12/15/2013 c4 16BoomShroom
Goodness me, you actually updated! Well this is a special treat! My spirits have been down a bit as of recently, so seeing an update and reading it helped cheer me up. Thanks!
As for the chapter, I liked it! Looks like Ted is safe and sound (unless he's a Boo in disguise or something), and most of the gang is okay. I'm glad Goombella and Bombette were able to escape. As for Nina and the dolls, well...I'm HOPING she'll be okay. However, those creepy dolls are probably going to give her a nasty time...
Man, there may be long gaps between updates, but your quality doesn't falter. Still top notch! I also like the continued sense of eeriness you give to not just the town, but the whole fic. Just when I begin to rest easy a little bit and forget about the horrors in store for the characters, something pops in to remind me. Like the jukebox. Even though it played an upbeat tune, the sense of creepiness was still there. I could easily imagine the record slowly moving into place and the happy music starting up. Well done!
Anyways, this was a great chapter, and I thank you for it. Now, if we could only get you to post another soon...

-booMshrooM

11/8/2013 c3 ThisInactiveAfAccount
I havnt read this in a long time, still good! (im EPICYOSHI39000 BTW)

7/25/2013 c3 2ghostleon
Its good to see an update on this story, and excellent chapter by the way. Maybe now well find out the mysteries behind this seemingly abandoned town.

8/4/2012 c2 16BoomShroom
This story just keeps getting better and better.
The addition of the new characters adds to my foreboding feeling and fear of utter doom befalling them, especially since one of them was a child. But I did like how he seemed to be excited instead of fearful, like he was eager to see some monsters or ghosts instead of quivering in horror at the very thought. I didn't expect to see the two groups gang up so quickly, and that immediately gave me the impression that the story would be a lot shorter than I had hoped. Thankfully, something about what happened before the chapter ended got rid of that feeling for me. I'm really eager to also piece together the mystery of the ghost town. I was hoping that everything would start to make sense before the story ended, like the little kid standing outside when Kady woke up, and the eyeless girl. Hopefully they're not just random things thrown in to make the story scary, but you must have something planned.
Anyways, great second chapter. I really hope all of them are long like the first two. It might take time to be uploaded, but then I can immerse myself in the story without waiting for another brief chapter to come up. Keep writing!

7/29/2012 c2 ThisInactiveAfAccount
awesome and i think you forgot someone...

6/11/2012 c1 5Jones Tereka Seasight
Oh my freaking...I love you!

This is absolutely beastly!

I've read some of your other horrorfics, but this...is...just too epic! I can't wait for the next bit!

The characters seem pretty well-developed...I can kinda tell there's something up with Dan, and Nina's constant mention of nightmares is interesting...Hmm...

Oh, yeah. I think in one sentence you mistakenly used 'bare' instead of 'bear'.

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I know, I'm such a perfectionist. But really. This is amazing.

I expect more awesome DOOM to come!

Jones Tereka Seasight

6/9/2012 c1 2ghostleon
very good story so far, it's not the creey/scariest i've ever read but it still is good and i will be watching for updates