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7/25/2013 c7 8DarkArrow225
OMG, no way! Ok, gimme a sec to get over that last sentence. *Pauses* Ok, I wanna cry! That was so perfect, the song, Danny talking to him, Sid and Sheldon's talk...perfecto...just...wonderful.
7/25/2013 c3 DarkArrow225
I have three words and only three words...oh-my-God! Ok, this is really super awesome, so I gotta finish reading this!
10/6/2012 c10 Guest
What a wonderful end to an exhilerating and suspenseful story. Keep up the awesome work. Congrats to your beta on a job well done. Now for the next story - bring it on ladies.
10/6/2012 c1 jean marie
this really very g
ood keep it up love it
10/7/2012 c10 The account is deleted
Wow, what a great final chapter. I'm glad you've brought everyone together in the last chapter, and Mac gets to be happy with Christine - he deserves it after what he's been through. Very nice! Waiting for the next story now ... Swarovski ;D
10/7/2012 c9 The account is deleted
Just catching up on my reading, CSIflea - I love the way you've finished this story. Well done! Moving on quickly to the epilogue. ;D
10/5/2012 c10 tlh45
I loved the ending and what a perfect song. I have that c.d. as a matter of fact. Looking forward to your next story!
10/5/2012 c9 tlh45
Love how Mac treated Freddie and how you added Christine to the story as his girlfriend. I like Christine.
9/4/2012 c8 Guest
Okay! Firstly, thank you for updating your story. Secondly, its kinda good that you're keeping the suspense going and our adreneline pumping. Which brings me to point number three. How the hell can you end the chapter like that? You know you have to update very soon now. Great job on the writing. Keep it up!
9/4/2012 c8 kampie
Grrrrr
9/5/2012 c8 10Catty
Run fast.
Actually run fast towards your computer and post the next chapter as soon as poss.
You write so well, reeling us into feeling happy and positive and looking forwards in the story and then grab the rug and pull it out from under us. Fabulous chapter, but seriously, post the next chapter. Now. Please!
C
9/4/2012 c8 tlh45
Well, we all know who was killed..don't we? Please don't make us wait long to find out!
9/4/2012 c8 Brian Marcus Burton
Aww you write Mac sooo well. Loving this fic, I'm just gonna say... that heart had better not have been Mac's or Danny's! Hint, hint.
Please update soon!
8/11/2012 c7 Guest
Waiting, next chapter please, ...
8/1/2012 c7 Allan
OMG! Another awesome chapter from this author. This is really turning out to be a brilliantly marvelous story. I love the description of Macs wounds and how Danny was motivating him to come back "home". Keep up with the writing. Can't wait to read more. Bring it on.
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