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1/10/2013 c1 lalstice
...well, here I am, flaming your work like you told me to. Ha. Enjoy, yo.
You are supposed to put 'perspectives' in your summary. Not perspective. It's plural.
The spelling and grammar in your story is all rather good, but it doesn't make much sense.
Also, the line-breaker is a bit confusing. Try to make it less stand-outish.
Overall, tho, nice job, yo.

-Your faithful friend,
Fishie.
6/17/2012 c1 40The Ice Within
I'm not sure if that's Yamamoto's, but if it is, I don't really get it...

I love the ending.

-Icy-
6/9/2012 c1 14Cael05
I can't believe this was yet to be reviewed. I really liked it. It was short but was very amusing. Every POVs were so fun to read and I think every guardian was spot on.

So it seems it was Reborn who gave permission to Mukuro to be annoying as hell in his birthday eh? And I loved Chrome's, Yamamoto's and Lambo's reaction of Mukuro's birthday. D

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