for Sun of the Archer Book II1/26/2022 c7 Doc. Spontaneous
until I read about Zoe's appearance I always imagine ld her to look like Fleur
until I read about Zoe's appearance I always imagine ld her to look like Fleur
11/3/2019 c8 Biernasek
Lol even if you made 3 book i would not read it after that ending... you just had to made this bullshit dream i just hate dreams or prophencies like that, it's disgusting for me to read fuck the fate kill Aphrodite make a harem lmao.
Lol even if you made 3 book i would not read it after that ending... you just had to made this bullshit dream i just hate dreams or prophencies like that, it's disgusting for me to read fuck the fate kill Aphrodite make a harem lmao.
12/12/2018 c5 Guest
Utterly disgusted with what you did to Harry and Anna Beth. Fuck you.
Utterly disgusted with what you did to Harry and Anna Beth. Fuck you.
8/9/2016 c1 RiceFlower
I guess you forgot to age Harry. He can't still be 13 and his sister age 4, can he?
I guess you forgot to age Harry. He can't still be 13 and his sister age 4, can he?
5/24/2015 c1 
6Mad about the Boro
Not bad, except for one mistake. During the quest in the forest, you had harry fighting 'a medusa'... there is only 1 Medusa, which they killed in the prequel. I believe you meant to say Gorgan (which is the name of the species).
I noticed several similar mistakes during book 1, though I forgot to mention them at the time... They're small, but noticable, errors in what is otherwise an awesome story.
I look forward to reading the rest.
6Mad about the BoroNot bad, except for one mistake. During the quest in the forest, you had harry fighting 'a medusa'... there is only 1 Medusa, which they killed in the prequel. I believe you meant to say Gorgan (which is the name of the species).
I noticed several similar mistakes during book 1, though I forgot to mention them at the time... They're small, but noticable, errors in what is otherwise an awesome story.
I look forward to reading the rest.
5/18/2015 c8 11nahte123456
What exactly is Harry's animagus form? Also, I like the progression of characters, but Harry seems kind of over powered a lot of the time, I'm not sure if that's because he is, or just because he almost always against weak-ish people, The few good fights he gets are either legends like Ajax, or he's already weakened/blind sided. The ending was interesting, although I don't understand why the son of the god of prophesy's would even think of calling it a nightmare, and not at least a premonition.
11nahte123456What exactly is Harry's animagus form? Also, I like the progression of characters, but Harry seems kind of over powered a lot of the time, I'm not sure if that's because he is, or just because he almost always against weak-ish people, The few good fights he gets are either legends like Ajax, or he's already weakened/blind sided. The ending was interesting, although I don't understand why the son of the god of prophesy's would even think of calling it a nightmare, and not at least a premonition.
5/13/2015 c8 37DZ2
Yikes: so is this what happened in the months Harry was missing? Could he be heading for the dark?
I can't wait to find out.
37DZ2Yikes: so is this what happened in the months Harry was missing? Could he be heading for the dark?
I can't wait to find out.
5/13/2015 c4 DZ2
Uh oh...I think Annabeth is in for it now; after all Harry's done.
By the way, I liked the Kane Chronicles cameo a few chaps back, so well done on putting them together like this.
Uh oh...I think Annabeth is in for it now; after all Harry's done.
By the way, I liked the Kane Chronicles cameo a few chaps back, so well done on putting them together like this.