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1/24/2016 c1 18snowwflight
The way you wrote in second person made the entire story so much more relatable, and I could just feel the despair and agony in it. You wrote this really well! Great job!
1/20/2015 c1 1ZSAVASZ
This is amazing! So sad... I wish there were more story's like this!
11/9/2013 c1 Insert Name
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Gahhh!

Why u mak me cry!?

Ugh!

( You can tell I'm upset because I normally don't use bad grammer.)

It's actually a very well written story. I think that we're all just a little depressed that you practically killed Nagihiko. Your story kinda has that, "sad but true", air about it. All in all, I'm impressed.
8/19/2013 c1 2Demoleon
Wow. Do you hate Nagi or something lol cause you keep making him the victim to suffering and death and tragedy. But I love sad stories. There's just something about that deeper overwhelming emotion that just speaks to me. I love your writing style though so please write more!
6/26/2013 c1 angel bunnies
Aww...it was really sad but cute! Great job! :)
5/2/2013 c1 MasterofYou
Yeah, too lazy to log in. :p This is good and I really think this could be a good story like, Nagi wakes up and has amnesia or something. Impressive as always

MasterofYou
4/13/2013 c1 washiwashimurder
I almost started crying ;n; which I rarely do when reading fanfiction...
So beautiful Dx
Going to listen to Hatsune Miku now...
-Cricket
10/6/2012 c1 Tish95
You need more readers.
6/12/2012 c1 3Evidence Of Rain
I'm very sorry for your loss, that must've been hard.

That was intense. Everything about it made me feel like it was actually happening to me. I swear there are tears in my eyes right now. It was beautifully written, I don't think it could be done any better.

You're really good at writing second person, I'm very jealous. I can't write in second person at all, but I love reading it. You write really well!

I spotted one error up there, in the sentence "Your calls to the hospital, wanting to know when visitor's are allowed". It should be 'visitors' instead of 'visitor's'. But that's all that I saw, so good job.

I'm really looking forward to seeing what you come out with next! Great job, keep writing please!

Rainy
6/12/2012 c1 4Sir Rigby
3 keep writing
6/10/2012 c1 Cutevampkitten03
Omg so sad! Amu can be such a *****! It was acrually really good... But sad...

-sandy

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