
7/30/2013 c6
6InvaderPey
Wow you're gonna update this! I am not the type to forget fanfiction I read, which sucks when you read stuff that never gets updated, and I was just thinking about this the other day and woo! I bet the rewritten version will be awesome! Can't wait to read it!

Wow you're gonna update this! I am not the type to forget fanfiction I read, which sucks when you read stuff that never gets updated, and I was just thinking about this the other day and woo! I bet the rewritten version will be awesome! Can't wait to read it!
7/24/2012 c5
5Moonlight's Shadow Warrior
I definitely enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for the next. Look up the quotation marks/dialog rule because that is, in truth, the only error I see besides the occasional missing word. Anyway, love the story so far! Keep on writing!
-Moonlight's Shadow Warrior :D

I definitely enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for the next. Look up the quotation marks/dialog rule because that is, in truth, the only error I see besides the occasional missing word. Anyway, love the story so far! Keep on writing!
-Moonlight's Shadow Warrior :D
7/18/2012 c5
8TheAwesomeTaye
I really think this story is totally awesome.
I've been following it for a while, I just usually don't review.
But I know how it feels to have not alot of reviews so just wanted to say I can't wait for the next chapter!

I really think this story is totally awesome.
I've been following it for a while, I just usually don't review.
But I know how it feels to have not alot of reviews so just wanted to say I can't wait for the next chapter!
7/18/2012 c5
6InvaderPey
Ah! I think something smutty should happen between Mattie and Alfred next chapter!

Ah! I think something smutty should happen between Mattie and Alfred next chapter!