for Internet Problem12/9/2017 c5 DANNI RUDIN A
Tolong ceritanya di lanjut
Tolong ceritanya di lanjut
11/28/2017 c5 DANNI RUDIN AMIN
Ayo author lanjut ceritanya ceritanya bagus .saya menanti kelanjutanyya tapi kalau bisa ending romance jeremy dan aelita di adain ya oke ,semoga cepat update kelanjutannya I wait for the continuation of this spirit story.
Ayo author lanjut ceritanya ceritanya bagus .saya menanti kelanjutanyya tapi kalau bisa ending romance jeremy dan aelita di adain ya oke ,semoga cepat update kelanjutannya I wait for the continuation of this spirit story.
10/27/2015 c1 X.A.N.A
Kalian harus menyerah
Kalian harus menyerah
8/27/2015 c1 ULRICH STERN
Bagus ni fan fic nanti coba buat yang seru
Bagus ni fan fic nanti coba buat yang seru
5/4/2015 c2 sierra mccaulley
Saki, aku suka banget ama cerita fanfic punyamu. Tapi kenapa sampai ch 5 aja. Aku ketagihan mau baca terus loo. Oh ya tambahin karakter baru yang bakal jadi adik angkat yumi dari dunia manusia ke dunia kartun donk. Siapa tahu dia bakal jadi pacar william dunbar
Saki, aku suka banget ama cerita fanfic punyamu. Tapi kenapa sampai ch 5 aja. Aku ketagihan mau baca terus loo. Oh ya tambahin karakter baru yang bakal jadi adik angkat yumi dari dunia manusia ke dunia kartun donk. Siapa tahu dia bakal jadi pacar william dunbar
7/10/2014 c1 Fadhli
Oh,iya ulrich jangan mau nonton konser sama sisi sama yumi aja ya kumohon
Oh,iya ulrich jangan mau nonton konser sama sisi sama yumi aja ya kumohon
1/15/2014 c4 Gyanska Zalfa KS
Thanks, Saki buat cerpen-nya. Aku suka seeh. Tapi kok, kamu bisa di sumpel pakai monster block?. Oh, iya, sory kalau ngomongnya di sini. Chapter 5 introgasinya apaan?. Tolong lanjutino ceritano nyo, yo. I Like It!
Thanks, Saki buat cerpen-nya. Aku suka seeh. Tapi kok, kamu bisa di sumpel pakai monster block?. Oh, iya, sory kalau ngomongnya di sini. Chapter 5 introgasinya apaan?. Tolong lanjutino ceritano nyo, yo. I Like It!
1/15/2014 c5 Gyanska Zalfa KS
I like Yumi, tapi, emang kok, harus Yumi yang lukato?
I like Yumi, tapi, emang kok, harus Yumi yang lukato?
10/17/2013 c5 Shinzui Rikatoka
Lanjutin lagi dong fic nya, seru lho
Lanjutin lagi dong fic nya, seru lho
10/17/2013 c4 a1440819gmail.c
cara memasukan kode lyoko
cara memasukan kode lyoko
5/6/2013 c5 darkxana
knp gk bwt lgi buat lnjut crta
knp gk bwt lgi buat lnjut crta
1/24/2013 c5 Emir Marhaen
Seru ceritamu, Yusaki! Coba produsen film Code Lyoko ngambil ceritamu uk dijadikan salah satu episode. Pasti seru banget! O ya, Tapi kayaknya bacanya gak enak deh kalau model paragrafnya 'Center'. Saya sarankan ditulis dalam model paragraf Align Left atau boleh juga Justify. Lanjutin lagi ya ceritanya...
Seru ceritamu, Yusaki! Coba produsen film Code Lyoko ngambil ceritamu uk dijadikan salah satu episode. Pasti seru banget! O ya, Tapi kayaknya bacanya gak enak deh kalau model paragrafnya 'Center'. Saya sarankan ditulis dalam model paragraf Align Left atau boleh juga Justify. Lanjutin lagi ya ceritanya...
1/18/2013 c1 Dasa Zebta
Kak Saki, I should suggest you to put a tittle on your chapter. It could make your story more comfortable to read. It's just a suggestion, not flame! I was just a new user in and do not know everything about publishing a story but honestly your stories are cool!
Kak Saki, I should suggest you to put a tittle on your chapter. It could make your story more comfortable to read. It's just a suggestion, not flame! I was just a new user in and do not know everything about publishing a story but honestly your stories are cool!
1/18/2013 c5 Dasa Zebta
That's a cool story, kak Saki! It was very cool, imagine that all Internet connections could be broken because of X.A.N.A. Unfortunately, this is a multichapter story, so I have to wait for you to write the next chapter. Keep writing, kak Saki!
That's a cool story, kak Saki! It was very cool, imagine that all Internet connections could be broken because of X.A.N.A. Unfortunately, this is a multichapter story, so I have to wait for you to write the next chapter. Keep writing, kak Saki!