for Unswerving Loyalty7/28/2016 c24 Guest
This was wonderful to read. I hope there's more to come!
This was wonderful to read. I hope there's more to come!
7/28/2016 c23 Guest
I usually comment at the end but I loved this chapter so much. Tony and McGee are so fun together!
I usually comment at the end but I loved this chapter so much. Tony and McGee are so fun together!
7/26/2016 c24 guest
You probably will not read this but it is a great story makes better sense than the show. Thanks for sharing.
You probably will not read this but it is a great story makes better sense than the show. Thanks for sharing.
8/7/2015 c24 bobbieturn
I just found this story and have read it all the way through - and I love it. While I wish cannon had gone this way, I have enjoyed watching this progress. You do a nice job with the dialog, too!
I just found this story and have read it all the way through - and I love it. While I wish cannon had gone this way, I have enjoyed watching this progress. You do a nice job with the dialog, too!
5/7/2015 c24 
149Lizabeth S. Tucker
If only the series had gone this route back in those awful, terrible, horrible years. Thanks for giving us what should've been canon.
149Lizabeth S. TuckerIf only the series had gone this route back in those awful, terrible, horrible years. Thanks for giving us what should've been canon.
2/27/2015 c24 Paula Galtarocha
Caged think would be an interesting idea, I can imagine Tony's concern with Tim in the women's prison and risking their lives. I'd love to see a chapter with Dog Tags, but ... Tony and Tim facing a crisis in his bromance with Tim angry with the play of the CD. I agree with the reviewer friend, is an epic and wonderful bromance, there are so many possibilities for stories that the reader is crazy about more chapters.
Caged think would be an interesting idea, I can imagine Tony's concern with Tim in the women's prison and risking their lives. I'd love to see a chapter with Dog Tags, but ... Tony and Tim facing a crisis in his bromance with Tim angry with the play of the CD. I agree with the reviewer friend, is an epic and wonderful bromance, there are so many possibilities for stories that the reader is crazy about more chapters.
2/26/2015 c24 150ytteb
You capture Tony and McGee's voices very well ... I could really picture Tony turning up with pizza and rambling but in a targeted way! So many lovely touches but I liked Tony looking wistfully at Tim's DVD collection and probably hoping that something wonderful had been added since his last visit. Great stuff!
150yttebYou capture Tony and McGee's voices very well ... I could really picture Tony turning up with pizza and rambling but in a targeted way! So many lovely touches but I liked Tony looking wistfully at Tim's DVD collection and probably hoping that something wonderful had been added since his last visit. Great stuff!
2/26/2015 c24 5Crawcolady
So happy to see an update to this story today! This is such an epic bromance story between Tim and Tony (and even includes the other's on occasion), and I just love it! Thank you!
5CrawcoladySo happy to see an update to this story today! This is such an epic bromance story between Tim and Tony (and even includes the other's on occasion), and I just love it! Thank you!
12/27/2014 c22 3SheWhoMustNotBeNamed99
Ok, so I reviewed this story earlier today and I think I came of as quite blunt, so, although I still stand with what I said, you MUST continue, please, I need to get my opinion across. This story is perhaps one of the most amazing stories I have ever read, and is my favourite NCIS fic, with a healthy dose of each character, and a lot of Tony-Tim bonding which, at the moment is literally my favourite thing ever. I don't usually write long reviews but I just felt that I needed to, so well done, this is amazing and I will be very annoyed if this is not updated soon!
3SheWhoMustNotBeNamed99Ok, so I reviewed this story earlier today and I think I came of as quite blunt, so, although I still stand with what I said, you MUST continue, please, I need to get my opinion across. This story is perhaps one of the most amazing stories I have ever read, and is my favourite NCIS fic, with a healthy dose of each character, and a lot of Tony-Tim bonding which, at the moment is literally my favourite thing ever. I don't usually write long reviews but I just felt that I needed to, so well done, this is amazing and I will be very annoyed if this is not updated soon!