for What makes you beautiful Miki a Miru fan fiction2/18/2013 c1 Guest
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8/24/2012 c1 
107claraowl
Hiya!
The plot was basically good; however, you might want to brush up on punctuation, sentence structure, and problem words ("Than" vs "Then").
Also, when a new person begins to speak, you should begin a new paragraph.
I loved it, though! I like how Your just gave up on the mushy stuff. :) It was very him.
Btw, thanks for reviewing!
btw... Are they charas or people in this?
107claraowlHiya!
The plot was basically good; however, you might want to brush up on punctuation, sentence structure, and problem words ("Than" vs "Then").
Also, when a new person begins to speak, you should begin a new paragraph.
I loved it, though! I like how Your just gave up on the mushy stuff. :) It was very him.
Btw, thanks for reviewing!
btw... Are they charas or people in this?
7/2/2012 c1 Guest
So cute! I love it you have talent girl!
So cute! I love it you have talent girl!
6/26/2012 c1 Sarah
That rocked'!'!
That rocked'!'!
6/14/2012 c1 Pink pather
That rocked!;)
That rocked!;)
6/11/2012 c1 ALL HAIL CHOCOLATE
Oooooooh I love this make more fanfictions pleeeeeeeeeaaaassseeeee!
Oooooooh I love this make more fanfictions pleeeeeeeeeaaaassseeeee!