for Into the Deep12/14/2015 c1 Guest
Please update this I love it already and I think that this will turn out to be a great fanfic
Please update this I love it already and I think that this will turn out to be a great fanfic
7/26/2015 c1 mirajane-fan
wonderful beginning, i eagerly wait for a continuation as soon is possible. i wish only the best and inspiration
wonderful beginning, i eagerly wait for a continuation as soon is possible. i wish only the best and inspiration
2/8/2013 c1 Guest
That was a very good short fic. I wish there where more Grimrock fics.
That was a very good short fic. I wish there where more Grimrock fics.
2/4/2013 c1 
2LittleBiscuits
Excellent job filling in background information, that wasn't given in the game. I'm about to start my own LoG fanfic, but I am a new author, and will take constructive critism well. I must say you imagined the kingdom the prisoners come from fairly differently than I did, anyway, excellent job, I hope to see more.
2LittleBiscuitsExcellent job filling in background information, that wasn't given in the game. I'm about to start my own LoG fanfic, but I am a new author, and will take constructive critism well. I must say you imagined the kingdom the prisoners come from fairly differently than I did, anyway, excellent job, I hope to see more.
9/7/2012 c1 1Komag
Interesting beginning! Nice twist to have the prisoners not even know where they were headed until they were physically at the location. I'm also intrigued by the mention of various noble families, organizations, and government secrets. The world you have hinted at just begs to be more and more fleshed out!
1KomagInteresting beginning! Nice twist to have the prisoners not even know where they were headed until they were physically at the location. I'm also intrigued by the mention of various noble families, organizations, and government secrets. The world you have hinted at just begs to be more and more fleshed out!
7/15/2012 c1 Raieyana
So I just picked this game up last night and had a chance to play it today, and after about 2 hours the plot bunnies were dancing around in my head. I immediately came here to silence them, but only found this one story! That said, I love what you did so far! It has great imagery and I love the brief introductions of the characters. I'm curious about their history and what will happen next.
Cliffhangers noooo!
Hope you update soon )
So I just picked this game up last night and had a chance to play it today, and after about 2 hours the plot bunnies were dancing around in my head. I immediately came here to silence them, but only found this one story! That said, I love what you did so far! It has great imagery and I love the brief introductions of the characters. I'm curious about their history and what will happen next.
Cliffhangers noooo!
Hope you update soon )
6/24/2012 c1 The Huntress
Very nice,and well done. Is this really the only Grimrock story?
Can't wait for next chapter!
Very nice,and well done. Is this really the only Grimrock story?
Can't wait for next chapter!