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7/1/2012 c4 Guest
Another awesome chapter from you. Well done! I love the way you keep the suspense flowing. Keep it up. Can't wait to read more.
6/28/2012 c3 cornish pasties
vindictive, but OK, go with it what happen's next to my boy?
6/27/2012 c3 tlh45
Oh..poor Mac. I wonder if Danny knows who he is talking about and how much more will Mac have to endure before they find him? Please update again soon.
6/20/2012 c2 8BnBfanatic
Love the story so far, nothing better than Mac whump! But I hope the length of chapters get longer cuz I hate really short chapters like this cuz it makes the story read choppy and you don't even have time to get into the scene before the chapter is over.
6/20/2012 c2 The account is deleted
Hi there CSIflea, I think you're off to a very good start, and you're doing very well with the English. The connection between Mac and the Messers sounds intriguing - can't wait to find out what that is all about. Yikes, I sure hope Mac survives his ordeal ... I look forward to your next chapter! :D
6/20/2012 c2 tlh45 definitely know how to write a torture scene. I love Mac danger and you doing it well. Please continue, very interesting so far. Can't wait to see what it's all about.
6/18/2012 c1 29afrozenheart412
I hope you do, because this is intriguing! I wonder what Lindsay has to do with Mac's survival? And how Danny deals with it. I love the touches of Don running into the old woman and her trolley, LOL, poor man! He can never seem to stay on his feet in these situations. :D More please!

By the way, I like you name! :)
6/13/2012 c1 Allan
AWESOME! Great start from you. Very exciting and riddled with suspense. I can't wait to read the next chapter that's going to flow from your pen. My only negative remark -ITS TO SHORT. Keep up the great writing though. I thoroughly enjoy it. Coming from someone who's not a bookworm, that should say something
6/13/2012 c1 tlh45
Oh No! Whats happened to Mac? Please continue!
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