for Newton's 3rd Law7/1/2012 c4 Guest
Another awesome chapter from you. Well done! I love the way you keep the suspense flowing. Keep it up. Can't wait to read more.
Another awesome chapter from you. Well done! I love the way you keep the suspense flowing. Keep it up. Can't wait to read more.
6/27/2012 c3 tlh45
Oh..poor Mac. I wonder if Danny knows who he is talking about and how much more will Mac have to endure before they find him? Please update again soon.
Oh..poor Mac. I wonder if Danny knows who he is talking about and how much more will Mac have to endure before they find him? Please update again soon.
6/20/2012 c2 
8BnBfanatic
Love the story so far, nothing better than Mac whump! But I hope the length of chapters get longer cuz I hate really short chapters like this cuz it makes the story read choppy and you don't even have time to get into the scene before the chapter is over.
8BnBfanaticLove the story so far, nothing better than Mac whump! But I hope the length of chapters get longer cuz I hate really short chapters like this cuz it makes the story read choppy and you don't even have time to get into the scene before the chapter is over.
6/20/2012 c2 The account is deleted
Hi there CSIflea, I think you're off to a very good start, and you're doing very well with the English. The connection between Mac and the Messers sounds intriguing - can't wait to find out what that is all about. Yikes, I sure hope Mac survives his ordeal ... I look forward to your next chapter! :D
Hi there CSIflea, I think you're off to a very good start, and you're doing very well with the English. The connection between Mac and the Messers sounds intriguing - can't wait to find out what that is all about. Yikes, I sure hope Mac survives his ordeal ... I look forward to your next chapter! :D
6/20/2012 c2 tlh45
Wow...you definitely know how to write a torture scene. I love Mac danger and you doing it well. Please continue, very interesting so far. Can't wait to see what it's all about.
Wow...you definitely know how to write a torture scene. I love Mac danger and you doing it well. Please continue, very interesting so far. Can't wait to see what it's all about.
6/18/2012 c1 29afrozenheart412
I hope you do, because this is intriguing! I wonder what Lindsay has to do with Mac's survival? And how Danny deals with it. I love the touches of Don running into the old woman and her trolley, LOL, poor man! He can never seem to stay on his feet in these situations. :D More please!
By the way, I like you name! :)
29afrozenheart412I hope you do, because this is intriguing! I wonder what Lindsay has to do with Mac's survival? And how Danny deals with it. I love the touches of Don running into the old woman and her trolley, LOL, poor man! He can never seem to stay on his feet in these situations. :D More please!
By the way, I like you name! :)
6/13/2012 c1 Allan
AWESOME! Great start from you. Very exciting and riddled with suspense. I can't wait to read the next chapter that's going to flow from your pen. My only negative remark -ITS TO SHORT. Keep up the great writing though. I thoroughly enjoy it. Coming from someone who's not a bookworm, that should say something
AWESOME! Great start from you. Very exciting and riddled with suspense. I can't wait to read the next chapter that's going to flow from your pen. My only negative remark -ITS TO SHORT. Keep up the great writing though. I thoroughly enjoy it. Coming from someone who's not a bookworm, that should say something