8/27 c33 3Ryuno chu
They complement each other so well. It's a joy to see the moments when it's them against the world.
They complement each other so well. It's a joy to see the moments when it's them against the world.
8/26 c32 Ryuno chu
I like how comfortable they are with each other now. Their interactions are such a joy to read.
I like how comfortable they are with each other now. Their interactions are such a joy to read.
8/26 c31 Ryuno chu
I am loving the pace with which they burrow deeper into each other's lives. They'll not want to be rid of each other. And this chapter was such a tease. I am so eager to read more.
I am loving the pace with which they burrow deeper into each other's lives. They'll not want to be rid of each other. And this chapter was such a tease. I am so eager to read more.
8/17 c9 7WindSongEnchantment
I am so happy you did Ginny justice in this chapter, I was laughing so hard!
I am so happy you did Ginny justice in this chapter, I was laughing so hard!
8/16 c32 AliasTesin
Excellent, surprising. And I would like (like many others I allow myself to think) more, even more...
Excellent, surprising. And I would like (like many others I allow myself to think) more, even more...
7/28 c33 Katushya
I just blazed through this entire fic; your banter is excellent! This is well written and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing!
I just blazed through this entire fic; your banter is excellent! This is well written and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing!
6/27 c33 tchoubidou
J'adore, même si je suis nulle en anglais et que je doive passer par la traduction google. J'attends avec impatience le prochain chapitre, cette fic est addictive. Bravo !
J'adore, même si je suis nulle en anglais et que je doive passer par la traduction google. J'attends avec impatience le prochain chapitre, cette fic est addictive. Bravo !
6/23 c33 Rinadarling
Great dialogues! :D Thank you for sharing your story! Hope you have a great summer with many relaxing moments!
Great dialogues! :D Thank you for sharing your story! Hope you have a great summer with many relaxing moments!
6/24 c33 1sorrowsown
im all caught up now! i love they Snapes' dynamic . i hope things start getting better for our dear potions master, his employers dont seem too pleased with him and that does not bode well for him.
im all caught up now! i love they Snapes' dynamic . i hope things start getting better for our dear potions master, his employers dont seem too pleased with him and that does not bode well for him.
6/22 c33 Lady Genie Louise
Fantastic, story so glad you are back. Severus and Hermione are so well written, Cannot wait to see what happens next
Fantastic, story so glad you are back. Severus and Hermione are so well written, Cannot wait to see what happens next
6/14 c33 Guest
So happy this is back! Loved the chapter.
So happy this is back! Loved the chapter.
6/15 c33 12Elliania
almost missed this chapter! glad i didnt!
the banter was fantastic! between lucius and severus but mostly between wizard and wife haha. loved it. loved the scene at the griffindor table! i love that not only hermione cannot deny anything too vividly for she is supposedly married to her soulmate, but also that her own mind made her blush which was confirmation enough for her peers, which was hilarious! that kiss and the glitch ginny saw in severus was perfect!
im wary of dumbledore. and that severus is showing too much just how much he cares for his young wife. something is about to happen i just know it.
cannot wait for more. this is such a great story, fake marriage and forced proximity done at their best! thank you for sharing and not giving it up
Kat
almost missed this chapter! glad i didnt!
the banter was fantastic! between lucius and severus but mostly between wizard and wife haha. loved it. loved the scene at the griffindor table! i love that not only hermione cannot deny anything too vividly for she is supposedly married to her soulmate, but also that her own mind made her blush which was confirmation enough for her peers, which was hilarious! that kiss and the glitch ginny saw in severus was perfect!
im wary of dumbledore. and that severus is showing too much just how much he cares for his young wife. something is about to happen i just know it.
cannot wait for more. this is such a great story, fake marriage and forced proximity done at their best! thank you for sharing and not giving it up
Kat
6/14 c33 AliasTesin
The continuation of these last chapters is simply delicious! Irony and a hint of anxiety, effective pauses and meaningful speeches. Interesting, really interesting!
The continuation of these last chapters is simply delicious! Irony and a hint of anxiety, effective pauses and meaningful speeches. Interesting, really interesting!
6/11 c33 Bea
I was so excited to see this that I read it immediately rather than falling back asleep for a few more hours; the highest level of praise I can give.
- “made his gut churn faster” - Of course, it wouldn’t be a Severus POV scene if he didn’t have at least one attack of conscience. Silly man.
- “I have gifted you hours of living vicariously through my escapades” A dubious honour, to be sure.
- Speaking of things being raised … I am once again begging the fic rating doesnt jump to M. Severus isn’t the only one being tortured here. Soooo much tension.
- “Everything that comes from me is rich” Lol Lucius is such a prat.
- I don’t expect anything close to BTH’s level of angst, but I’m wondering if Voldie will become suspicious of Severus’ feelings, as Lucius warned he might?
- Jealous Hermione, my beloved! Love when she is trying to be sensible but can’t entirely suppress her feelings.
- “with True Love surging beneath his wings.” Cackling, such a cheesy line. Severus would be horrified.
- You do enjoy torturing the Malfoy’s, don’t you? (I love it). I’ll be interested to see if Severus can bring himself to sabotage their relationship, especially as his own ‘marriage’ blooms.
- Oh Severus, always projecting your own issues and hurting other people in the process. If only he was sensible enough to go and apologise.
- I like to think Hermione might help him devise an antidote to the regenerative potion. It would be nice to see her work on an *actual* master’s level potion.
- Severus’ anxiety attack and suicidal ideation are so well done, especially the way he pulls himself out of it by reminding himself of his duty. Very true to character.
- Loved the great hall scene! Seamus is hilarious. Poor Hermione, very wrong of her peers to intrude on her private life, I guess. But so fun for us. Really cleverly woven with her internal monologue. And what I wouldn’t give for some office action ….
- “Given the whole Death Eater thing …” Lol what an understatement.
- Harry and Ron need pull their heads out their arses, stat.
- I think I like Laria. She seems like a sensible, intelligent, compassionate witch. In fact, I almost wonder whether she’ll connect with Hermione at all (what better way to quash the rumours than appear with his wife?)… and perhaps reveal something about Severus’ youth? *cough* Lily *cough*
- And if not her, Albus is starting to get rather miffed about Severus’ shifting priorities. I wouldn’t be surprised if he lets something slip to Hermione.
- Will Hermione have to be present at the house meeting? Poor girl.
- ‘Lucius Malfoy oyster fest’ Lmao I love it.
- Very cleverly manoeuvred with the tea invitations. You can see why he’s a Slytherin.
- Severus is so protective of her now, and he doesn’t even know it. From Laizment, and Dumbledore. I’m melting. I can’t wait to see his increased tension with Albus if he keeps neglecting his spyly duties.
I’ll be excited to see Laria’s press response. And if Hermione goes to any tea parties. And of course, Sirius is still looming over the plot.
Thank you for another great chapter! I also hope you get lots of time to write but , more importantly, that you enjoy your summer!
PS: Congrats for hitting the twelfth anniversary of this fic (and thirteenth for BTH!) Your dedication is astounding, and I’m extremely thankful that you’re still bringing us so much joy with your updates.
I was so excited to see this that I read it immediately rather than falling back asleep for a few more hours; the highest level of praise I can give.
- “made his gut churn faster” - Of course, it wouldn’t be a Severus POV scene if he didn’t have at least one attack of conscience. Silly man.
- “I have gifted you hours of living vicariously through my escapades” A dubious honour, to be sure.
- Speaking of things being raised … I am once again begging the fic rating doesnt jump to M. Severus isn’t the only one being tortured here. Soooo much tension.
- “Everything that comes from me is rich” Lol Lucius is such a prat.
- I don’t expect anything close to BTH’s level of angst, but I’m wondering if Voldie will become suspicious of Severus’ feelings, as Lucius warned he might?
- Jealous Hermione, my beloved! Love when she is trying to be sensible but can’t entirely suppress her feelings.
- “with True Love surging beneath his wings.” Cackling, such a cheesy line. Severus would be horrified.
- You do enjoy torturing the Malfoy’s, don’t you? (I love it). I’ll be interested to see if Severus can bring himself to sabotage their relationship, especially as his own ‘marriage’ blooms.
- Oh Severus, always projecting your own issues and hurting other people in the process. If only he was sensible enough to go and apologise.
- I like to think Hermione might help him devise an antidote to the regenerative potion. It would be nice to see her work on an *actual* master’s level potion.
- Severus’ anxiety attack and suicidal ideation are so well done, especially the way he pulls himself out of it by reminding himself of his duty. Very true to character.
- Loved the great hall scene! Seamus is hilarious. Poor Hermione, very wrong of her peers to intrude on her private life, I guess. But so fun for us. Really cleverly woven with her internal monologue. And what I wouldn’t give for some office action ….
- “Given the whole Death Eater thing …” Lol what an understatement.
- Harry and Ron need pull their heads out their arses, stat.
- I think I like Laria. She seems like a sensible, intelligent, compassionate witch. In fact, I almost wonder whether she’ll connect with Hermione at all (what better way to quash the rumours than appear with his wife?)… and perhaps reveal something about Severus’ youth? *cough* Lily *cough*
- And if not her, Albus is starting to get rather miffed about Severus’ shifting priorities. I wouldn’t be surprised if he lets something slip to Hermione.
- Will Hermione have to be present at the house meeting? Poor girl.
- ‘Lucius Malfoy oyster fest’ Lmao I love it.
- Very cleverly manoeuvred with the tea invitations. You can see why he’s a Slytherin.
- Severus is so protective of her now, and he doesn’t even know it. From Laizment, and Dumbledore. I’m melting. I can’t wait to see his increased tension with Albus if he keeps neglecting his spyly duties.
I’ll be excited to see Laria’s press response. And if Hermione goes to any tea parties. And of course, Sirius is still looming over the plot.
Thank you for another great chapter! I also hope you get lots of time to write but , more importantly, that you enjoy your summer!
PS: Congrats for hitting the twelfth anniversary of this fic (and thirteenth for BTH!) Your dedication is astounding, and I’m extremely thankful that you’re still bringing us so much joy with your updates.