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9/3/2012 c1 A Grammar Nazi
i hope you don't find this offensive. I think you need to work on your grammar and spelling. you need quotation marks, too. But it's a really good story! Hope this helps!
6/7/2012 c1 8Grell1FanGirl at Claude.ca
It's a good story! The only problems it has is the punctuation. in a few places there should be comas, (Don't feel bad, I still have bitch of a time with that.) And a couple of mis-spelled words. Other than that, I love it. Please continue!

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