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6/13/2012 c2 70Scruff the Rat
Good chapter in my opinion. Just be careful not to repeat some words over and over like "fun" and "kiss." Try mixing up the vocab a bit, okay? ;)
6/12/2012 c2 4The Speedy Hero
I love it!
6/12/2012 c2 Jake
Awesome!keep up the good work btw Bree should fall in love with vitaly!
6/12/2012 c2 Leopard
Ok, There HAS to be a Vitaly x Oc in this. Age has no affect in love. (And I don't think a lot of people are going to give up on thinking Bree with Vitaly.) But this is a really good chapter.
6/11/2012 c1 4Bloody Penguin
Cute! Please update soon!
6/10/2012 c1 1CreativeConcussion
Chapter 2! Chapter 2!
6/10/2012 c1 4The Speedy Hero
Beautiful and Shocking
6/10/2012 c1 70Scruff the Rat
A little too quick...but nice handle on story...will there be some VitalyxOC as well by any chance?
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