought this would happen!
Please make a sequal!
I so thought this would happen!
Please make a sequal!
6/10/2012 c1 Anon Spoiler in the Review
Ok so since you wrote this, this isn't a spoiler, but to anyone else reading this SPOILER...sorry this is anon. I have a LJ account zeugmaqueen if you want anything ;)
Ha, when I was watching the movie I kept thinking J would be the sacrifice with all the illusions to K's eulogy for J and the warning to go back right after the guy lost his arm! And to be honest, my inner angst bunny was very disappointed when it was just the other guy. Although, K and baby J interacting was very sweet too. I loved that someone wrote this scene for me! Thank you so much! Ha, i'd love a sequel of when K wakes up the "day after" and realizes J isn't coming in to work. All the things he wanted to say on the phone call when he knew that was it... Oh, so much material!
Ok so since you wrote this, this isn't a spoiler, but to anyone else reading this SPOILER...sorry this is anon. I have a LJ account zeugmaqueen if you want anything ;)
Ha, when I was watching the movie I kept thinking J would be the sacrifice with all the illusions to K's eulogy for J and the warning to go back right after the guy lost his arm! And to be honest, my inner angst bunny was very disappointed when it was just the other guy. Although, K and baby J interacting was very sweet too. I loved that someone wrote this scene for me! Thank you so much! Ha, i'd love a sequel of when K wakes up the "day after" and realizes J isn't coming in to work. All the things he wanted to say on the phone call when he knew that was it... Oh, so much material!
6/9/2012 c1 ConfusedSoAmI
I loved this! I just saw men in black three today when J was dying I was like n-no don't die! And then he didnt die! Yes! I loved this!
I loved this! I just saw men in black three today when J was dying I was like n-no don't die! And then he didnt die! Yes! I loved this!
6/7/2012 c1 13LuffyMarra
Great story. I thought the same thing would happen when Griff said that line to J. Really awesome job in catching the emotion of the scene.
13LuffyMarraGreat story. I thought the same thing would happen when Griff said that line to J. Really awesome job in catching the emotion of the scene.
6/6/2012 c1 Nera
I so thought that this would be the end of the movie! Haha! I like this.
I so thought that this would be the end of the movie! Haha! I like this.